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*** Arguably, Queen Celestia gets one herself for sending in a double, which is smart enough to nearly prevent the humans from trusting Luna. On a meta level, the fic manages to have its cake and eat it too by providing readers with plenty of catharsis before knowingly subverting VillainDecay.
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*** Arguably, Queen Celestia gets one herself for sending in a double, which is smart enough to nearly prevent the humans from trusting Luna. On a meta level, the fic manages to have its cake and eat it too by providing readers with plenty of catharsis before knowingly subverting VillainDecay.
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* Celestia and Luna's {{"No More Holding Back" Speech}}es at the end of "Of Broken Pasts". Upon being told by Fancy Pants and Lady Flare that Stephan has been captured by Catseye and her followers, the alicorn sisters declare that ponykind is not above reproach, nor will such acts of arrogance be tolerated ever again, not to mention that [[BullyingADragon betraying humanity's trust in and of itself]] is a monumental mistake.
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* Celestia and Luna's {{"No {{No More Holding Back" Back Speech}}es at the end of "Of Broken Pasts". Upon being told by Fancy Pants and Lady Flare that Stephan has been captured by Catseye and her followers, the alicorn sisters declare that ponykind is not above reproach, nor will such acts of arrogance be tolerated ever again, not to mention that [[BullyingADragon betraying humanity's trust in and of itself]] is a monumental mistake.
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* Celestia and Luna's {{World of Cardboard Speech}}es at the end of "Of Broken Pasts". Upon being told by Fancy Pants and Lady Flare that Stephan has been captured by Catseye and her followers, the alicorn sisters declare that ponykind is not above reproach, nor will such acts of arrogance be tolerated ever again, not to mention that [[BullyingADragon betraying humanity's trust in and of itself]] is a monumental mistake.
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* Celestia and Luna's {{World of Cardboard {{"No More Holding Back" Speech}}es at the end of "Of Broken Pasts". Upon being told by Fancy Pants and Lady Flare that Stephan has been captured by Catseye and her followers, the alicorn sisters declare that ponykind is not above reproach, nor will such acts of arrogance be tolerated ever again, not to mention that [[BullyingADragon betraying humanity's trust in and of itself]] is a monumental mistake.
