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* FurryComic: Yep.
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus. Although he does admit to having trouble talking to women.[[spoiler: Marcus even says in the sequel ''Unconditional'' that Reis would not have if he was a guy or a girl(though he could have been exaggerating).]]
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus. Although he does admit to having trouble talking to women.[[spoiler: Marcus even says in the sequel ''Unconditional'' that Reis would not have if cared whether he was a guy or a girl(though he could have just been exaggerating).]]
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus. Although he does admit to having trouble talking to women.[[spoiler: Marcus even says in the sequel ''Unconditional'' ''Unconditional'' that Reis would not have if he was a guy or a girl(though he could have been exaggerating).]]
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* Single-Target-Sexuality: Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus. Although he does admit to having trouble talking to women.
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There is also a sequel: ''Unconditional'', which picks up about 2 1/2 years after ''Cruelty''.
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** In ''Unconditional'', Marcus has one of these when he discovers the doctors are giving Reis, a recovering drug addict, opiates. He also points out that, had he been allowed to see Reis from the get-go, he'd have told the doctors about his drug problem.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: The doctor is not told that Reis must not have opiates, and points out that there are no allergies on Reis's medical file. His addiction is not noted.
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* DrugsAreBad: Reis's father overdosed, his mother's been arrested multiple times for drug abuse [[spoiler:and Reis himself is addicted to Oxytocin and Codiene--and that's just the drugs we're ''told'' about]].
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* DrugsAreBad: Reis's father overdosed, his mother's been arrested multiple times for drug abuse [[spoiler:and Reis himself is addicted to Oxytocin [=OxyContin=] and Codiene--and that's just the drugs we're ''told'' about]].
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** A particularly hilarious example: [[spoiler: Reis]] is addicted to ''oxytocin.'' As in, the hormone the brain releases when you hug somebody. Presumably the author meant to say ''OxyContin.''
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** A particularly hilarious example: [[spoiler: Reis]] is addicted to ''oxytocin.'' As in, the hormone the brain releases when you hug somebody. Presumably the author meant to say ''OxyContin.''''[=OxyContin=]''.
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* IfIt'sYouIt'sOkay: In terms of men, Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus.
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* IfIt'sYouIt'sOkay: IfItsYouItsOkay: In terms of men, Reis only seems to have eyes for Marcus.
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** A particularly hilarious example: [[spoiler: Reis]] is addicted to ''oxytocin.'' As in, the hormone the brain releases when you hug somebody. Presumably the author meant to say ''OxyContin.''
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Thats a spoiler, right?
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* AddledAddict: The reason Reis's mom is never around. In ''Unconditional'', she dies of an overdose. Reis's father is already dead.
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* AddledAddict: The reason Reis's mom is never around. In ''Unconditional'', she [[spoiler:she dies of an overdose. overdose.]] Reis's father is already dead.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: It gets rather egregious when the author uses "based" instead of "best", amongst other flubs.
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[MissingMom His mom]] [[{{Prison}} is in jail]]; [{DisappearedDad his dad's dead of an overdose]].
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[MissingMom His mom]] [[{{Prison}} is in jail]]; [{DisappearedDad [[DisappearedDad his dad's dead of an overdose]].
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[MissingMom His mom mom]] [[{{Prison}} is in jail, and jail]]; [{DisappearedDad his dad's dead.dead of an overdose]].
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* FeelNoPain: Reis [[spoiler:due to him being high as a kite.]]
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* AddledAddict: The reasin Reis's mom is never around.
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* OhCrap: Tobias's reaction when bloodying Reis's face and later [[GroinAttack kneeing him in the balls]] has virtually no effect. Then Marcus's reaction [[spoiler:when he sees Reis being arrested]].
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* OhCrap: Tobias's reaction when bloodying Reis's face and later [[GroinAttack kneeing him in the balls]] has virtually [[PunchPunchPunchUhOh no effect.effect]]. Then Marcus's reaction [[spoiler:when he sees Reis being arrested]].
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* PunchPunchPunchUhOh: Pretty much the entire fight between Tobias and Keith vs. Reis
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* OhCrap: Tobias's reaction when [[GroinAttack kneeing Reis in the balls]] has virtually no effect. Then Marcus's reaction [[spoiler:when he sees Reis being arrested]].
