Line #1 MassOhCrap/FanWorks


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6	MassOhCrap moments in FanWorks.
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8	[[AC:{{Crossover}}s]]
9	* ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'':
10	** Kennedy Jenkins and the rest of Heaven's Devils get one when Luz ''easily'' kills one of their comrades, making clear that she's on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for how they [[spoiler:slaughtered her friends]].
11	** Everyone attacking Luz at the supermarket reacts this way when [[spoiler:her cousin Riley]] goes in for the kill... only for Luz to demonstrate just how strong her HealingFactor is and has now reached her RageBreakingPoint.
12	* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11701126/1/Anything-Goes-Game-Changer Anything Goes Game Changer]]'': Except for Minaka (who's crazy), everyone working at MBI has this reaction when it's revealed that Ranma Saotome isn't an unknown Sekirei, but a human martial artist, meaning there's likely ''more'' people out there who can effortless curbstomp the average Sekirei.
13	* ''Fanfic/TheChaoticMasters'': Most of the world's various magic-associated beings, both good and evil, freak out upon realizing that the Chaotic Masters are returning.
14	* ''Fanfic/ChaldeaEvilIncorporated'': In chapter 7, The various Servants all panic when Berserker heads towards them in fury [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom after Iskandar damages the Einzbern Ruins while escaping with his master Doofensmirtz]]. He and Atalanta especially freak out when she recognizes Berserker as her former crewmate, [[WorldsStrongestMan Heracles]].
15	* ''Fanfic/ChildOfTheStorm'': After being put through a TraumaCongaLine in ''Ghosts of the Past'', Harry [[spoiler:snaps and becomes the Dark Phoenix]]. The Avengers and their allies are horrified, and as the LemonyNarrator puts it:
16	-->"To put it in the simplest terms possible, the Gods and Goddesses (and Devils, Demons and other assorted entities of that ilk) of Earth completely and utterly lost their shit."
17	* In ''Roleplay/{{Communication}}'', EVERYONE is scrambling like headless chickens when it is informed that [[spoiler:'''[[EldritchAbomination Orion]]''']] is coming to Earth for [[TheProtagonist Taylor]]. Best summed up by our heroine herself:
18	-->'''Taylor:''' B-but five and a half hours!? And he’s after ME!? Shit! Shit Shit Shit!
19	* ''Fanfic/DostThouEvenStealHearts'':
20	** In Chapter 36, the faculty at U.A. has a collective freakout after Nezu reveals that Joker broke into the teacher's lounge during the Sports Festival.
21	** All of Japan reacts this way when Nezu publicly reveals that Joker is a minor.
22	* ''Fanfic/DungeonKeeperAmi'': The general reaction of the forces of good to Ami's victory over the avatar. Later, their reaction to her consuming a Lesser Aspect of Crowned Death.
23	* In ''Fanfic/AnEntryWithABang!'', the marauding pirates get this reaction when they find out that Earth has nukes and isn't afraid of using them.
24	* The ''Fanfic/JWITCHSeries'': All the heroes (and some of the villains, for that matter) react this way at the climax of "Twilight of Darkness", when [[spoiler:[[TheStarscream Wong]] successfully resurrects [[HijackedByGanon Shendu]]]].
25	* ''Fanfic/KedaborysMuppetMania'': In Episode 8, the Frog Scouts' song comes to an abrupt end when they notice an actual moose has wandered onto the set, causing them to scatter in a panic.
26	* During a forced {{Dungeon Crawl\|ing}} in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10623866/1/Sekirei-Is-that-some-new-species-of-little-sister Sekirei? Is that some new species of little sister]]'', everyone panics when Minaka rolls a Die of Power and gets a 1. The lower a roll below ten the worse the effect is (An 8 spawned an Ogre and a 4 had spawned a Xenomorph).
27	** This occurs again when the group shoots the resulting boss with plasma rifles (which they got from rolling a Die of Power and getting a 16) and it [[NoSell no sells]] the blasts.
28	* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8933408/14/Wizard-Runemaster Wizard Runemaster]]'', the [[KnightTemplar Scarlet Crusaders]] panic after Harry gets around their temporary invincibility using the [[NoSavingThrow Killing Curse]] on them.
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30	[[AC:''Franchise/{{Batman}}'']]
31	* ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'': In Chapter 7m ComicBook/TheCreeper bumps into three crooks breaking into an ATM. Believing him to be ComicBook/TheJoker (after all, Creeper ''is'' a green-haired laughing madman), they "managed to get out a string of frightened obscenities" before running away.
