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* MoralEventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimenting on her eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimenting on her eggs and planning to "mate" her with ChromatusChromatus.
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* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
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* TakeThat: In an argument with him early in the book, Aggra angrily confronts Thrall about "gossip" regarding potential relationships with Jaina (and before her, Taretha), and tells him off. Considering Golden wrote the novel where Aggra first appeared and sunk the ship, it's hard not to see this as a TakeThat aimed at Thrall/Jaina shippers.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting experimenting on her eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
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* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* MoralEventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on her eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
* MoralEventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on her eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time, especially when he realizes what will happen and knows he can't stop it]].
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* MoralRventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on hetr eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* MoralRventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on hetr eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time, especially when he realizes what will happen and knows he can't stop it]].
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* MoralRventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on hetr eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatusit]].
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* MoralRventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on hetr eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time]].
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time]].
Time, especially when he realizes what will happen and knows he can't stop it]].
* CompleteMonster: The TwilightFather.Father.
*MoralRventHorizon: The Twilight Father's treatment of Kirygosa, particularly experimebting on hetr eggs and planning to "mate" her with Chromatus
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time]].
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler:Time-travelling Thrall and his dying father in the Caverns of Time]].Time]].
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
* CompleteMonster: The Twilight Father.
