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* OhCrap: When she finds one of the Shiori at her sister's orphanage.
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* OhCrap: When she finds one of the Shiori at her sister's orphanage.orphanage.
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* TheQuietOne: When she said ten words in one day, Kirche remarked that she was "unusually talkative".
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* TheQuietOne: When she said ten words (not associated with casting or performing school work) in one day, Kirche remarked that she was "unusually talkative".
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* FailedASpotCheck: Lampshaded, Guiche internally admonishes himself for failing to realize that Midori's aversion to his advances meant that she was married and thus "out of the game". While weak, he does justify it by saying that while she is a more than competent swordswoman, the fact that her husband would let her serve as an agent of the crown would be a rare occurrence.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:When Louise reminds her of her DarkAndTroubledPast, she loses it and spills the beans about the Transition, just as [=KoKo=] was about to enter the room.]]
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:When Louise reminds her of her DarkAndTroubledPast, she loses it and spills the beans about the Transition, just as [=KoKo=] was about to enter the room.]]
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%%%%* IntergenerationalFriendship: With Enya.
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* SquishyWizard: Her petite stature and lack of physical stamina is underscored by the all the time she spends with strong and nimble hunter like Koko. Indeed, even older mages give her trouble because they are bigger and stronger by dent of being older.
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* SquishyWizard: Her petite stature and lack of physical stamina is underscored by the all the time she spends with a strong and nimble hunter like Koko. Indeed, even older mages give her trouble because they are bigger and stronger by dent of being older.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: Part of her excitement about her assignment to the Tarbes Quest is it presents an opportunity to prove to her mother that she's not a screw up. She has this so bad that even an "almost acknowledgement" by her mother politely telling her not to screw up again makes her hopeful.
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* WellDoneDaughterGal: WellDoneSonGuy: Part of her excitement about her assignment to the Tarbes Quest is it presents an opportunity to prove to her mother that she's not a screw up. She has this so bad that even an "almost acknowledgement" by her mother politely telling her not to screw up again makes her hopeful.
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*SquishyWizard: Her petite stature and lack of physical stamina is underscored by the all the time she spends with strong and nimble hunter like Koko. Indeed, even older mages give her trouble because they are bigger and stronger by dent of being older.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Louise's explosions, despite her lack of skill as a mage, are formidable weapons against both Alfheim's mobs and Halkegenia's mages because they are so unusual in both systems. Ch 32 gives a little detail on this: an enemy mage sees her aiming at him and assumes a conventional parrying stance. He expects a fireball, wind arrows, water whip or earth conjurations. No one expects a magical explosion in their face.
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*CassandraTruth: Whenever he tries to tell Monmon how much he sincerely cares about her, she thinks it is either the same sort of flattery he gives other girls or an attempt at buttering her up ''after'' flattering other girls.
*EveryoneHasStandards: As much as he enjoys flirting, he draws the line at girls who are married/engaged or otherwise officially spoken for. Other than the scandal that could ensue, he sees as them "bowing out" of the game that he plays.
*EngagementChallenge: In a flashback pre-story, he remembers Momon asks him what he will do "to impress her father". I.E. prove his worthiness as a potential husband. The acclaim he receives for his contribution to success of Operation Dunkirk does the trick.
*EngagementChallenge: In a flashback pre-story, he remembers Momon asks him what he will do "to impress her father". I.E. prove his worthiness as a potential husband. The acclaim he receives for his contribution to success of Operation Dunkirk does the trick.
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* TheSocialExpert: When her boyfriend isn't trying her temper, she is an deft hand at social manipulation. She and her whole family have to be in order to maintain their standing in the wake of the Transition.
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* TheSocialExpert: When her boyfriend isn't trying her temper, she is an deft hand at social manipulation. She and her whole family have ''have'' to be in order to maintain their standing in the wake of the Transition.
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*TheSocialExpert: When her boyfriend isn't trying her temper, she is an deft hand at social manipulation. She and her whole family have to be in order to maintain their standing in the wake of the Transition.
