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Chapter 6: In which Conor decides to bitch and moan

Time for Chapter 8, where Conor...well...you know how he's kind of an asshole? Yeah, he's worse here. Also, almost this entire chapter is talking, as such, 95% of it is in script format.

We open up the chapter to see Conor on a rooftop in Station Square (for some reason...I know, I should really give up trying to make sense of this story's canon, I can't help it!) Conor calls out Fiona, who had been trying to spy on him. They converse:

-Fiona: I never met anyone like you

Conor: That's fairly obvious

Fiona: No I mean you're different not because of the power but you look at life differently, you do things no one else can and the plans you make and yet you are in love with Rouge.

Conor: She's afraid of me now that will take time and what can I say I fell in love with her.

Fiona: Whats so special about her?

Conor: I feel like I'm balanced with her around

Fiona: What?

Conor: As soon as I found out that I was fighting Sonic I was going to kill Amy and blaze but I didn't because I thought of her that she was chained up. I could have gone and killed everyone that got in my way but she taught me otherwise. In knothole I was part of Sonics group and I was gona go in and destroy every swatbot in my way but she taught me patience and understanding and I taught her too.

Fiona: Well what about now she's scared of you now ain't she.

Conor: Look I'm in love with Rouge I know you love me too.

Fiona: Look she's not your type

Oh and you are! He said in a furry-

There's more, but that's all I really feel like I need to show. Fiona spells out, plainly, that she loves Conor before asking him to return to the apartment.

Speaking of the apartment, we see Amy apparently talking to Sally. What, you're going to introduce Sally now? Apparently, now, the plan is to get Sonic and then getting rid of Eggman, who, as we know from the last chapter, is now working with Conor. Also, to make Sonic suffer, Conor wants to kidnap Tails and...turn him against Sonic using Fiona. Actually, given the canon this is trying (and I use that word very loosely) to emulate, that's not a bad idea.

Lastly, Conor and Rouge have a spat, in which Conor shows true Jerkass qualities:

-Conor: Oh I'm so fucking sorry that I didn't fucking tell oh wait let me try ahem... Hello Rouge it's me your dead boyfriend from knothole we dated and I was killed in an explosion in the emerald chamber and I lost my right arm a robot attached Metal Sonics to mine so wanna go out some time.

Rouge: You're an asshole

Conor: I lost my fucking arm trying to save the ones I loved and my friends and the entire world of Mobius but now I'm back and my own girlfriend hates me pissed because I didn't say I have a robotic arm you seemed to accept the I can't die thing why is this different

Rouge was speechless the girls looked at Conor while Fiona sat smiling looking around at the girls

Conor: In two days we go to castle Acorn and we kill anyone that gets in our way you got that. No objections good now then ladies Good Night.-

End of chapter, no Author's Note. The next chapter's a fairly long one, so be prepared for tomorrow, readers! I know I'm not!

Comments

121.219.160.30 Since: Dec, 1969
Oct 16th 2011 at 3:58:51 AM
This series is good, despite the constant lack of grammar in speech. I also have no idea what's happening in certain paragraphs. Maybe Conor needs to improve his story, just incase anybody else becomes as bewildered as I am. It is extremely out of character, though.
121.219.160.30 Since: Dec, 1969
Oct 16th 2011 at 4:01:04 AM
hahahahahahahaha., rOuge aws insultide by connar1 haha i dnt like erh.@
EnterInsanity Since: Dec, 1969
Apr 5th 2014 at 10:44:05 AM
I checked and the guy is re-writing it,and his other stories,but that is besides the point,maybe yu should read the re-write?Just a suggestion,don't feel like you have to. :P
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