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33	[[AC:''Franchise/DanganRonpa'']]
34	* Suffice to say, given [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaTriggerHappyHavoc what they're watching]], Class 78 has a lot of these moments in ''Fanfic/Class78thWatchesTheFuture'', but none of them are PlayedForLaughs. Some of the bigger moments include:
35	** [[spoiler:Watching Jin Kirigiri getting executed]]
36	** [[spoiler:Meeting Monokuma and seeing the [[DeadlyGame situation]] they're in]]
37	** [[spoiler:Really, all the times Monokuma reveals a motive]]
38	** [[spoiler:The successive deaths of Sayaka and Mukuro disguised as Junko]]
39	** [[spoiler:Makoto being accused of Sayaka's murder because of his bathroom being the scene of the crime]]
40	** [[spoiler:Sakura being revealed as TheMole]]
41	* ''Fanfic/ExtraLife'': In Chapter 24, [[spoiler:Chiaki]] reassures their companions that the cyber department will be safe from the brainwashed soldiers... [[ExplainExplainOhCrap except]]:
42	-->''We told them to barricade themselves in.''\
43	''There's a brainwashing video being broadcast.''\
44	''The room they're in is full of monitors.''\
45	It sank in for everyone at the exact same time. "''Shit!''"
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47	[[AC:''Franchise/TheDCU'']]
48	* In ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', the whole Monster Society of Evil freak out when ComicBook/{{Shazam}} manages to break free from his restrains.
49	-->"Oh, dear," said the Weeper, pulling out his handkerchief and wringing it. "Oh, my."\
50	"Oh, hell," offered the Rat.
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52	[[AC:''Franchise/DisneyAnimatedCanon'']]
53	* ''Fanfic/TheBoltChronicles'': In "The Cakes", the three [[CoveredInGunge gunge-encrusted]] pets freeze with panic after Penny's angry mother discovers they have ruined her bake-sale pastries. They quickly make a beeline for the doggy door to try and escape.
54	* ''Fanfic/WhatAboutWitchQueen'': everyone on Royal Council of Arendelle freezes in shock (no pun intended) when they realize the whole extent of Drachner's plans and that he might end up [[spoiler:AwakeningTheSleepingGiant, effectively getting Arendelle conquered by Tampere]].
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56	[[AC:''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}''/''Franchise/{{Monsterverse}}'']]
57	* ''Fanfic/AbraxasHrodvitnon'': In this ''Film/GodzillaKingOfTheMonsters2019'' fanfiction, the G-Team, upon realizing that not all of Ghidorah was destroyed at Boston because Godzilla missed San's severed head that he previously tore off in Mexico, react with silence before new G-Team operative Ford Brody hisses out a curse.
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59	[[AC:''Franchise/HarryPotter'']]
60	* ''Fanfic/TheOddsWereNeverInMyFavour'': 2/3rds of the Gryffindors taking the magical tournament preliminaries develop expressions of horror upon being told that the 3rd preliminary will test their abilities in potion-making (a class which not a single Gryffindor is good at since [[spoiler:Hermione transferred to Ravenclaw]]).
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62	[[AC:''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'']]
63	* ''Fanfic/IAintADollThisAintADollhouse'':
64	** The [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind Passione members]] all flinch in chapter 9 when they learn they are in 1938 Italy, which is currently under Fascist control.
65	** In chapter 10, the Hamon-Users of [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Part 2]] are shaken that a Pillar Man has infiltrated Air Supplena Island, with Mr. Joestar ordering all non-Hamon users to spend their night in Coco Jumbo's Stand [[PocketDimension Mr. President]] until the crisis is dealt with.
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67	[[AC:''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'']]
68	* ''Fanfic/HeroesInForgoneDreams'': The Star Allies' reaction when [[spoiler:Soul Fecto]] manages to take down [[spoiler:Dyna Blade]], which gives [[spoiler:Fecto]] the chance to [[TheAssimilator assimilate them all]].
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70	[[AC:''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'']]
71	* ''Fanfic/BurningSecret'': In Lincoln’s first nightmare, Lucy, the twins, Clyde, Rusty, Zach, Liam, Ronnie Anne, and Mrs. Johnson’s eyes all widen in fear when he threatens to kill them.
