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* {{Adorkable}}: Ash Ketchum. Absolutely no sense of direction, has a huge appetite, and is the sweetest kid in all of Kanto.
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Aura works like this. Everyone's got Aura and rely on it to live(Ash and Liberty excluded, they both had their aura taken from them when they were children, therefore preventing them from becoming dependent on aura.) There are many levels of aura, from low, medium, high, and extremely high. Depending on how high your aura level is, you have a certain amount of aura capabilities, like speeding yourself up, creating aerial platforms, and much, much, more.
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Aura works like this. Everyone's got Aura and rely on it to live(Ash and Liberty excluded, they both had their aura taken from them when they were children, therefore preventing them from becoming dependent on aura.) There are many levels of aura, aura capacity, from low, medium, high, and extremely high. Depending on how high your aura level capacity is, you have a certain amount of aura capabilities, like speeding yourself up, creating aerial platforms, and much, much, more.
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However, if you absorb more aura than your Aura Capacity can take, or you use up all your Aura, you can die.
However, if you absorb more aura than your Aura Capacity can take, or you use up all your Aura, you can die.
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This story is a complete remake of Ash's story in Unova, complete with Aura to top off the cake, except for one ''tiny'' twist to Ash's story.
It shapes Ash's life and his relationship with his friends.\\
It nearly gets him killed, and helps him be the hero he is.\\
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Ash doesn't have aura\\
Everyone else does.\\
Aura's physics and its capabilities are explored in this story, along with differences and prejudices that come with having no aura for Ash.\\
It explores Ash's experiences in a world where he's almost completely powerless without his Pokemon(he gets much better), and how it translates to his battling.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8420152/1/Aura-less-Black-and-White Link]].\\
Mr Question Mark's system of how aura works like this. Everyone's got Aura and rely on it to live(Ash and Liberty excluded, they both had their aura taken from them when they were children, therefore preventing them from becoming dependent on aura.) There are many levels of aura, from low,medium,high, and extremely high. Depending on how high your aura level is, you have a certain amount of aura capabilities, like speeding yourself up, creating aerial platforms, and much, much, more.
It shapes Ash's life and his relationship with his friends.\\
It nearly gets him killed, and helps him be the hero he is.\\
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Ash doesn't have aura\\
Everyone else does.\\
Aura's physics and its capabilities are explored in this story, along with differences and prejudices that come with having no aura for Ash.\\
It explores Ash's experiences in a world where he's almost completely powerless without his Pokemon(he gets much better), and how it translates to his battling.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8420152/1/Aura-less-Black-and-White Link]].\\
Mr Question Mark's system of how aura works like this. Everyone's got Aura and rely on it to live(Ash and Liberty excluded, they both had their aura taken from them when they were children, therefore preventing them from becoming dependent on aura.) There are many levels of aura, from low,medium,high, and extremely high. Depending on how high your aura level is, you have a certain amount of aura capabilities, like speeding yourself up, creating aerial platforms, and much, much, more.
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It nearly gets him killed, and helps him be the hero he
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Ash doesn't have
[[EveryoneIsASuper Everyone else does.
Aura's physics and its capabilities are explored in this story, along with differences and prejudices that come with having no aura for Ash.
Mr Question Mark's system of how aura
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* ChasteHero: One word: Ash. You know what he does with the aura equivalent of a love confession? He simply ask his mom to store them in a room, labeling and exhibiting them like museum pieces. Yup, it's bad enough that even Pikachu sighed in exasperation, and he's practically an Ash {{expy}} in this story, this notwithstanding.
* ChickMagnet: Oh Boy. Ash has this blasted all the way to completely impossible levels. Guess what. He's gotten an '''entire roomful's''' worth of the aura equivalent of a love confession. The aura equivalent of a love confession is a "heart of aura," a small pink sphere that glows blue.
* ChickMagnet: Oh Boy. Ash has this blasted all the way to completely impossible levels. Guess what. He's gotten an '''entire roomful's''' worth of the aura equivalent of a love confession. The aura equivalent of a love confession is a "heart of aura," a small pink sphere that glows blue.
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* ChasteHero: One word: Ash. You know what he does with the aura equivalent of a love confession? confession [[note]]The aura equivalent of a love confession is a "heart of aura," a small pink sphere that glows blue. [[/note]]? He simply ask his mom to store them in a room, labeling and exhibiting them like museum pieces. Yup, it's bad enough that even Pikachu sighed in exasperation, and he's practically an Ash {{expy}} in this story, this notwithstanding.
* ChickMagnet: Oh Boy. Ash has this blasted all the way to completely impossible levels. Guess what. He's gotten an '''entire roomful's''' worth of the aura equivalent of a love confession. The aura equivalent of a love confession is a "heart of aura," a small pink sphere that glows blue.
* ChickMagnet: Oh Boy. Ash has this blasted all the way to completely impossible levels. Guess what. He's gotten an '''entire roomful's''' worth of the aura equivalent of a love confession.
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* EveryoneIsASuper: Everyone has aura in the world, except Ash and Liberty.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8420152/1/Aura-less-Black-and-White Link]].
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Mr Question Mark's system of how aura works like this. Everyone's got Aura and rely on it to live(Ash and Liberty excluded, they both had their aura taken from them when they were children, therefore preventing them from becoming dependent on aura.) There are many levels of aura, from low,medium,high, and extremely high. Depending on how high your aura level is, you have a certain amount of aura capabilities, like speeding yourself up, creating aerial platforms, and much, much, more.
Pokemon use aura to power up their attacks. However, when aura attacks and regular attacks meet, they negate each other, creating a huge burst of air, which Ash frequently uses to his advantage.
