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** The resurrected [[spoiler: Twilight Spark]] is another subversion. [[spoiler: [[EvilCounterpart She's a deranged]] [[CloningBlues clone]] made with the real Twilight's horn.]]
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** The resurrected [[spoiler: Twilight Spark]] is another subversion. [[spoiler: [[EvilCounterpart She's a deranged]] [[CloningBlues deranged clone]] made with the real Twilight's horn.]]
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hiding some ZC Es
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-empty-room.html The Empty Room]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Wanderer D.
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-empty-room.html The Empty
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* ActionGirl: [[spoiler: Jade/Rarity]] and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]], most notably when [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon takes them both to Ponyville]].
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon.]]
* AntiVillain: [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: [[spoiler: The medallions]], which also suffer from a severe case of ClingyMacGuffin.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] ([[spoiler:twice]]) and [[spoiler:Trixie]].
* BatmanGambit: Several of them layered on top of each other, to the point where it pretty much reaches GambitPileup levels.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] ([[spoiler:twice]]) and [[spoiler:Trixie]].
* BatmanGambit: Several of them layered on top of each other, to the point where it pretty much reaches GambitPileup levels.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Quite a few times.
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* BlackComedyRape: Quick! To the mattress fort, [[spoiler:Applejack]]!
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* ChekhovsGun: ''Way'' too many to count.
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]] and, to some level, [[spoiler: the Guardian]].
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: [[spoiler: Paper Craft.]]
* DarkActionGirl: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark.]]
* DeathEqualsRedemption: Arguably, [[spoiler: Trixie]] fits the letter of the trope better than the [[IncrediblyLamePun spirit]]; [[spoiler: she begins the story dying as a potential antagonist, then becomes one of the lead protagonists]].
* DeathIsCheap: Unless you're a [[RedShirt background pony]]...
* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon]] and, to some level, [[spoiler: the Guardian]].
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: [[spoiler: Paper Craft.]]
* DarkActionGirl: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark.]]
* DeathEqualsRedemption: Arguably, [[spoiler: Trixie]] fits the letter of the trope better than the [[IncrediblyLamePun spirit]]; [[spoiler: she begins the story dying as a potential antagonist, then becomes one of the lead protagonists]].
* DeathIsCheap: Unless you're a [[RedShirt background pony]]...
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* DeathEqualsRedemption: Arguably, [[spoiler: Trixie]] fits the letter of the trope better than the
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Bon-Bon.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: The Guardian.
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Medallion on...]]
** Played straight with [[spoiler: Princess Celestia and Rainbow Dash]] and subverted with [[spoiler: Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle]].
* GeometricMagic: In the same room where the [[spoiler: Cambro]] has been for so long.
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Medallion on...]]
** Played straight with [[spoiler: Princess Celestia and Rainbow Dash]] and subverted with [[spoiler: Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle]].
* GeometricMagic: In the same room where the [[spoiler: Cambro]] has been for so long.
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* HydePlaysJekyll: [[spoiler: Midnight.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Lyra.]]
** Let's not forget [[spoiler: Blast]]!
* MagicMusic: [[spoiler: Lyra]] performs one for [[spoiler: Nightmare Flare]].
** Let's not forget [[spoiler: Blast]]!
* MagicMusic: [[spoiler: Lyra]] performs one for [[spoiler: Nightmare Flare]].
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle]] at the end of Chapter 17.
* OnlySaneMan: Applejack.
* PlayingWithFire: [[spoiler: Spitfire]] quite literally after [[spoiler: Nightmare Flare turns her into a Chimera]].
* OnlySaneMan: Applejack.
* PlayingWithFire: [[spoiler: Spitfire]] quite literally after [[spoiler: Nightmare Flare turns her into a Chimera]].
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* RedShirt: Guards through most of the chapters. A funny example is the transition between Chapters 6 and 7.
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Pretty much [[spoiler: TheManBehindTheMan]] and all its [[spoiler: EliteMooks]].
* SealedEvilInACan: Among various other things...
* ShoutOut: [[Franchise/DotHack .Hack]], other MLP fanfics, and TheSixthSense, in Chapters 1, 2, and 3 respectively.
