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--> '''Francis''': Who is this?
--> '''Marie''': ''[overjoyed]'' I'm guessing the Comtesse de Lancret.
--> '''Francis''': ...who?
--> '''Marie''': ''[overjoyed]'' I'm guessing the Comtesse de Lancret.
--> '''Francis''': ...who?
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--> '''Francis''': Who is this?
that?
--> '''Marie''':''[overjoyed]'' I'm guessing ''[happily]'' My guess would be the Comtesse de Lancret.
-->'''Francis''': ...'''Francis''': Ah. ''[Beat]'' The who?
--> '''Marie''':
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** Marguerite and her mother embracing when Henry calls off the wedding, believing she still has a chance to marry the Prince.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their squabbling is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed purple and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool dye vat at the end, saying that their squabbling is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed stained purple and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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** Then horse Laurent neighs abd eats a carrot.
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** Then horse Laurent neighs abd and eats a carrot.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed purple and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing squabbling is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed purple and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed magenta and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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* The head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed magenta purple and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.amused.
** Even better is that both of them are dyed purple from the dye; at the time, purple was expensive and only available to the royalty. Rodmilla and Marguerite are wearing purple, but not at all as they imagined that they would.
** Additionally, dying and washing fabric involved urine to remove stains and keep the colors from running during washing.
** Even better is that both of them are dyed purple from the dye; at the time, purple was expensive and only available to the royalty. Rodmilla and Marguerite are wearing purple, but not at all as they imagined that they would.
** Additionally, dying and washing fabric involved urine to remove stains and keep the colors from running during washing.
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* The laundry lady knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed magenta.
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* The laundry lady head washerwoman knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end, saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. They are now dyed magenta.magenta and the other washerwomen are clearly amused.
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** Then Horse Laurent ate a carrot.
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** Then Horse horse Laurent ate neighs abd eats a carrot.
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* When no one is willing to speak on Rodmilla's behalf at the end, she weakly claims that several people are out of town.
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* When no one is willing to speak on Rodmilla's behalf at the end, she weakly claims that several people are "must be out of town. town."
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* "I shall deny you the crown and... live forever!"
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* "I shall deny you the crown and... live live... forever!"
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-->'''Henry''': Mother, Father, I want to build a University, with the largest library on the continent, where anyone can study, no matter their station!
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-->'''Henry''': Mother, Father, I want to build a University, university, with the largest library on the continent, where anyone can study, no matter their station!
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** The whole wedding is played more like a funeral, with the distraught princess and the room full of noblewomen who've lost their chance at marrying the prince.
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* Danielle makes her triumphant appearance at the masque:
--> '''Francis''': Who is this?
--> '''Marie''': ''[overjoyed]'' I'm guessing the Comtesse de Lancret.
--> '''Francis''': ...who?
--> '''Francis''': Who is this?
--> '''Marie''': ''[overjoyed]'' I'm guessing the Comtesse de Lancret.
--> '''Francis''': ...who?
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** Complemented the absurd declaration, there's Henry deflating the impact of the threat: "[[TheUnishment Good! I don't]] '''''[[TheUnishment want]]''''' [[TheUnishment it]]!"
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** Complemented the absurd declaration, there's Henry deflating the impact of the threat: "[[TheUnishment Good! Good! Agreed! I don't]] '''''[[TheUnishment want]]''''' [[TheUnishment it]]!"
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* "The only throne I want her (Marguerite) sitting on is the one I have to clean every day!"
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* Doubles as Awesome, the laundry lady knocking Rodmilla and Marguerite into the laundry pool at the end saying that their arguing is getting on her nerves. As a result, they are literally dyed purple.
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* Danielle's conversation with Paulette, one of the housemaids, about Marguerite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, Paulette warns against TemptingFate, as she'd rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with Paulette, one of the housemaids, about Marguerite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she Danielle proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, Paulette warns against TemptingFate, as she'd rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Marguerite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against TemptingFate, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
--> The only throne I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
--> The only throne I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant Paulette, one of the housemaids, about Marguerite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant Paulette warns against TemptingFate, as she's she'd rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
--> -->'''Paulette:''' The only throne I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
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--> The only seat I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
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--> The only seat throne I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Margarite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against TemptingFate, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Margarite's Marguerite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against TemptingFate, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Margarite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against such blasphemy, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Margarite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against such blasphemy, TemptingFate, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
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* Danielle's conversation with a servant about Margarite's ambitions to marry Prince Henry. Viewing him more like a [[JerkJock callous jerk]], she proclaims they're meant for each other. In response, the servant warns against such blasphemy, as she's rather not imagine France's [[AlphaBitch biggest]] [[SpoiledBrat brat]] [[FridgeHorror ruling the country]]. This line seals it:
--> The only seat I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
--> The only seat I want her sitting on is [[ToiletHumor the one I have to clean out every day]].
