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* HaplessSelfHelp: Richard is a SocialDarwinist who believes that "there are two types of people in the world, winners and losers." He's a motivational speaker who lectures his whole family on the importance of being "winners" - then his family's financial future gets a serious blow when his motivational project doesn't sell, leaving them in debt, and he's viciously told that he's "not viable."
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* BigEater: She loves to eat, something her father tries discouraging in her.
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* MoralityPet: Everyone cares for her, and harming her physically, emotionally and psychologically is a huge BerserkButton for them, even ''against one another''.
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* MoralityPet: Everyone cares for her, and harming her physically, emotionally emotionally, and psychologically is a huge BerserkButton for them, even ''against one another''.
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* PluckyGirl: No matter what kind of crap she and her family goes through and no matter how insurmountable the odds seem against her, she always manages to remain positive and upbeat. Most of the time, anyway.
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Olive's older half brother, who took a vow of silence until he can become a fighter pilot.
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* CorruptionOfAMinor: "Fuck a lot of women kid. Not just one woman, ''a lot'' of women!" Words he said to his 15 year old step-grandson.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He acts as a bigot and obnoxious, but he cares for his family a lot.
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* GetOut: [[spoiler: Orders Richard to get Olive off from the stage. It didn't ended as planned.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: Unpleasant and unsympathetic she may be, [[spoiler:it doesn't change the fact that the Hoovers arrived to the pageant registration four minutes late.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: Unpleasant and unsympathetic she may be, [[spoiler:it doesn't change the fact that the Hoovers arrived to the pageant registration four minutes late.]]
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* GetOut: [[spoiler: Orders Richard to get Olive off from the stage. It didn't ended end as planned.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: Unpleasant and unsympathetic she may be,[[spoiler:it [[spoiler: it doesn't change the fact that the Hoovers arrived to the pageant registration four minutes late.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: Unpleasant and unsympathetic she may be,
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* MsFanservice: She is the only beauty queen of right age in the film.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: First acts cold towards Olive, but [[spoiler: she's obviously enjoying while watching the Hoover HappyDance.]] She doesn't act "cold" so much as "impersonal/professional." She's just doing her job - and clearly not enjoying it all that much.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: First acts cold towards Olive, Olive [[spoiler:, but [[spoiler: she's obviously enjoying while watching the Hoover HappyDance.]] HappyDance]]. She doesn't act "cold" so much as "impersonal/professional." She's just doing her job - and clearly not enjoying it all that much.
