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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Despite his cheery disposition, Steven harbors much emotional turmoil over the events that happened in his world. [[spoiler:He shows homesickness more than once, mentioning his dad and Connie on more than one occasion]]. He was even apart of the huge epic battle that eventually led to the Gems [[spoiler:poisoning the planet]]. This is best displayed during Lupin's session with the boggart, his fears so intense that [[spoiler:the boggart outright ''attacks'' him in the form of Jasper and Yellow Diamond instead of just [[DefangedHorrors harmlessly scaring]] him]], Dumbledore reasoning that his fears are far more real and deep-rooted than the average student.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Despite his cheery disposition, Steven harbors much emotional turmoil over the events that happened in his world. [[spoiler:He shows homesickness more than once, mentioning his dad and Connie on more than one occasion]]. He was even apart a part of the huge epic battle that eventually led to the Gems [[spoiler:poisoning the planet]]. This is best displayed during Lupin's session with the boggart, his fears so intense that [[spoiler:the boggart outright ''attacks'' him in the form of Jasper and Yellow Diamond instead of just [[DefangedHorrors harmlessly scaring]] him]], him]]. Dumbledore reasoning reasons that his fears are far more real and deep-rooted than the average student.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Steven is the only character who's friendly demeanor transcends his own house, being happily invited to the other house's tables for lunch.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Steven is the only character who's whose friendly demeanor transcends his own house, being happily invited to the other house's tables for lunch.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Taking place after the events of the original cartoon, [[spoiler:Steven]] is much older than he looks, [[spoiler:his natural gem-ability to alter his own age]] allowing him to blend in with the other students despite actually being in his late teens.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Taking place after the events of the original cartoon, [[spoiler:Steven]] is much older than he looks, [[spoiler:his looks. [[spoiler:His natural gem-ability to alter his own age]] allowing him to blend in with the other students despite actually being in his late teens.
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* [[spoiler:ReplacementGoldfish: Hermione is somewhat this for Steven, replacing Connie.]]
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* [[spoiler:ReplacementGoldfish: Hermione ReplacementGoldfish: [[spoiler:Hermione is somewhat this for Steven, replacing Connie.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Since Steven was the one chosen to be Hogwart's Triwizard Tournament Champion, Cedric was saved from his unkind fate at the hands of Voldemort]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** [[spoiler:Since Steven was the one chosen to be Hogwart's Triwizard Tournament Champion, Cedric was saved from his unkind fate at the hands of Voldemort]].
** [[spoiler:Since Steven was the one chosen to be Hogwart's Triwizard Tournament Champion, Cedric was saved from his unkind fate at the hands of Voldemort]].
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Ron, who in canon was more BookDumb but had some pretty good instincts. In this fic, he... doesn't.
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Ron, who in canon was more In canon, Ron is fairly BookDumb but had has some pretty good instincts. In this fic, he... doesn't.
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* HufflepuffHouse: The house Steven winds up in. Very appropriate.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Steven and the Gems were driven to drastic measures to prevent Homeworld from invading their original Earth, and poisoned the entire planet, making it lethal for gems but harmless for it's natural inhabitants. Though it made Earth and their loved ones safe, it makes it impossible for them to ever return again even if the Veil allowed two-way travel, much to Stevens sadness.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Steven and the Gems were driven to drastic measures to prevent Homeworld from invading their original Earth, and poisoned the entire planet, making it lethal for gems but harmless for it's its natural inhabitants. Though it made Earth and their loved ones safe, it makes it impossible for them to ever return again even if the Veil allowed two-way travel, much to Stevens Steven's sadness.
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: [[spoiler:Steven and Hermione are implied to have ''something'', but it is only ever implied. Steven invites Hermione to the Yule Ball were they accidentally fuse. They fuse later during the climactic battle.]]
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: [[spoiler:Steven and Hermione are implied to have ''something'', but it is only ever implied. Steven invites Hermione to the Yule Ball were where they accidentally fuse. They fuse later during the climactic battle.]]