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Pretty much [[spoiler: TheManBehindTheMan]] and all its [[spoiler: EliteMooks]].
* SealedEvilInACan: Among various other things...
* ShoutOut: [[Franchise/DotHack .Hack]], other MLP fanfics, and TheSixthSense, in Chapters 1, 2, and 3 respectively.
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* ShoutOut:
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** The only one played absolutely straight is [[spoiler: Nightmare Flare]].
* TimeTravel: [[spoiler: Trixie via the Cambro.]]
* TakingYouWithMe: Performed by [[spoiler: Blast]] near the end of Chapter 19.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie inside Luna's mind]] in Chapter 7.
* TheUndead: [[spoiler: Trixie]] and [[spoiler: Midnight]].
* TimeTravel: [[spoiler: Trixie via the Cambro.]]
* TakingYouWithMe: Performed by [[spoiler: Blast]] near the end of Chapter 19.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie inside Luna's mind]] in Chapter 7.
* TheUndead: [[spoiler: Trixie]] and [[spoiler: Midnight]].
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* TheVamp: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark... at least until she discovers her true nature.]]
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* ArmourPiercingQuestion: “Sister... did you ever have a filly?”
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* ArmourPiercingQuestion: “Sister... "Sister... did you ever have a filly?”filly?"
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: A very important trope to this fic...which often ends up being subverted somehow.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: SuperPoweredEvilSide: A very important trope to this fic...which often ends up being subverted somehow.
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* ArmourPiercingQuestion: “Sister... did you ever have a filly?”
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] ([[spoiler:twice]]) and [[spoiler:Trixie]].
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead]]: BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] ([[spoiler:twice]]) and [[spoiler:Trixie]].
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* HermeticMagic
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* [[SealedEvilInACan Sealed Evil In A Room]]: Among various other things...
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* [[SealedEvilInACan Sealed Evil In A Room]]: SealedEvilInACan: Among various other things...
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* [[UnstoppableMailman Unstoppable Mailmare]]: Guess.
* TheVamp: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark...at least until she discovers her true nature.]]
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* TheVamp: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark... at least until she discovers her true nature.]]
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** In Chapter 17, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get directions from a colt with a big backpack and a black and yellow bandana...and get lost. [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ryoga]] much?
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** In Chapter 17, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get directions from a colt with a big backpack and a black and yellow bandana...and get lost. [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ryoga]] much?much? Then in chapter 21 the Guardian is hit with a Hiryu Shoten Ha.
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** In Chapter 17, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get directions from a colt with a big backpack and a black and yellow bandana...and get lost. [[RanmaOneHalf Ryoga]] much?
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** In Chapter 17, the Cutie Mark Crusaders get directions from a colt with a big backpack and a black and yellow bandana...and get lost. [[RanmaOneHalf [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf Ryoga]] much?
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* ShoutOut: [[DotHack .Hack]], other MLP fanfics, and TheSixthSense, in Chapters 1, 2, and 3 respectively.
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* ShoutOut: [[DotHack .[[Franchise/DotHack .Hack]], other MLP fanfics, and TheSixthSense, in Chapters 1, 2, and 3 respectively.
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* CerebusSyndrome: WordOfGod says he intended more comedy (and a 6-chapter story).
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It Got Worse de-wicking.
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Originally, it's about the ramifications of Celestia discovering she had a child, and [[EasyAmnesia not remembering any of it]]. Unfortunately, things quickly [[ItGotWorse get worse]] with the death of Twilight Sparkle, the release of Celestia's SuperpoweredEvilSide, and a shadowy figure known only as the Guardian seemingly running things from behind the scenes.
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Originally, it's about the ramifications of Celestia discovering she had a child, and [[EasyAmnesia not remembering any of it]]. Unfortunately, things quickly [[ItGotWorse get worse]] worse with the death of Twilight Sparkle, the release of Celestia's SuperpoweredEvilSide, and a shadowy figure known only as the Guardian seemingly running things from behind the scenes.
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* TheVamp: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark...at least until she discovers her true nature.]]
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* TheVamp: [[spoiler: Twilight Spark...at least until she discovers her true nature.]]]]
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