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!Human beingsBeings
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Jerk With A Heart Of Jerk involves a jerk who seems like they're going to show a nicer side but it is shown that that isn't the case at some point, so as written I feel that's misuse. I did however try to use a more fitting trope. Also, Drop The Hammer is no longer a trope.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: He's a cranky old condescending lech and as trustworthy as a chocolate hammer, but he's right that the Old Gods need to do something because they're all dying slowly in America. [[spoiler:This is true, but Wednesday's actually only out to help ''himself'' survive by provoking the gods to slaughter each other, because the deaths of such powerful beings in his name will sustain him. Well, himself and his partner Loki.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: JerkassHasAPoint: He's a cranky old condescending lech and as trustworthy as a chocolate hammer, but he's right that the Old Gods need to do something because they're all dying slowly in America. [[spoiler:This is true, but Wednesday's actually only out to help ''himself'' survive by provoking the gods to slaughter each other, because the deaths of such powerful beings in his name will sustain him. Well, himself and his partner Loki.]]
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* AxCrazy: Looking forward to beaning Shadow with [[DropTheHammer a sledgehammer.]] [[spoiler:And he does, but [[DarkIsNotEvil ultimately changes his mind about actually hurting him.]]]]
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* AxCrazy: Looking forward to beaning Shadow with [[DropTheHammer a sledgehammer.]] sledgehammer. [[spoiler:And he does, but [[DarkIsNotEvil ultimately changes his mind about actually hurting him.]]]]
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* DropTheHammer: His weapon of choice in mythology, and he used to have a day job slaughtering cattle with a sledgehammer.
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* DividedDeity: Czernobog ("black god") and his twin Bielebog ("white god") are implied to be the same person with a SplitPersonality, though only Czernobog is seen in the novel.
