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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Chrysalis daughters quickly realize that kidnapping and bringing [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle, personal protege of Celestia and practically a daughter to her, into their lair might not have been the best idea]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Chrysalis Chrysalis's daughters quickly realize that kidnapping and bringing [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle, personal protege of Celestia and practically a daughter to her, into their lair might not have been the best idea]]
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* ObsessedWithFood: Rarity just ''loves'' fruit bats. She didn't know what her favorite food in the hive was called and when told, her first reaction is to be horrified she never tried to catch and cook fruit bat colony in Sweet Apple Acres.
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* ObsessedWithFood: Rarity just ''loves'' fruit bats. She didn't know what her favorite food in the hive was called and when told, her first reaction is to be horrified she never tried to catch and cook the fruit bat colony in Sweet Apple Acres.
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* FamilyThemeNaming: Chrysalis and her sisters Pupa and and Cocoon are all named after transitory stages in insects.
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* FamilyThemeNaming: Chrysalis and her sisters Pupa and and Cocoon are all named after transitory stages in insects.
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* ObsessedWithFood: Rarity just ''loves'' fruit bats. She didn't know what her favorite food in the hive was called and when told, her first reaction is to be horrified she never tried to catch and cook fruit bat colony in Sweet Apple Aches.
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* ObsessedWithFood: Rarity just ''loves'' fruit bats. She didn't know what her favorite food in the hive was called and when told, her first reaction is to be horrified she never tried to catch and cook fruit bat colony in Sweet Apple Aches.Acres.
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* TheCoup: [[spoiler:Three daughters of Chrysalis launch one in ''Extended Family''.]] It's not very well tought out.
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* TheCoup: [[spoiler:Three daughters of Chrysalis launch one in ''Extended Family''.]] It's not very well tought thought out.
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** In ''Extended Family'', [[spoiler:Rarity forgets the plan to sneak into the hive and drops her disguise by accident when she gets a chance to snack o nthem]]
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** In ''Extended Family'', [[spoiler:Rarity forgets the plan to sneak into the hive and drops her disguise by accident when she gets a chance to snack o nthem]]on them]]
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: When Chryssalis mother was killed by a griffon assassin, the celebrations lasted for weeks. Chryssalis states that had the griffon been a changeling, the assassin would have been made the new ruler on the spot.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: When Chryssalis Chrysalis' mother was killed by a griffon assassin, the celebrations lasted for weeks. Chryssalis Chrysalis states that had the griffon been a changeling, the assassin would have been made the new ruler on the spot.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Chryssalis daughters quickly realize that kidnapping and bringing [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle, personal protege of Celestia and practically a daughter to her, into their lair might not have been the best idea]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Events of ''Extended Family'' set off because [[spoiler:Arachne, Araci and Phasmi think that Chryssalis had decided to make Thysa the next queen and will kill them. Which is exact opposite of Chryssalis intentions.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Events of ''Extended Family'' set off because [[spoiler:Arachne, Araci and Phasmi think that Chryssalis had decided to make Thysa the next queen and will kill them. Which is exact opposite of Chryssalis intentions.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Chryssalis Chrysalis daughters quickly realize that kidnapping and bringing [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle, personal protege of Celestia and practically a daughter to her, into their lair might not have been the best idea]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Events of ''Extended Family'' set off because [[spoiler:Arachne, Araci and Phasmi think thatChryssalis Chrysalis had decided to make Thysa the next queen and will kill them. Which is exact opposite of Chryssalis Chrysalis' intentions.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Events of ''Extended Family'' set off because [[spoiler:Arachne, Araci and Phasmi think that
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* TheChessmaster: Chryssalis. [[spoiler: Or at least that is what her daughters think. In reality she is content on watching three of them make fools of themselves, having done ''nothing'' to actually stop them until the end]]
* TheChessmaster: Chryssalis. [[spoiler: Or at least that is what her daughters think. In reality she is content on watching three of them make fools of themselves, having done ''nothing'' to actually stop them until the end]]
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* TheCoup: [[spoiler:Three daughters of Chryssalis Chrysalis launch one in ''Extended Family''.]] It's not very well tought out.
