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* ApologeticAttacker: Sundancer.
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* BackToSchool: Taylor starts going back in 17.1.
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* EvilGloating: Bakuda, after Taylor gives her a run for her money.
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* ExplosionPropulsion: Taylor, Lisa, and Theo use this to get some distance from the Fallen in 23.2.
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* ImMelting: [[spoiler:Micheal's death.]]
** [[spoiler:Nearly happens to Theo until he made a LifeOrLimbDecision.]]
** [[spoiler:Nearly happens to Theo until he made a LifeOrLimbDecision.]]
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Vanth and Belphegor are pretty much the same.
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* TheMedic: Panacea, obviously.
* MightMakesRight: How Belphegor and her daughter see things.
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* MolotovCocktail: The Teeth's SlaveMooks carried these to try and use on the shelter.
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* DropTheHammer: Transpose carries one.
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* AdultFear: Danny has the knowledge that his daughter is Aeon, meaning he knows when she's doing something dangerous like fighting Leviathan. [[spoiler:Worse, Valefor mind controlled him, of all people, into stabbing his daughter.]]
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* {{Seer}}: Adam can see visions and embed them into objects for others to see as well.
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* {{Seer}}: {{Seers}}: Adam can see visions and embed them into objects for others to see as well.
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* RealityEnsues: Panacea getting shot ends up leaving her feeling the symptoms (shortness of breath, pain, etc.) for months on end since she can't heal herself.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/9851889// Officially abandoned Abandoned since december 27, 2017.]]
]], but revived in 2021.
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** [[spoiler:Nearly happens to Theo until he made a LifeOrLimbDecision.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Micheal suffers a slow death by melting, but before he dies completely he manages to crush the one's who did it's skull.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler:Micheal suffers a slow death by melting, but before he dies completely he manages to crush the one's one who did it's skull.]]
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* LifeOrLimbDecision: [[spoiler:Theo ends up having his fingers affected by a power that would melt his entire body from spreading, so he cuts his own arm off.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: In regards to the Fallen situation. Micheal, following Adam's advice, who was a trusted friend that he had no reason to think had bad info, went after Aeon after Niner's request. The result was the death of his wife, the escape of a mass murderer, and one of the largest gatherings of Fallen on a warpath against the innocents of the city.
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* ForeseeingMyDeath: Micheal [[spoiler:had already known how he was going to die due to Adam telling him.]]
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* ImMelting: [[spoiler:Micheal's death.]]
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* BestFriend: By Wanderer 24.4, Taylor regards Theo as this.
--> '''Taylor:''' I stood there for a moment, not thinking, just sorting out the conversation in my head. Theo was a friend. Maybe my best friend. He'd done more for me than just about anyone. He'd saved my life. He trusted me.
--> '''Taylor:''' I stood there for a moment, not thinking, just sorting out the conversation in my head. Theo was a friend. Maybe my best friend. He'd done more for me than just about anyone. He'd saved my life. He trusted me.
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* LiteralMetaphor: Adam can imbued his visions into objects, including pearls. He's giving people "literal pearls of wisdom".
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* ScrewDestiny: Since Aeon has this effect when it comes to visions, Adam decides in his interlude to give her one in hopes of her averting that specific one. [[spoiler:It's a vision of Scion killing everyone on the planet.]]
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* {{Seer}}: Adam can see visions and embed them into objects for others to see as well.
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* TragicMistake: How Adam regards interfering with Aeon's attempt to capture the leader of the Fallen.
--> ''Adam'': "I've seen every single one. And I will see every single one. Again and again. I won't deny the pain my actions have caused. I can't. Nor will I blame you for them. I chose to take action, believing it was right, and was proven wrong. My own people died for my mistake, many others have been hurt, and it will get worse. By the end of this, hundreds of people will be dead, and thousands more impacted in lesser ways. That is my burden to bear. I set it before no other."
--> ''Adam'': "I've seen every single one. And I will see every single one. Again and again. I won't deny the pain my actions have caused. I can't. Nor will I blame you for them. I chose to take action, believing it was right, and was proven wrong. My own people died for my mistake, many others have been hurt, and it will get worse. By the end of this, hundreds of people will be dead, and thousands more impacted in lesser ways. That is my burden to bear. I set it before no other."
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* CelibateHero: Taylor, though this is because of all the things happening in her life. She can barely feel anything, let alone a kiss or a hug, and she's a criminal now so her civilian life was all but gone. At this point, she sees trying for a relationship as setting herself up for failure.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Taylor reveals that her power is linked to an alien race and that she plans to kill the Endbringers in Seeker 23.4]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: [[spoiler:Part of why Theo didn't want to stay in Brockton Bay.]]
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* MasterOfIllusion: Taylor's clone.
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* MasterOfIllusion: Taylor's clone. [[spoiler:Taylor, once connected to The Way, can also alter perception.]]
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* ReformedCriminal: Pinnacle, but only barely. He's not all that contrite about his past crimes or eager to do good; he mainly works as a hero for Aeon's sake, since she gave him purpose in life. [[spoiler:Of course, he himself acknowledges that she can't replace his former partner and he's still an asshole, so he splits from the group.]]
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* ReformedCriminal: ReformedCriminal:
** Pinnacle, but only barely. He's not all that contrite about his past crimes or eager to do good; he mainly works as a hero for Aeon's sake, since she gave him purpose in life. [[spoiler:Of course, he himself acknowledges that she can't replace his former partner and he's still an asshole, so he splits from the group.]]]]