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*BigEater: Ash. He's bad enough that Ash made Cilan cry with the restaurant bill.
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* EvilPlan: The Lower Class of Aura tried to kill [[spoiler: all people with an aura level above low in Accumula Town by triggering a ''massive'' aura overload with aspirin pills filled with liquidized aura.]]
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* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much his entire childhood. To date, he's been [[spoiler: 1. Nearly Killed. 2. Beaten by a deranged woman with a cane. 3. About an inch away from having his spine snapped. 4. Nearly blown up from the inside by Gary's aura and his blood(his blood and aura act like aura/regular attacks when put together. They let out a small explosion) 5. Zapped by a lightning bolt Arceus knows how many times.]] All of this when he was just 6. Just How Much Can He Take!!
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* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much his Ash's entire childhood. To date, he's been [[spoiler: 1. Nearly Killed. 2. Beaten by a deranged woman with a cane. 3. About an inch away from having his spine snapped. 4. Nearly blown up from the inside by Gary's aura and his blood(his blood and aura act like aura/regular attacks when put together. They let out a small explosion) 5. Zapped by a lightning bolt Arceus knows how many times.]] All of this when he was just 6. Just How Much Can He Take!!
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* Adorkable: Ash ketchum. Absolutely no sense of direction, a huge appetite, and the sweetest kid with biggest heart in all of Kanto.
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* Adorkable: {{Adorkable}}: Ash ketchum. Ketchum. Absolutely no sense of direction, has a huge appetite, and is the sweetest kid with biggest heart in all of Kanto.
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* Adorkable: Ash ketchum. Absolutely no sense of direction, a huge appetite, and the sweetest kid with biggest heart in all of Kanto.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, defeater of the infamous Hunter J, destroyer of the deranged Aura Taker, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
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* JerkJock: How in Arceus did Gary frigging Oak act like a murderous drug gang member at 6!?!
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
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* JerkJock: How in Arceus did Gary frigging Oak act like a murderous drug gang member at 6!?!
* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]6!?!
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Holy Mother Arceus!!! Or is it father?!! AsThe Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
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* ChasteHero: One word: Ash.
** You know what he does with the aura equivalent of a love confession? He simply ask his mom to store them in a room, labeling and exhibiting them like museum pieces. Yup, it's bad enough that even Pikachu sighed in exasperation, and he's practically an Ash {{expy}} in this story, this notwithstanding.
** Oh, and I forgot to mention that Ash thought "romantic" was a spice on bread.
** You know what he does with the aura equivalent of a love confession? He simply ask his mom to store them in a room, labeling and exhibiting them like museum pieces. Yup, it's bad enough that even Pikachu sighed in exasperation, and he's practically an Ash {{expy}} in this story, this notwithstanding.
** Oh, and I forgot to mention that Ash thought "romantic" was a spice on bread.
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* ChasteHero: One word: Ash. \n** You know what he does with the aura equivalent of a love confession? He simply ask his mom to store them in a room, labeling and exhibiting them like museum pieces. Yup, it's bad enough that even Pikachu sighed in exasperation, and he's practically an Ash {{expy}} in this story, this notwithstanding. \n** Oh, and I forgot to mention that Ash thought "romantic" was a spice on bread.
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* {{Expy}}
** Liberty. Has no aura? Check. Incredibly dense when it comes to what he's done? Check. Just as childish as Ash? Check, Check, and Check!!!
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake!
** Pretty much his entire childhood. To date, he's been [[spoiler: 1. Nearly Killed. 2. Beaten by a deranged woman with a cane. 3. About an inch away from having his spine snapped. 4. Nearly blown up from the inside by Gary's aura and his blood(his blood and aura act like aura/regular attacks when put together. They let out a small explosion) 5. Zapped by a lightning bolt Arceus knows how many times.]] All of this when he was just 6. Just How Much Can He Take!!
** Liberty. Has no aura? Check. Incredibly dense when it comes to what he's done? Check. Just as childish as Ash? Check, Check, and Check!!!
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake!
** Pretty much his entire childhood. To date, he's been [[spoiler: 1. Nearly Killed. 2. Beaten by a deranged woman with a cane. 3. About an inch away from having his spine snapped. 4. Nearly blown up from the inside by Gary's aura and his blood(his blood and aura act like aura/regular attacks when put together. They let out a small explosion) 5. Zapped by a lightning bolt Arceus knows how many times.]] All of this when he was just 6. Just How Much Can He Take!!
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* {{Expy}}
**{{Expy}}: Liberty. Has no aura? Check. Incredibly dense when it comes to what he's done? Check. Just as childish as Ash? Check, Check, and Check!!!
*HowMuchMoreCanHeTake!
**HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much his entire childhood. To date, he's been [[spoiler: 1. Nearly Killed. 2. Beaten by a deranged woman with a cane. 3. About an inch away from having his spine snapped. 4. Nearly blown up from the inside by Gary's aura and his blood(his blood and aura act like aura/regular attacks when put together. They let out a small explosion) 5. Zapped by a lightning bolt Arceus knows how many times.]] All of this when he was just 6. Just How Much Can He Take!!
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**OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Holy Mother Arceus!!! Or is it father?!! As
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This story is a complete remake of Ash's story in Unova, complete with Aura to top off the cake, except for one ''tiny'' twist to Ash's story
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This story is a complete remake of Ash's story in Unova, complete with Aura to top off the cake, except for one ''tiny'' twist to Ash's storystory.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: The Civilian. Destroyer of Galactic, Magma, Aqua, and a legend among Pokemon Rangers. Otherwise known as [[spoiler: Ash Ketchum]]
