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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[DevelopingDoomedCharacters wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[DevelopingDoomedCharacters wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]]'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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-->Bree: I was optimistic, though. If I could outrun a werewolf, I could outrun a fourteen year old bloodsucking anesthesiologist, right?
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--> Alec: She was one of my kind, yes, but one of a kind as well…which was peculiar since threads of my cold, empirical logic saw nothing remarkable about her in the least. She was a girl – my age or near to – with the enchanting beauty typical of all female vampires but not to the same memorizing extent as Heidi. Nonetheless, there was some ethereal quality to the girl that I couldn't place anymore than I could ignore.
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--> Alec: '''Alec:''' She was one of my kind, yes, but one of a kind as well…which was peculiar since threads of my cold, empirical logic saw nothing remarkable about her in the least. She was a girl – my age or near to – with the enchanting beauty typical of all female vampires but not to the same memorizing extent as Heidi. Nonetheless, there was some ethereal quality to the girl that I couldn't place anymore than I could ignore.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.See Funny Moments above.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome/ CrowningMomentOfFunny: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: When Bree [[spoiler: kicks Alec off the Lutheran Cathedral]], now THAT takes some sheer gall.
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
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* RomanticPlotTumor: The story starts off exciting, fairly fast-paced and plot driven, with Bree traveling around the world looking for her lost friend Fred. It skips out on nearly all of the [[TwentyMinutesWithJerks [[DevelopingDoomedCharacters wedding scenes and prep at the beginning of Breaking Dawn]], and thankfully doesn't pause to linger on Bella and Edward's relationship. Six chapters in, Bree meets Alec and the story grinds to a halt for at least another five chapters to focus on the romance. Then apparently the tumor became malignant and [[ScheduleSlip killed the story]]. Of course, given that this is ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction, it's not [[StrangledByTheRedString all that unexpected]].