* TheChessmaster:Chryssalis.Chrysalis. [[spoiler: Or at least that is what her daughters think. In reality she is content on watching three of them make fools of themselves, having done ''nothing'' to actually stop them until the end]]
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* {{Unishment}}: Chryssalis decrees that her rebellious daughters [[spoiler:no-longer need to go on pointless quest or compete. Instead of fighting to the death, they shall rule together after she passes.]] Actual proper punishment comes in form of civil service in Ponyville.
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* {{Unishment}}: Chryssalis Chrysalis decrees that her rebellious daughters [[spoiler:no-longer need to go on pointless quest or compete. Instead of fighting to the death, they shall rule together after she passes.]] Actual proper punishment comes in form of civil service in Ponyville.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: When Chryssalis mother was killed by a griffon assassin, the celebrations lasted for weeks. Chryssalis states that had the griffon been a changeling, the assassin would have been made the new ruler on the spot.
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* ObsessedWithFood: Rarity just ''loves'' fruit bats. She didn't know what her favorite food in the hive was called and when told, her first reaction is to be horrified she never tried to catch and cook fruit bat colony in Sweet Apple Aches.
** In ''Extended Family'', [[spoiler:Rarity forgets the plan to sneak into the hive and drops her disguise by accident when she gets a chance to snack o nthem]]
** [[spoiler:Sweetie Bell]] seems to also have preferences for them in ''Extended Family''
* TheCoup: [[spoiler:Three daughters of Chryssalis launch one in ''Extended Family''.]] It's not very well tought out.
* TheChessmaster: Chryssalis. [[spoiler: Or at least that is what her daughters think. In reality she is content on watching three of them make fools of themselves, having done ''nothing'' to actually stop them until the end]]
** In ''Extended Family'', [[spoiler:Rarity forgets the plan to sneak into the hive and drops her disguise by accident when she gets a chance to snack o nthem]]
** [[spoiler:Sweetie Bell]] seems to also have preferences for them in ''Extended Family''
* TheCoup: [[spoiler:Three daughters of Chryssalis launch one in ''Extended Family''.]] It's not very well tought out.
* TheChessmaster: Chryssalis. [[spoiler: Or at least that is what her daughters think. In reality she is content on watching three of them make fools of themselves, having done ''nothing'' to actually stop them until the end]]
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* {{Unishment}}: Chryssalis decrees that her rebellious daughters [[spoiler:no-longer need to go on pointless quest or compete. Instead of fighting to the death, they shall rule together after she passes.]] Actual proper punishment comes in form of civil service in Ponyville.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31089/the-three-sisters The Three Sisters]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that takes place after the royal wedding. It now has three sequels, which are in order, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30204/what-if-rarity-from-the-three-sisters-met-with-chrysalis What if: Rarity from The Three Sisters met with Chrysalis]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35704/the-three-sisters-extended-family The Three Sisters: Extended Family]], and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/197565/the-three-sisters-like-fudge The Three Sisters: Like Fudge]].
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Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected as it expels Chrysalis and her changelings out of Canterlot: A secret kept from everypony for several years...
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Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected as it expels Chrysalis and her changelings out of Canterlot: Canterlot. A secret kept from everypony for several years...
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* AlternateUniverse: The story differs from canon directly after Chrysalis is repelled from Canterlot.
** And as it turns out, there was a divergence on the day the Mane Six got their cutie marks.
** And as it turns out, there was a divergence on the day the Mane Six got their cutie marks.
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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverse:
** The storydiffers from follows canon directly after until Chrysalis is repelled from Canterlot.
Canterlot, at which point [[spoiler:Rarity's status as a changeling]] is revealed.
** And as it turns out, there was a divergence on the day the Mane Six got their cutiemarks.marks, as [[spoiler:Rarity, as well as the changeling sisters Cocoon, Chrysalis and Pupa were involved in an accident that forced Cocoon to sacrifice her own life to fuse the fatally injured Pupa and Rarity so that they could survive]].
