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* GeniusBonus: Mackie's narrative describes how he found a copy of Tam Lin among Emma’s books. Tam Lin is a centuries old Scottish ballad in which the heroine, Janet, rescues Tam Lin from his fairy captors before they use him as a tithe to hell.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Pastor Doyle. Of the Doyle family, he gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith or if he belongs to his own spectrum of belief.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Pastor Doyle. Of the Doyle family, he gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith or if he belongs to his own spectrum of belief.
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* GeniusBonus: Mackie's narrative describes how he found a copy of Tam Lin among Emma’s Emma's books. Tam Lin is a centuries old Scottish ballad in which the heroine, Janet, rescues Tam Lin from his fairy captors before they use him as a tithe to hell.
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*CompleteMonster: [[WouldHurtAChild The Lady]] is a narcissistic [[TheFairFolk Fay]] clinging to the last vestiges of power and authority. With her pact with the town of Gentry, she reigns over them, and has them [[HumanSacrifice sacrifice]] children once every seven years that she keeps as a pet, torments and eventually kills and [[ChildEater devours]], with a girl named Natalie the next of her victims. Setting fire to a church which causes a fatality upon being challenged, the Lady also tries to kill Mackie Doyle and others by handing them over to her TortureTechnician, the Cutter, to gruesomely murder.
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* CompleteMonster: The Lady, as she shows no remorse for her actions.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Pastor Doyle. He Of the Doyle family, he gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith or if he belongs to his own spectrum of belief.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharscter: TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Pastor Doyle. He gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention whether he believes in Them, has a stronger belief in god, or belongs into some bizarre spectrum of belief. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharscter: Pastor Doyle. He gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention whether he believes in Them, has a stronger belief in god, or belongs into some bizarre spectrum of belief. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharscter: Pastor Doyle. He gets significantly less page time in comparison to Sharon and Emma and he isn’t even given a first name. Emma tells Mackie that their dad has a hard time with seeing kids (or rather their replacements) die, but he never admits this to Mackie himself. There’s also no mention whether he believes in Them, has a stronger belief in god, or belongs into some bizarre spectrum of belief. There’s also no mention of whether the existence of Them or their practice of tithing stolen children ever questioned his faith.
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