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A novel-length {{Doorstopper}} FixFic that serves as a continuation as well as an AlternateUniverse where things turned out a little differently than they did in the film, and one which at times does border on a little too much PurpleProse and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness as well as being much DarkerAndEdgier than the source material, the story nevertheless addresses many pertinent points raised but never resolved by ''WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda'', or even ignored altogether, all in a very thoughtful, complex, and human way.
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A novel-length {{Doorstopper}} FixFic that serves as a continuation as well as an AlternateUniverse where things turned out a little differently than they did in the film, and one which at times does border on a little too much PurpleProse and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness as well as being much DarkerAndEdgier than the source material, the story nevertheless addresses many pertinent points raised but never resolved by ''WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda'', ''WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda1'', or even ignored altogether, all in a very thoughtful, complex, and human way.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither killed Tai Lung]] nor [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 sent him]] to [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither killed kill Tai Lung]] nor [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 sent send him]] to [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]] nor [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 send him]] to [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill killed Tai Lung]] nor [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 send sent him]] to [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Welcome to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4691143/1/A_Different_Lesson A Different Lesson]].(Also [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17509559?view_full_work=true located at]] Archive of Our Own.)
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Welcome to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4691143/1/A_Different_Lesson A Different Lesson]]. (Also [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17509559?view_full_work=true located at]] Archive of Our Own.)
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Welcome to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4691143/1/A_Different_Lesson A Different Lesson]].
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Welcome to [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4691143/1/A_Different_Lesson A Different Lesson]].
Lesson]].(Also [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17509559?view_full_work=true located at]] Archive of Our Own.)
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]] [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]] nor [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] to [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]][[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]][[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 Lung]] [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]] [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]]]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold [[NeverFoundTheBody neither kill Tai Lung]] [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 Lung]][[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]]]], Realm]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose for a moment that the Wuxi Finger Hold not only [[NeverFoundTheBody didn't kill Tai Lung]] [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 or send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]]]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose this for a moment that moment: not only did the Wuxi Finger Hold not only [[NeverFoundTheBody didn't neither kill Tai Lung]] [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 or nor send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]]]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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A novel-length {{Doorstopper}} FixFic that serves as a continuation as well as an AlternateUniverse where things turned out a little differently than they did in the film, and one which at times does border on a little too much PurpleProse and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, the story nevertheless addresses many pertinent points raised but never resolved by ''WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda'', or even ignored altogether, all in a very thoughtful, complex, and human way.
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A novel-length {{Doorstopper}} FixFic that serves as a continuation as well as an AlternateUniverse where things turned out a little differently than they did in the film, and one which at times does border on a little too much PurpleProse and SesquipedalianLoquaciousness, SesquipedalianLoquaciousness as well as being much DarkerAndEdgier than the source material, the story nevertheless addresses many pertinent points raised but never resolved by ''WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda'', or even ignored altogether, all in a very thoughtful, complex, and human way.
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Suppose for a moment that the Wuxi Finger Hold not only [[NeverFoundTheBody didn't kill Tai Lung]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
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Suppose for a moment that the Wuxi Finger Hold not only [[NeverFoundTheBody didn't kill Tai Lung]], Lung]] [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda3 or send him]] [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence to the Spirit Realm]]]], it purged him of his insanity and brought his rage down to manageable levels. Suppose Shifu was then determined to restore his son to his former heroic self, coming to him afterward and offering him a deal: submit to him, learn to control his anger and atone for his sins, and he will once again have a place at the Jade Palace. Tai Lung refuses initially, but then receives a little encouragement from Po, who believes in the snow leopard and offers him forgiveness and friendship to get back on the right path. And once he begins viewing his actions as a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, Tai Lung resolves to begin the long path towards [[RedemptionQuest redemption from the Valley of Peace]], thereby finding a meaning and purpose for his life.