** Alieen, formerly Squealer, is now a member of Haven and HappilyMarried. Her interests are primarily centered around her husband and her tinkering, but she pretty much cleaned up her act.
** Pinnacle, but only barely. He's not all that contrite about his past crimes or eager to do good; he mainly works as a hero for Aeon's sake, since she gave him purpose in life. [[spoiler:Of course, he himself acknowledges that she can't replace his former partner and he's still an asshole, so he splits from the group.
** Alieen, formerly Squealer, is now a member of Haven and HappilyMarried. Her interests are primarily centered around her husband and her tinkering, but she pretty much cleaned up her act.
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** [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/33205027/ 23.2]] [[spoiler:Taylor connects with The Way for the first time.]]
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* UnwantedRescue: Not so much unwanted, but Lisa would have preferred nearly anyone else saving them from the Fallen than Aileen.
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* TheCavalry: [[spoiler:New Wave showed up to stop the Teeth from breaking into the Shelter in 16.4.]]
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* TheCavalry: TheCavalry:
** [[spoiler:New Wave showed up to stop the Teeth from breaking into the Shelter in 16.4.]]
** [[spoiler:Haven (specifically Christopher and Aileen) rescue Taylor's group in 23.2.]]
** [[spoiler:New Wave showed up to stop the Teeth from breaking into the Shelter in 16.4.]]
** [[spoiler:Haven (specifically Christopher and Aileen) rescue Taylor's group in 23.2.]]
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* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: When Taylor taps into The Way she gains HyperAwareness surpassing CombatPrecognition and makes it so that she just knows things.
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* EnlightenmentSuperpowers: When Taylor taps into The Way she gains HyperAwareness surpassing CombatPrecognition and makes it so that she just knows things.
--> I hadn't planned it. There hadn't been a need for a plan. I'd simply... done it. Wanted it to happen, known it was possible, and acted to bring it about.
--> I hadn't planned it. There hadn't been a need for a plan. I'd simply... done it. Wanted it to happen, known it was possible, and acted to bring it about.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Vanth and Belphegor are pretty much the same.
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* MightMakesRight: How Belphegor and her daughter see things.
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* [[YouRequireMoreVespeneGas You Require More Nano-Paste]]: Taylor's construction output is bottlenecked by how fast she can process raw material into nano-paste for her lathes.
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* [[YouRequireMoreVespeneGas You Require More Nano-Paste]]: Taylor's construction output is bottlenecked by how fast she can process raw material into nano-paste for her lathes.lathes.
* VillainRespect: Belphegor has shades of this to Aeon, given she actually put her into a situation where she could die and hurt Scion.
-->'''Belphegor:''' “Hell, girl, if ya hadn't put yer hands on m'girl, I might've invited you to th' family! Given ya Wesley, even! Haw! Abby'd love that, after you gone'n killed her boy! Or as good as done, anyhow. Real shame I gotta kill ya.”
* VillainRespect: Belphegor has shades of this to Aeon, given she actually put her into a situation where she could die and hurt Scion.
-->'''Belphegor:''' “Hell, girl, if ya hadn't put yer hands on m'girl, I might've invited you to th' family! Given ya Wesley, even! Haw! Abby'd love that, after you gone'n killed her boy! Or as good as done, anyhow. Real shame I gotta kill ya.”
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* TheChosenOne: How Belphegor sees herself after an encounter with Behemoth.
--> '''Belphegor:''' I saw it with my own eyes, when the Behemoth burned New York. Right outside my office window. I looked it right in the eye, and I knew. Knew without a shadow of a doubt what real power was. I should'a died, but I didn't. I woke up in the ashes, and I'd been gifted. Chosen. Came home after that. Brought the kids, and the hubby. Met Abby, and we spread the word. Brought the clans outta the hills, taught 'em. Set 'em straight.
--> '''Belphegor:''' I saw it with my own eyes, when the Behemoth burned New York. Right outside my office window. I looked it right in the eye, and I knew. Knew without a shadow of a doubt what real power was. I should'a died, but I didn't. I woke up in the ashes, and I'd been gifted. Chosen. Came home after that. Brought the kids, and the hubby. Met Abby, and we spread the word. Brought the clans outta the hills, taught 'em. Set 'em straight.
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* SmarterThanYouLook: Belphegor has a PHD in Economics.
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* HappilyMarried: Aileen (formerly Squealer) married Christopher of Haven. The relationship seems fairly strong.
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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Aileen's shard leaves her dependent on others emotionally to function.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Taylor, in general, due to her power.
--> '''Lisa:'''“Aeon... she breaks the rules. This thing with the Apostles is just the most recent time. Around her, plans fall apart. Things don't go how they're supposed to. It happens a lot. Accord, Purson, Butcher, Coil. Even the Simurgh and Leviathan. I mean, the Apostles had a precog to figure things out, and weeks to plan, and it still didn't work out for them.”
--> '''Lisa:'''“Aeon... she breaks the rules. This thing with the Apostles is just the most recent time. Around her, plans fall apart. Things don't go how they're supposed to. It happens a lot. Accord, Purson, Butcher, Coil. Even the Simurgh and Leviathan. I mean, the Apostles had a precog to figure things out, and weeks to plan, and it still didn't work out for them.”
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* HopelessSuitor: [[spoiler:How Theo feels about his feelings with Taylor. He's got a lot of self-doubt.]]
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