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73	[[AC:''Manga/LoveHina'']]
74	* ''Fanfic/ForHisOwnSake'': All of the Hinata Girls (save Shinobu, who had [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere already moved out]]) react this way when Aunt Marumi reveals that she's the new owner and is converting the place back to a proper inn. She reads the residents the riot act for being a bunch of {{Spoiled Brat}}s and evicts the lot, declaring they need a good, harsh dose of reality.
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76	[[AC:''Franchise/MassEffect'']]
77	* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9271192/1/Transcendent-Humanity Transcendent Humanity]]'': When a Turian fleet sends a suppression fleet to Sol, they expect to find a young race that's only just entered space. Instead they find a fleet numbering in the ''tens of thousands'' waiting for them.
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79	[[AC:''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']]
80	* ''Fanfic/MarinettesWeekOff'': While Alya stubbornly resists the idea of admitting how much she needs Marinette's help, she eventually gives in... and [[EntitledBastard expects her former friend]] to respond promptly to her S.O.S, complaining bitterly about her lack of response. Then Nathaniel reminds the class that their "everyday Ladybug" is currently in the middle of her ''one week off'', and won't be coming back from her vacation to bail them all out. Cute the whole class panicking.
81	* ''[[Fanfic/RateThis Rate This (Trust is Hard to Come By)]]'':
82	** Alya, Adrien, and the rest of Marinette's [[FairWeatherFriend Fair-Weather Friends]] initially greet Gardener's announcement that her akuma powers will expose how much or how little Ladybug trusts everyone in Paris by joking about how highly they'll ''obviously'' wind up scoring, with Alya spitefully predicting Marinette will barely make it into the double digits. Then Gardener's magic reaches them and Alya sees that she wound up with a ''2'', the lowest out of the whole akuma class.
83	** She and the others get another collective one when Chloé justifies Marinette's 92 by reminding Alya how Marinette was the one who arranged her first interview with Ladybug, declaring that she's been [[FriendOfMaskedSelf friends with her alter ego]] all along... with Marinette adding that she's been showing Ladybug all of the [[{{Cyberbullying}} nasty messages]] they've been sending her.
84	** This is notably {{Averted\|Trope}} with Miss Bustier; despite being present for the latter revelation, she only reacts upon hearing that Ladybug will be contacting the school board with evidence of how she's let all of the bullying go unchallenged, underscoring just how little she cares about ''any'' of her students.
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86	[[AC:''Franchise/MyHeroAcademia'']]
87	* ''Fanfic/{{Apotheosis\|MHA}}'': [[VillainProtagonist Izuku]] tends to provoke these kind of reactions whenever he does anything major to show off his power, influence, or intelligence. Especially the latter, as he proves to be TheChessmaster over and over again.
88	* ''Fanfic/ChangeUp'': Everyone participating in U.A.'s Entrance Exam joins in on one when they collectively realize that the final phase features robots that can [[spoiler:use Quirks]].
89	* ''Fanfic/{{Nutricula}}'': During the League of Villain's assault on the USJ, all of Class 1-A have this reaction when Kurogiri grabs one of their classmates and surrounds them with his portals, causing their limbs to stick out in places scattered all around the compound. Mainly because it dawns upon them that he's setting up a PortalCut, and is about to execute [[spoiler:Izuku]] in front of everyone.
90	* Everyone in Izuku's testing site panics in chapter 9 of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13639506/9/Quantity-of-Quirks Quantity of Quirks]]'' when it turns out Izuku (plus Kirishima, Ochako, and Kyoka) was right about the test having already started. None of them realize it until ''fifteen minutes'' into an hour long exam when Midnight announces over the PA system that they must be awfully confident to give their competition such a massive headstart.
91	* ''Fanfic/TheReasonWhyTheSecondMetaLiberationWarIsGoingToBeWeird'' has the whole HPSC panicking once they realize that [[spoiler:Hawks has escaped with all of their blackmail materials]].
92	* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/50766844 Spiked Drink]]'' has a group of would-be kidnappers spiking Pro Hero Shouto's drink. He moves into the bathroom and into their trap, but their plans are disrupted by [[SpannerInTheWorks Izuku]] showing up, as they panic about how they can't fight the Number One Hero. While they [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere attempt to escape]], Izuku snares them with Blackwhip, ordering the also-present Bakugo to call the police.