** The story
** And as it turns out, there was a divergence on the day the Mane Six got their cutie
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31089/the-three-sisters The Three Sisters]] is a fanfic that takes place after the royal wedding. It now has three sequels, which are in order, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30204/what-if-rarity-from-the-three-sisters-met-with-chrysalis What if: Rarity from The Three Sisters met with Chrysalis]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35704/the-three-sisters-extended-family The Three Sisters: Extended Family]], and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/197565/the-three-sisters-like-fudge The Three Sisters: Like Fudge]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31089/the-three-sisters The Three Sisters]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that takes place after the royal wedding. It now has three sequels, which are in order, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30204/what-if-rarity-from-the-three-sisters-met-with-chrysalis What if: Rarity from The Three Sisters met with Chrysalis]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35704/the-three-sisters-extended-family The Three Sisters: Extended Family]], and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/197565/the-three-sisters-like-fudge The Three Sisters: Like Fudge]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: The Diamond Dogs have no issue with eating sentient creatures.
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* ImAHumanitarian: The Diamond Dogs have no issue with eating sentient creatures.creatures, like Rarity and Pupa.
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* AbusiveParent: Queen Metamorpha makes it pretty clear that if her children disappoint her, she'd kill them.
** And as it turns out, there was a divergence on the day the Mane Six got their cutie marks.
* BadBoss: Chrysalis sees no problem with "disposing" of a drone with a broken leg.
* BadBoss: Chrysalis sees no problem with "disposing" of a drone with a broken leg.
* DiggingYourselfDeeper: Rainbow Dash's attempts to compliment Rarity fail spectacularly.
* EmotionEater: As [[spoiler:Rarity explains]], Changelings don't need to steal love, especially not with friends and family nearby.
* EmotionEater: As [[spoiler:Rarity explains]], Changelings don't need to steal love, especially not with friends and family nearby.
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* ImAHumanitarian: The Diamond Dogs have no issue with eating sentient creatures.creatures.
* ModestRoyalty: [[spoiler:Rarity doesn't want to be called a princess, even though she is one.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Rarity is, and always has been, a Changeling.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: The Diamond Dog pack are perfectly willing to kill, cook and eat two fillies.
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* ModestRoyalty: [[spoiler:Rarity doesn't want to be called a princess, even though she is one.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Rarity is, and always has been, a Changeling.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: The Diamond Dog pack are perfectly willing to kill, cook and eat two fillies.
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* CerberusRetcon: CerebusRetcon
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[:Cocoon sacrifices herself to [[FusionDance fuse Pupa and Rarity together]] in order to save them both]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[:Cocoon [[spoiler:Cocoon sacrifices herself to [[FusionDance fuse Pupa and Rarity together]] in order to save them both]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31089/the-three-sisters The Three Sisters]] is a fanfic that takes place after the royal wedding. It now has three sequels, which are in order, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30204/what-if-rarity-from-the-three-sisters-met-with-chrysalis What if: Rarity from The Three Sisters met with Chrysalis]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35704/the-three-sisters-extended-family The Three Sisters: Extended Family]], and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/197565/the-three-sisters-like-fudge The Three Sisters: Like Fudge]].
Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected as it expels Chrysalis and her changelings out of Canterlot: A secret kept from everypony for several years...
!!Tropes in The Three Sisters:
* AlternateUniverse: The story differs from canon directly after Chrysalis is repelled from Canterlot.
* CerberusRetcon:
* FamilyThemeNaming: Chrysalis and her sisters Pupa and and Cocoon are all named after transitory stages in insects.
* FusionDance: [[spoiler: Cocoon sacrifices herself to fuse Pupa and Rarity together in order to save them both]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[:Cocoon sacrifices herself to [[FusionDance fuse Pupa and Rarity together]] in order to save them both]].
* ImAHumanitarian: The Diamond Dogs have no issue with eating sentient creatures.
Shining Armor and Cadence's spell reveals something completely unexpected as it expels Chrysalis and her changelings out of Canterlot: A secret kept from everypony for several years...
!!Tropes in The Three Sisters:
* AlternateUniverse: The story differs from canon directly after Chrysalis is repelled from Canterlot.
* CerberusRetcon:
* FamilyThemeNaming: Chrysalis and her sisters Pupa and and Cocoon are all named after transitory stages in insects.
* FusionDance: [[spoiler: Cocoon sacrifices herself to fuse Pupa and Rarity together in order to save them both]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[:Cocoon sacrifices herself to [[FusionDance fuse Pupa and Rarity together]] in order to save them both]].
* ImAHumanitarian: The Diamond Dogs have no issue with eating sentient creatures.
