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* DracoInLeatherPants: While in canon it was ambiguous if Loki's scepter had any influence on how Ultron turned out and his creation and subsequent turn to villainy are treated as a mistake Tony made (even by the man himself), here all the blame for Ultron's villainy is shifted to Thanos and the scepter, essentially absolving Tony of any blame.
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** Thor waking up in the middle of the night to realize he can no longer feel the Bifrost, indicating that Asgard has been destroyed. His grief results in New York City's first ever monsoon.
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** Thor waking up in the middle of the night to realize he can no longer feel the Bifrost, indicating that Asgard has been destroyed. His grief results in New York City's first ever monsoon.monsoon.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Not kind to Team Cap.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Basically all of Tony's supporters who know of it consider the Penthouse incident (Thor choking Tony) not just this for Thor, but for the Avengers as a whole, Thor was oblivious to the fragility of humans, the others were not and yet not only did they not try to defend Tony, they continued to harass him when Thor released him, showing no regard for Tony's safety. The consequences included Tony leaving the team and cementing Maria's HeelFaceTurn.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Basically all of Tony's supporters who know of it consider the Penthouse incident (Thor choking Tony) not just is this for Thor, but for the Avengers as a whole, whole (though, ironically enough, not for Thor himself); while Thor was oblivious to the fragility of humans, the others were not and yet not only did they not try to defend Tony, they continued to harass him when Thor released him, showing no regard for Tony's safety. The consequences included Tony leaving the team and cementing team, Maria's HeelFaceTurn.HeelFaceTurn, and Thor himself having a ''massive'' MyGodWhatHaveIDone reaction.
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave their home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave their home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.tears.
** Thor waking up in the middle of the night to realize he can no longer feel the Bifrost, indicating that Asgard has been destroyed. His grief results in New York City's first ever monsoon.
** Thor waking up in the middle of the night to realize he can no longer feel the Bifrost, indicating that Asgard has been destroyed. His grief results in New York City's first ever monsoon.
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** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.
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** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there their home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMan
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMan
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMantears.
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMan
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*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.tears.
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMan
* WordOfGod: Don't Call Me Carrie offers several bits of information in authors notes after each chapter incuding;
** The incident of PoorCommunicationKills over Thor: The Dark World between Tony and SHIELD
** Peter being based on his Film/TheAmazingSpiderMan
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** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.
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** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.him.
*TearJerker
** The SWORD agents may have a lot of Funny moments in the story but there are glimpses of the immense trauma hiding underneath them. A lot of them are jumpy and on edge constantly or suffering the after effects of brainwashing.
*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
*TearJerker
** The SWORD agents may have a lot of Funny moments in the story but there are glimpses of the immense trauma hiding underneath them. A lot of them are jumpy and on edge constantly or suffering the after effects of brainwashing.
*** It isn't just former SHIELD agents who were attacked. The side story shows not only Analysts being captured, but JARVIS saving the ''civilian family'' of an agent, instructing them to leave there home and hole up in a nearby motel until they could be extracted. [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything The disheveled, visibly distressed, mother and children arriving at the motel in the middle of the night]] prompts the receptionist to slide her a pamphlet on domestic abuse, which drives her to tears.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Basically all of Tony's supporters who know of it consider the Penthouse incident (Thor choking Tony) not just this for Thor, but for the Avengers as a whole, Thor was oblivious to the fragility of humans, the others were not and yet not only did they not try to defend Tony, they continued to harass him when Thor released him, showing no regard for Tony's safety. The consequences included Tony leaving the team and cementing Maria's HeelFaceTurn.
** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.
** Made worse because in canon the role the scepter and Thanos had in the creation of Ultron were left ambiguous, placing the bulk of the responsibility on Tony's shoulders. In this? It is explicitly stated, both in the narrative and out loud by Ultron during the attack that he was ''entirely'' a creation of Thanos hiding in the Scepter, Tony had was completely '''innocent''' of his creation and they still blamed him.