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* PornWithPlot: Averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does ''not'' spend the night with Reis.
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* PornWithPlot: Averted The porn part is averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does ''not'' spend the night with Reis.
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* GroinAttack: Reis is on the receiving one during his fight with Tobias and Keith. [[spoiler: It has no effect because he's on drugs.]]
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* IvyLeagueForEveryone: Marcus gets accepted into Raemont, which is said to be Ivy League.
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* PoliceAreUseless: Thoroughly averted. [[ShownTheirWork Rukis even got help from a real cop for this comic.]]
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* PornWithPlot: (averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does not spend the night with Reis).
* Prison: [[spoiler:Reis ends up jailed for assault and drug possession.]]
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* PornWithPlot: (averted Averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does not ''not'' spend the night with Reis).
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*Prison: {{Prison}}: [[spoiler:Reis ends up jailed for assault and drug possession.]]
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Reis is a wolfdog whose closest friend is Marcus, a gay fennec fox. It starts out with Reis bringing Marcus home so he'd recover from a beating.
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A furry comic book (originally webcomic) by [[http://www.furaffinity.net/user/rukis/ Rukis]].
Reis is a wolfdog whose closest friend is Marcus, a gay fennec fox. It starts out with Reis bringing Marcus home so he'd recover from abeating.
beating. Marcus learns that Reis is having some trouble at home due to Reis' parents' drug problems. [[spoiler:Turns out, Reis is following in their footsteps.]]
Reis is a wolfdog whose closest friend is Marcus, a gay fennec fox. It starts out with Reis bringing Marcus home so he'd recover from a
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* InteractiveFiction: There are two paths the plot can take. They have no real affect on the ending.
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* Prison: [[spoiler:Reis ends up jailed for assault and drug possession.]]
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* DrugsAreBad: Reis's father overdosed, his mother's been arrested multiple times for drug abuse [[spoiler:and he's addicted to Oxytocin and Codiene--and that's just the drugs we're ''told'' about]].
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* OhCrap: Tobias's reaction when [[GroinAttack kneeing Reis in the balls]] has virtually no effect. Then Marcus's reaction when [[spoiler:when he hears a guy on the wrestling team beat up Tobias and his sidekick Keith and is now sees Reis being arrested. [[spoiler: he knows it's Reis]].arrested]].
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* FunctionalAddict: [[Reis]][[spoiler:Reis]]
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* TeenyWeenie: Tobias is mocked for having one, even for a feline. This mockery is what triggers Tobias to beat up Marcus and pick a fight with Reis.
* TeenyWeenie: Tobias is mocked for having one, even for a feline. This mockery is what triggers Tobias to beat up Marcus and pick a fight with Reis.
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Reis is a wolfdog whose closest friend is a gay fennec fox. It starts out with Reis bringing Marcus home so he'd recover from a beating.
!!''Cruelty'' provides examples of:
* ChooseYourOwnAdventure: There are two paths the plot can take. They have no real affect on the ending.
* DrugsAreBad: Reis's father overdosed, his mother's been arrested multiple times for drug abuse [[spoiler:and he's addicted to Oxytocin and Codiene--and that's just the drugs we're ''told'' about]].
* FunctionalAddict: [[Reis]]
* FurryComic: Yep.
* MadeOfIron: Reis. He gets into a fight and kicks his attackers' asses, even though he's been bloodied and [[GroinAttack kneed in the groin]]. [[spoiler:Turns out, he's drugged to the gills.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: His mom is in jail, and his dad's dead.
* PornWithPlot (averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does not spend the night with Reis).
!!''Cruelty'' provides examples of:
* ChooseYourOwnAdventure: There are two paths the plot can take. They have no real affect on the ending.
* DrugsAreBad: Reis's father overdosed, his mother's been arrested multiple times for drug abuse [[spoiler:and he's addicted to Oxytocin and Codiene--and that's just the drugs we're ''told'' about]].
* FunctionalAddict: [[Reis]]
* FurryComic: Yep.
* MadeOfIron: Reis. He gets into a fight and kicks his attackers' asses, even though he's been bloodied and [[GroinAttack kneed in the groin]]. [[spoiler:Turns out, he's drugged to the gills.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: His mom is in jail, and his dad's dead.
* PornWithPlot (averted if you take the plot path that Marcus does not spend the night with Reis).