93	* ''Fanfic/{{Statistic}}'' features Toshinori going undercover as a Quirkless teacher at [[SuckySchool Aldera Middle School]]. After enduring constant abuse and mockery from the rest of his coworkers, he finally induces one of these by transforming into All Might in front of them all, causing them to realize they'd been BullyingADragon the whole time.
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95	[[AC:''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'']]
96	* ''Fanfic/DiscordsNewBusiness'': The general reaction when people see Princess Pinkie Pie is sheer terror.
97	* ''Fanfic/TheGreatAlicornHunt'': The Mane Six have all ascended into Alicorns, and two Galas (one for the adults of the upper crust, one for their kids) are being held after their official coronation. During the Junior Gala, the four members of the CMC (and their newest friend, Fluttershy's little brother Breezy Shy) inform a group of colts and fillies from Manehatten, who are also attending and have a history with Babs Seed, that they're kin to the new princesses. Pennyworth and his goons don't believe them, leading to a [[CurbStompBattle big fight]] with the CMC and Breezy. Later, as the bullies are in the infirmary, they're plotting their revenge... and have this reaction when they realize the CMC were telling the truth, [[spoiler:courtesy of an angry Princess Applejack showing up, having overheard everything they'd been saying]].
98	** Later on, the original three [=CMCs=] all end up ascending into Alicorns as well. Cue the entire population of Ponyville having this reaction when the news breaks on all three of them in the same issue of the morning paper.
99	* ''Fanfic/HowILostMyMother'': In ''The Ending of the End, Part III'', Cozy Glow reveals that she found the Rook her Alicorn powers were sealed into and demonstrates just how powerful it is via a mountain-shattering KamehameHadoken. Princess Celestia and all of her allies are naturally horrified by this.
100	* The ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'':
101	** A very good one happens in the [[BadFuture Dark World]] arc, when [[spoiler:[[SixthRangerTraitor Rancor]] literally stabs Discord InTheBack]]. The action grinds to a stop as every character freezes in shock at the unexpected twist, and everyone realizes that this changes ''everything'' -- even [[TheVoice the Nameless Passenger]] realizes that its well-scripted plans have been [[SpannerInTheWorks ruined]] now.
102	** Later in the same arc, there's another when [[spoiler:everyone discovers that Pinkie's been SecretlyDying since her Element of Rage was shattered. Even [[OneWingedAngel Odyne!]][[FinalBoss Cruelty]] freezes up in shock]].
103	** In the Rumors Arc, [[spoiler:the defeated Nyarlathotrot and his family that helped him]] have a big one when [[spoiler:their [[TopGod Elder]] Azerhorse ''speaks''. Given Azerhorse intentionally doing ''anything'' is nearly unheard of, they more or less instantly know their parent is royally clopped off at the lot of them]].
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105	[[AC:''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'']]
106	* ''Fanfic/EscapeFromTheHokagesHat'': A large squad of over 50 Iwa ninja bump into Tsunade's group (Tsunade, Naruto, Hinata, Shizune and Hana) and engage them in a fight (read: surprise attack). While frustrated at how the group is somewhat surviving the attack, many find themselves constantly switching from sheer abject rage to deep terror when they start noticing that there is a blonde 13 year old boy in the group. Who is skilled at Taijutsu, moves incredibly quickly, and knows how to use the Rasengan. Just like Konoha's Yellow Flash.
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108	[[AC:''Franchise/NeonGenesisEvangelion'']]
109	* ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'': When they watch [[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination Zeruel]] defeating Rei and crushing the two drone-controlled Evas single-handedly and easily]], everyone shows this reaction.
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111	[[AC:''Webcomic/OnePunchMan'']]
112	* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12978919/27/One-Punch-Man-Hero-s-Harem One Punch Man: Hero's Harem]]'', everyone aware of Saitama's power panics when [[CannibalismSuperpower Vacuuma]] eats him, fearing the monster will become truly unstoppable. Luckily, Saitama simply punches his way out without being absorbed.
113	* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11718714/1/Serious-Saitama Serious Saitama]]'' the various S-Rank heroes are all shocked/terrified that the Subterraneans they were struggling against were only a ''tenth'' of their forces, even more so that the remaining ninety percent are all being defeated by a single man.
