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--->Excel: We'll use the fire escape to confuse observers!
--->Elgala: FOR GOD'S SAKE SENIOR!
--->Elgala: FOR GOD'S SAKE SENIOR!
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--> '''Excel''': Pedro, you idiot! ''(punches him twice)''\\
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-->'''Watanabe''': And why do I feel as if someone out there is playing games with my destiny?!\\
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--> '''Hyatt''': ''(sounding sweet as usual)'' Those imitations are quite annoying.
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** Introducing the audience to [[GagBoobs Oppai]] Loli.
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** Introducing the audience to [[GagBoobs Oppai]] Oppai Loli.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* Welcome to Episode 26, [[TooHotForTV Going Too Far]]. Not so much an exercise in [[CrossesTheLineTwice crossing the line]], but [[TraumaCongaLine shooting the line in the knee, tossing it in a shallow grave, raping its mother and not paying the alimony.]] RefugeInAudacity UpToEleven. Let us count the ways:
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* Welcome to Episode 26, [[TooHotForTV Going Too Far]]. Not so much an exercise in [[CrossesTheLineTwice crossing the line]], but [[TraumaCongaLine shooting the line in the knee, tossing it in a shallow grave, raping its mother and not paying the alimony.]] RefugeInAudacity UpToEleven.up to eleven. Let us count the ways:
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* How Episode 23, a parody of ''Anime/FistOfTheNorthStar'', starts.
-->'''Narrator''': The future! 199-
-->'''Excel''': IT'S ALREADY PASSED!
-->'''Narrator''': The future! 199-
-->'''Excel''': IT'S ALREADY PASSED!
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** [[SirSwearsALot More cussing than an NwA album.]]
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** [[SirSwearsALot More cussing than an NwA N.W.A. album.]]
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Removed a blatant attempt at shoehorning in a reference to the site.
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* The DatingSim parody episode had a couple of gems.
-->Your girlfriend is currently browsing the list of Funny Moments in ''Anime/ExcelSaga'', and wants you to take a look. What do you want to do?
-->A. Input your own favorite anecdote
-->B. Tell her to [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife stop wasting her time on that website]]
-->C. [[RunningGag Put it in]]
-->The answer, of course, is always "C".
-->Your girlfriend is currently browsing the list of Funny Moments in ''Anime/ExcelSaga'', and wants you to take a look. What do you want to do?
-->A. Input your own favorite anecdote
-->B. Tell her to [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife stop wasting her time on that website]]
-->C. [[RunningGag Put it in]]
-->The answer, of course, is always "C".
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* The DatingSim parody episode had a couple of gems.
-->Your girlfriend is currently browsing the list of Funny Moments in ''Anime/ExcelSaga'', and wants you to take a look. What do you want to do?
-->A. Input your own favorite anecdote
-->B. Tell her to [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife stop wasting her time on that website]]
-->C. [[RunningGag Put it in]]
-->The answer, of course, is always "C".gems:
-->Your girlfriend is currently browsing the list of Funny Moments in ''Anime/ExcelSaga'', and wants you to take a look. What do you want to do?
-->A. Input your own favorite anecdote
-->B. Tell her to [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife stop wasting her time on that website]]
-->C. [[RunningGag Put it in]]
-->The answer, of course, is always "C".
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-->'''Iwata''': (Having seen Ropponmatsu kill Watanabe) You murdered hi...\\
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-->'''Iwata''': (Having ''(having seen Ropponmatsu kill Watanabe) Watanabe)'' You murdered hi...\\
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'''Ropponmatsu''': (Disturbingly cheerful) I'll bet they kill again!
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'''Ropponmatsu''': (Disturbingly cheerful) ''(disturbingly cheerful)'' I'll bet they kill again!
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-->'''Elgala''': Senior! Please Listen! I, Elgala, *reader turns page* [[SkewedPriorities will be your senior in Hell!]] *splash*
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-->'''Elgala''': Senior! Please Listen! listen! I, Elgala, *reader turns page* [[SkewedPriorities will be your senior in Hell!]] *splash*''(splash)''
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* At the start of the sports episode, we get the sight of Ilpalazzo waving a tiny flag and saying, in the most deadpan voice he has ever used, "Japan."
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* At the start of the sports episode, we get the sight of Ilpalazzo waving a tiny flag and saying, [[FlatJoy in the most deadpan voice he has ever used, used]], "Japan."
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*** Funnier if you've played the classic dating sim ''VisualNovel/TokimekiMemorial'', which uses cherry-bomb icons to indicate when a girl is very unhappy with the protagonist.
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** [[TooSoon Using recent gas-killings as a gag]].
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** [[TooSoon Using recent gas-killings as a gag]].gag.