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Not only does it read poorly for two entries in a row to use the word "catchy", but on its own, it is not context (while "very" and "really" in this context are Word Cruft of the "bogus intensifier" variety).
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_K2QNn7LLSk Mizuiro no Senritsu (The Aquamarine Melody)]], Hanon's second ImageSong, is very catchy.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kDX9PPajieA Ankoku no Tsubasa (Wings of Darkness)]] is Lady Bat's villain song and it's really catchy.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kDX9PPajieA Ankoku no Tsubasa (Wings of Darkness)]] is Lady Bat's villain song and it's really catchy.
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%%Saying a track is "catchy" is not context; what's awesome about them?
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_K2QNn7LLSk Mizuiro no Senritsu (The Aquamarine Melody)]], Hanon's second ImageSong, is very catchy.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_K2QNn7LLSk Mizuiro no Senritsu (The Aquamarine Melody)]], Hanon's second ImageSong, is very catchy.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kDX9PPajieA Ankoku no Tsubasa (Wings of Darkness)]] is Lady Bat's villain song and it's really catchy.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kDX9PPajieA Ankoku no Tsubasa (Wings of Darkness)]] is Lady Bat's villain song and it's really catchy.
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Being a series centered around MagicalGirls who use the power of song to fight, ''Manga/MermaidMelodyPichiPichiPitch'' has no shortage of amazing music.
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Being a series centered around MagicalGirls {{Magical Girl}}s who use the power of song to fight, ''Manga/MermaidMelodyPichiPichiPitch'' has no shortage of amazing music.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHju0zuwURg Return to the Sea,]] Sara's ImageSong, is very powerful and memorable, especially when compared to the more poppy and lively songs that populate the series.
** Its Italian counterpart [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaHywPQTD1o Assoluto Amore]] (Absolute Love), a song [[LyricalDissonance sung by an angry voice as it celebrates]] ThePowerOfLove... Enough to ''destroy the world'', as it points out at the end.
** Its Italian counterpart [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaHywPQTD1o Assoluto Amore]] (Absolute Love), a song [[LyricalDissonance sung by an angry voice as it celebrates]] ThePowerOfLove... Enough to ''destroy the world'', as it points out at the end.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHju0zuwURg Return to the Sea,]] Sara's ImageSong, is very powerful and memorable, especially when compared to the more poppy and lively songs that populate the series.
** Itsseries. Also its Italian counterpart counterpart, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaHywPQTD1o Assoluto Amore]] (Absolute Love), a song [[LyricalDissonance sung by an angry voice as it celebrates]] ThePowerOfLove... Enough to ''destroy the world'', as it points out at the end.
** Its
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** Its Italian counterpart [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaHywPQTD1o Assoluto Amore]] (Absolute Love), a song [[LyricalDissonance sung by an angry voice as it celebrates]] ThePowerOfLove... Enough to ''destroy the world'', as it points out at the end.
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Using "unique" in two consecutive entries rather devalues the word. Also tidying up some of the grammar.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]], which happens in episode 15 of the second season and is rather touching.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]], which is sung by the original trio of mermaids.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]], which is sung by the original trio of mermaids.
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** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]], which version]] happens in episode 15 of the second season and is rather touching.
** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaidversion]], which version]] is sung by the original trio of mermaids.
** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]], which is cute and bubbly.
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** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]], which version]] is cute and bubbly.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]], which is unique in that it's slow and somewhat sorrowful.
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** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]], which is unique in that it's version]] stands out for being slow and somewhat sorrowful.
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%%* "Legend of Mermaid", the series's main theme, is lovely. There are many versions of it as well:
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version.]]
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%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version.]]
%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version.]]
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara
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* Legend of Mermaid, the series's main theme, is lovely. There are many versions of it as well:
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]]
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%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid
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%%** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZovf5QBNxk Kodou ~Perfect Harmony~]] is extremely catchy and energetic. What makes it even better is that it's one of the few songs that all 7 mermaids sing. "Perfect Harmony" indeed.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love Goes On~]] is another song that all 7 mermaids sing, although tonally it's Kodou's polar opposite. Unlike Kodou, which is a rousing call to action, Kibou no Kaneoto is a gentle lullaby full of inspiring lyrics.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love Goes On~]] is another song that all 7 mermaids sing, although tonally it's Kodou's polar opposite. Unlike Kodou, which is a rousing call to action, Kibou no Kaneoto is a gentle lullaby full of inspiring lyrics.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZovf5QBNxk Kodou ~Perfect Harmony~]] Harmony~ (Heartbeat ~Perfect Harmony~)]] is extremely catchy and energetic. What makes it even better is that it's one of the few songs that all 7 mermaids sing. "Perfect Harmony" indeed.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love GoesOn~]] On~ (The Sound of the Bells of Hope ~Love Goes On~)]] is another song that all 7 mermaids sing, although tonally it's Kodou's polar opposite. Unlike Kodou, which is a rousing call to action, Kibou no Kaneoto is a gentle lullaby full of inspiring lyrics.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love Goes
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaidversion]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_K2QNn7LLSk Mizuiro no Senritsu (The Aquamarine Melody)]], Hanon's second ImageSong, is very catchy.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_K2QNn7LLSk Mizuiro no Senritsu (The Aquamarine Melody)]], Hanon's second ImageSong, is very catchy.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHju0zuwURg Return to the Sea,]] Sara's ImageSong, is very powerful and memorable, especially when compared to the more poppy and lively songs that populate the series.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZovf5QBNxk Kodou ~Perfect Harmony~]] is extremely catchy and energetic. What makes it even better is that it's one of the few songs that all 7 mermaids sing. "Perfect Harmony" indeed.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love Goes On~]] is another song that all 7 mermaids sing, although tonally it's Kodou's polar opposite. Unlike Kodou, which is a rousing call to action, Kibou no Kaneoto is a gentle lullaby full of inspiring lyrics.
* One of Seira's [[ImageSong Image Songs]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gislhw74RNA Beautiful Wish]], is just beautiful.
* Legend of Mermaid, the series's main theme, is lovely. There are many versions of it as well:
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHju0zuwURg Return to the Sea,]] Sara's ImageSong, is very powerful and memorable, especially when compared to the more poppy and lively songs that populate the series.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AZovf5QBNxk Kodou ~Perfect Harmony~]] is extremely catchy and energetic. What makes it even better is that it's one of the few songs that all 7 mermaids sing. "Perfect Harmony" indeed.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6ZFWzT8-PQ Kibou no Kaneoto ~Love Goes On~]] is another song that all 7 mermaids sing, although tonally it's Kodou's polar opposite. Unlike Kodou, which is a rousing call to action, Kibou no Kaneoto is a gentle lullaby full of inspiring lyrics.
* One of Seira's [[ImageSong Image Songs]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gislhw74RNA Beautiful Wish]], is just beautiful.
* Legend of Mermaid, the series's main theme, is lovely. There are many versions of it as well:
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MvEpAF--dKY 7 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUThx7YVwOM 6 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ5oJI72bCA 3 mermaid version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yf7W4FnO5Yk Lucia version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEQIQ_cJdm4 Hanon version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpHNkhvvifI Rina version]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWA1omps3Es Sara version]