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''(Asuna's eyes [[RedEyesTakeWarning glow red]], fire burns behind her, and OminousLatinChanting is heard)''\\
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''(Asuna's eyes [[RedEyesTakeWarning glow red]], fire burns behind her, and OminousLatinChanting [[Film/TheOmen “Ave Satani”]] is heard)''\\
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* Creating an actual motive for Kayaba's actions beyond the canonical "I forgot." It's hilariously ''stupid'', but believable: he accidentally created a glitch that caused people to die, was sleep deprived and slowly losing his mind from rushing the game out, and so decided to pretend it was all according to some sinister master plan. It also reconstructs the source material's attempt to make him similar to the protagonists, since Abridged!Kayaba is just as much of a broken, fucked-up mess of a person as the rest of the cast and Kirito in particular, just trying to make the best of a bad situation he no longer has any control over.
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* Creating an actual motive for The series' take on Kayaba's actions beyond the canonical "I forgot." motive. It's hilariously ''stupid'', but believable: Instead of having a god complex, and hoping to create his own world that he was in control of, he accidentally created a glitch that caused people to die, was sleep deprived and slowly losing his mind from rushing the game out, and so decided to pretend it was all according to some sinister master plan. It also reconstructs the source material's attempt to make him similar to the protagonists, since Abridged!Kayaba is just as much of a broken, fucked-up mess of a person as the rest of the cast and Kirito in particular, just trying to make the best of a bad situation he no longer has any control over.
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** There's also the mafia enforcer briefly snarking at Kayaba's NeverMyFault tendencies during that speech. Sure, it ultimately [[DisproportionateRetribution cost him]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil his life]], but it was quite brave for at least one of the "idiot" players try to take the programmer who trapped them all down a peg.
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** There's also the mafia enforcer briefly snarking at Kayaba's NeverMyFault tendencies during that speech. Sure, it ultimately [[DisproportionateRetribution cost him]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil his life]], but it was quite brave for at least one of the "idiot" players to try to and take the ego of the programmer who trapped them all down a peg.
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* Asuna's campaign of psychological warfare comes to a head when she's captured by one of her perennial victims... and is able to menace him into setting her free. Sure, [[DoomedByCanon it doesn't last]], but damn was it a close thing!
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* Asuna's campaign of psychological warfare comes to a head when she's captured by one of her perennial victims... and is able to menace him into setting her free. Sure, [[DoomedByCanon it doesn't last]], but damn was it a close thing!thing! Her threats are so terrifying that Shoji would rather admit to an EmbarrassingCoverUp that jeopardizes his workplace relations (and potentially get him on a sex offender list) instead of risking his pet getting eaten.
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** Her threats are so terrifying that Shoji would rather admit to an EmbarrassingCoverUp that jeopardizes his workplace relations (and potentially get him on a sex offender list) instead of risking his pet getting eaten.
** The meta context only makes this better. In canon, Asuna's capture and [[NaughtyTentacles molestation]] by the slug scientists was one of the most notorious scenes of the Fairy Dance arc, second only to the finale. The abridged version edits this scene and pairs it with Asuna's new status as TheDreaded to her captors, such that when [[TerrorHero Asuna's]] in the clutches of those same people, ''they're'' the ones panicking even while apprehending her, and the unsavory element of the whole scene has been spun into something comedic.
** The meta context only makes this better. In canon, Asuna's capture and [[NaughtyTentacles molestation]] by the slug scientists was one of the most notorious scenes of the Fairy Dance arc, second only to the finale. The abridged version edits this scene and pairs it with Asuna's new status as TheDreaded to her captors, such that when [[TerrorHero Asuna's]] in the clutches of those same people, ''they're'' the ones panicking even while apprehending her, and the unsavory element of the whole scene has been spun into something comedic.
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** There's also the mafia enforcer briefly snarking at Kayaba's NeverMyFault tendencies during that speech. Sure, it ultimately [[DisproportionateRetribution cost him]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil his life]], but it was quite brave for at least one of the "idiot" players try to take the programmer who trapped them all down a peg.
--->'''Kayaba:''' Do you have any idea what's been like trying to lead you people?! You ignore all my strategies, you ADAMANTLY refuse to work together, and then you blame ''ME'' for ''ALL OF YOUR PROBLEMS!!''\\
'''Mobster:''' Well, to be fair, sir, you're responsible for at least a few of them.