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115	[[AC:''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'']]
116	* A couple of serious examples in ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'', both of them involving [[TheDreaded Gyarados]]:
117	** In Twenty Gyarados Bill Gaiden, a large crowd in the Cianwood City harbor is horrified when Bill's first Gyarados rises out of the water, because they realize what happened to Bill's crewmates (he had killed them not long ago), and that they're next. Then another Gyarados rises out of the water and kills twenty-four humans with one bite, terrifying the unfortunate townspeople even more. As more and more Gyarados, all of them obviously belonging to Bill, reveal themselves to the increasingly scared populace while Bill continues to rant, many of them [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere start running in panic...]] not that it does them much good, since the entire harbor is quickly destroyed by a barrage of Hyper Beam attacks.
118	** In the Laramie Gaiden, both the Ranger and Trainer battleships realize their battle injured a school of Gyarados, who are ''not'' happy about this, so they quickly set aside their differences to get the hell out of there. Like in the above example, it barely does them any good, especially when one of them [[WeatherOfWar summons a rainstorm]], and [[GiantWallOfWateryDoom a large wave ends up swallowing the lifeboats]].
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120	[[AC:RealPersonFic]]
121	* In ''[[http://fav.me/dd7ow55 Case of the Technology]]'', pretty much after finding out [[spoiler:Music/MelanieC]] had been [[AnArmandaLeg dismembered]] with her [[BrainInAJar head placed in a device]] to keep her ALIVE, before being placed inside of an [[BodyInABreadbox a chest freezer]]. With no other choice, the recovery crew had to finished up what was started. The narrator especially has this when [[spoiler:MelanieC]] woke up to see what was done to her, ala ''Film/MarsAttacks''. Bad timing to be playing "[[Music/{{Rammstein}} Mein Teil]]" indeed.
122	* In Chapter 55, ''[[https://my.w.tt/65LeZe02rT In the Dark]]'', Melanie is put under hypnotism, she reveals what she went though, almost being a victim of a HumanSacrifice. After this, the rest of the Music/SpiceGirls left in tears while the Music/BackstreetBoys were just stunned, along with the court officials.
123	** Earlier on, the bus accident also prompted this, same with Melanie thanks to the trauma.
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125	[[AC:''Franchise/{{RWBY}}'']]
126	* ''Fanfic/{{White Sheep\|RWBY}}'': The entire Kingdom of Vale (and presumably the rest of the world, though we don't see their reactions) freaks out when they realize that the "mindless" Grimm are being controlled by an intelligent being who is actively holding them back from wiping out humanity...and the Kingdom of Atlas just pissed him off.
127	-->If every Grimm in Vale came, the city would fall. If every Grimm in the ''world'' came, the world would fall.
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129	[[AC:''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'']]
130	* ''Fanfic/SonicXDarkChaos'': Everyone - including [[{{Satan}} Maledict]] himself - has one of these in Episode 75 when [[spoiler:Dark Tails steals the Chaos Emeralds and becomes a god]].
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132	[[AC:''Franchise/StarTrek'']]
133	* A multiway OhCrap ensues due to a GambitPileup early in ''Fanfic/DontSayGoodbyeFarewell''. Janice Qua and her crew have an OhCrap when what she thought was a freighter about to be attacked by Orions suddenly broadcasts the IFF of USS ''George Hammond'' and opens fire on said Orions. Further {{Oh Crap}}s ensue when the second Federation starship Eleya had with her appears, and then when Eleya, who is experienced at fighting Klingons, is able to track Qua's fleeing birds-of-prey through their cloak for a few minutes. Eleya, conversely, has an OhCrap when Qua's bird-of-prey wolfpack decloaks and attacks the Orion ship she was luring in. For their part, the Orions just plain panic and open fire on ''everybody''.
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135	[[AC:''Franchise/TouhouProject'']]
136	* ''Fanfic/{{A New World\|IcedFairy}}'':
137	-->[[spoiler:[[BackFromTheDead Yukari Yakumo]]]]: [[VideoGame/{{Portal2}} It's been a long time. How have you been? I've been really busy being dead... after you murdered me.]]
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139	[[AC:''Series/TheToyCastle'']]
140	* ''Fanfic/TheHospitalToys'': In the first chapter, the toys all get into a mass panic when they suddenly wake up in a completely new playroom.
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142	[[AC:''Literature/{{Worm}}'']]
143	* ''Fanfic/WeaverNine'': The Society tries using replicas of the ''[[TheDreaded Simurgh]]'' to psyche out Leviathan, as well as gauge his reactions and senses. While the success of that experiment is debatable, it caused a panicked retreat among the Protectorate force.
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