--->'''Kayaba:''' Do you have any idea what's been like trying to lead you people?! You ignore all my strategies, you ADAMANTLY refuse to work together, and then you blame ''ME'' for ''ALL OF YOUR PROBLEMS!!''\\
'''Mobster:''' Well, to be fair, sir, you're responsible for at least a few of them.
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Just For Pun cleanup, cutting misuse.
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-->'''Announcer:''' Complete! FlawlessVictory! ''[[JustForPun Metallurgy!]]''\\
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-->'''Announcer:''' Complete! FlawlessVictory! ''[[JustForPun Metallurgy!]]''\\''Metallurgy!''\\
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-->'''Klein''': [[BrutalHonesty I get the feeling you get beat up a lot in real life.]]
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-->'''Klein''': [[BrutalHonesty I get the feeling you get beat up a lot in real life.]]]]\\
'''Kirito:''' (''whiny'') [[ArmorPiercingResponse SHADDUP! HERE I HAVE POWER!]]
'''Kirito:''' (''whiny'') [[ArmorPiercingResponse SHADDUP! HERE I HAVE POWER!]]
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** Gotta give credit to Kirito, he improvised an entire lore surrounding some random pebble on the spot and kept it going for several hours.
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* After spending his entire first day in SAO having to ignore and endure [[{{Jerkass}} Kirito]]'s taunts, Klein patiently waits for him to finish and then shuts him up with one single line.
-->'''Klein''': [[BrutalHonesty I get the feeling you get beat up a lot in real life.]]
** Gotta give credit to Kirito, he improvised an entire lore surrounding some random pebble on the spot and kept it going for several hours.
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* After spending his entire first day in SAO having to ignore and endure [[{{Jerkass}} Kirito]]'s taunts, Klein patiently waits for him to finish and then shuts him up with one single line.
-->'''Klein''': [[BrutalHonesty I get the feeling you get beat up a lot in real life.]]
** Gotta give credit to Kirito, he improvised an entire lore surrounding some random pebble on the spot and kept it going for several hours.
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* Asuna is [[ActionGirl just as competent in combat]] as she is in the main series, but this is magnified by the fact that in the Abridged Series, she's a complete novice to [=MMORPG=]s who doesn't know what "[=XP=]" means (suggesting she's never even finished a proper battle), and is so HopelessWithTech that she hasn't figured out how to open the game's menu. Yet she's still managed to survive a whole month in a game that is now literally life or death, while developing [[LadyOfWar her own fighting style]] that even [[{{Jerkass}} Kirito]] is forced to admit is flawless, allowing her to end encounters with enemies [[SingleStrokeBattle in a single, graceful movement]]
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* Asuna is [[ActionGirl just as competent in combat]] as she is in the main series, but this is magnified by the fact that in the Abridged Series, she's a complete novice to [=MMORPG=]s who doesn't know what "[=XP=]" means (suggesting she's never even finished a proper battle), and is so HopelessWithTech that she hasn't figured out how to open the game's menu. Yet she's still managed to survive a whole month in a game that is now literally life or death, while developing [[LadyOfWar her own fighting style]] that even [[{{Jerkass}} Kirito]] is forced to admit is flawless, allowing her to end encounters with enemies [[SingleStrokeBattle in a single, graceful movement]]movement.]]
* It's more PlayedForLaughs than anything else, but a common ''house cat'' who somehow got stuffed in a [=NerveGear=], learned to play the game. Tiffany notes that it's quite impressive.
* It's more PlayedForLaughs than anything else, but a common ''house cat'' who somehow got stuffed in a [=NerveGear=], learned to play the game. Tiffany notes that it's quite impressive.
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* In an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome, Klein and his guild managed to keep TheMafia off Kirito's back despite having been ambushed during a snowstorm. This earns Klein the title of "The Legendary Warrior [=Ballsdeep69=]".
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* In an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome, Klein and his guild managed to keep TheMafia off Kirito's back despite having been ambushed during a snowstorm. This earns Klein the title of "The Legendary Warrior [=Ballsdeep69=]".
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'''Shoji:''' H-how ''the fudge'' do you know about my dog?\\
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'''Shoji:''' H-how How ''the fudge'' do you know about my dog?\\''my dog?''\\
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'''Shoji:''' My therapist says the only power you have over me is what I give you! Do your worst! None of this is real!\\
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'''Shoji:''' My therapist says the only power you have over me is what I give you! Do D-do your worst! None of this is real!\\
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'''Shoji:''' H-how the fudge do you know about my dog?\\
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'''Shoji:''' H-how the fudge ''the fudge'' do you know about my dog?\\