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** Amazana Yoriko being a Japanese Nazi was once considered just another one of the fic's many absurdities. Fast-forward to increased awareness of fascist and nationalist sentiment in Japan...

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** Amazana Yoriko being a Japanese Nazi was once considered just another one of the fic's many absurdities.weird quirks. Fast-forward to increased awareness of fascist and nationalist sentiment in Japan...
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** The MST has a joke wherein Ami interprets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.

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** The MST has a joke wherein Ami interprets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given that Spacey's career was eventually torpedoed by sexual transgressions, misconduct accusations, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.
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** Gen. Torymura is meant to be seen as a good man for taking in Makoto, [[spoiler: his niece]] following their reunion. However, no reason is provided as to why he didn’t adopt her sooner, making him come off as neglectful.

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** Gen. Torymura is meant to be seen as a good man for taking in Makoto, [[spoiler: his [[spoiler:his niece]] Makoto following their reunion. However, no reason is provided as to it's never explained why he didn’t adopt her sooner, making him come off as neglectful.neglectful to some readers.
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** To non-fans, the ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' characters come off as pretty unlikeable due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their worst aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.

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** To non-fans, the ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' characters come off as pretty unlikeable due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their worst aspects, making aspects. This makes the Lawndale Militia taking over seem more cathartic than horrific.
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** To non-fans, the ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' characters come off as pretty unlikeable due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their unpleasant aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.

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** To non-fans, the ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' characters come off as pretty unlikeable due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their unpleasant worst aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.
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Removed snark.


** For some reason, the story spends a significant amount of time on Akbar doing such riveting activities as ordering his rental car and later on the rather lengthy process of ordering his plane ticket to UsefulNotes/{{Berlin}}.
** Oh whoops, is it time to transform? Better spend a few paragraphs on everyone calling out their transformation phrases. Though this is technically using the transformation sequences the same way the actual show does.
** Much of the build-up to the Lawndale Militia taking over the town contributes very little to the story, and simply creates plot holes (Corlew states that America’s inefficiency has been proven by [[InsaneTrollLogic a Japanese plane being hijacked by Middle Eastern terrorists]] in one scene.

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** For some reason, the story spends a significant amount of time on Akbar doing such riveting activities as things like ordering his rental car and later on the rather lengthy process of ordering his plane ticket to UsefulNotes/{{Berlin}}.
** Oh whoops, is it time The story tends to transform? Better spend a few paragraphs on everyone calling out their transformation phrases. Though phrases, though this is technically using the transformation sequences the same way the actual show does.
** Much of the build-up to the Lawndale Militia taking over the town contributes very little to the story, and simply creates plot holes (Corlew states that America’s inefficiency has been proven by [[InsaneTrollLogic a Japanese plane being hijacked by Middle Eastern terrorists]] in one scene.scene).
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* CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.''
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* CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.

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* CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.''

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I think Canon Defilement is a YMMV trope that specifically states "No examples, please." on its page.


* CanonDefilement: Where to even begin?
** The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.
** Even the cast of ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' gets mangled. Why the hell is Mr. "I may as well have the flag tattooed on my forehead" [=DeMartino=] using an AK-47? (For those who don't know: an AK-47 is a ''Russian'' gun.)

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* CanonDefilement: Where to even begin?
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CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.
** Even the cast of ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' gets mangled. Why the hell is Mr. "I may as well have the flag tattooed on my forehead" [=DeMartino=] using an AK-47? (For those who don't know: an AK-47 is a ''Russian'' gun.)
story.
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** The WesternAnimation/{{Daria}} characters come off as this to non-fans, due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their unpleasant aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.

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** The WesternAnimation/{{Daria}} To non-fans, the ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' characters come off as this to non-fans, pretty unlikeable due to {{Flanderization}} bringing out all of their unpleasant aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.
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As Braz said in the YMMV for "If I Was Your Nazi", this trope should apply to fanon in general, not individual works. For the latter case, Adaptational Jerkass would be more appropriate.


* RonTheDeathEater: WesternAnimation/BeavisAndButthead are, in their own series, crude at best, but too brainless to contemplate actual harm (they're more likely to hurt ''themselves''). In this story, they've been elevated to violent rapists obsessed with capturing Quinn.
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** The WesternAnimation/{{Daria}} characters come off as this to non-fans, due to {{Flanderization}} brining out all of their unpleasant aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.

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** The WesternAnimation/{{Daria}} characters come off as this to non-fans, due to {{Flanderization}} brining bringing out all of their unpleasant aspects, making the Lawndale Militia taking over more cathartic than horrific.
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* OlderThanTheyThink: While admittedly a fairly silly idea, a Japanese woman being a Nazi was previously used as a plot in Series/TokyuuShireiSolbrain. And if anything, it was even more insane than this story (in that she’s being influenced by an evil painting).

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* OlderThanTheyThink: While admittedly a fairly silly idea, a Japanese woman being a Nazi was previously used as a plot in Series/TokyuuShireiSolbrain.''Series/TokkyuuShireiSolbrain''. And if anything, it was even more insane than this story (in that she’s being influenced by an evil painting).
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* OlderThanTheyThink: While admittedly a fairly silly idea, a Japanese woman being a Nazi was previously used as a plot in Series/TokyuuShireiSolbrain. And if anything, it was even more insane than this story (in that she’s being influenced by an evil painting).
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** Much of the build-up to the Lawndale Militia taking over the town contributes very little to the story, and simply creates plot holes (Corlew states that America’s inefficiency has been proven by [[InsaneTrollLogic a Japanese plane being hijacked by Middle Eastern terrorists]] in one scene.
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* CanonDefilement: Hoo Boy!

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* CanonDefilement: Hoo Boy!Where to even begin?
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* CanonDefilement: Hoo Boy!
** The author, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.
** Even the cast of ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' gets mangled. Why the hell is Mr. "I may as well have the flag tattooed on my forehead" [=DeMartino=] using an AK-47? (For those who don't know: an AK-47 is a ''Russian'' gun.)
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** The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.

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** The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpets interprets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.
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* UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The nature of its terrorist plot aside, it's hard to imagine this sort of crossover being written after the late '90s, when the ''Daria'' fandom was more active and visible.

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Critical Research Failure is now a disambiguation page. Also, Funny Aneurysm Moment has been merged with Harsher In Hindsight.


* CriticalResearchFailure:
** The author makes numerous hilarious and obvious mistakes when attempting to document Japanese history and discuss its culture. This is particularly funny considering the author felt the need to dedicate a significant portion of his fanfic to presenting himself as an expert on it.
** The author also, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.
** Even the cast of ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' gets mangled. Why the hell is Mr. "I may as well have the flag tattooed on my forehead" [=DeMartino=] using an AK-47? (For those who don't know: an AK-47 is a ''Russian'' gun.)
** Rei is a ''Shinto'' priestess. She invokes the wrong gods and sometimes seems to be replicating Buddhist rituals, as well as just doing things the author made up that are very out of place with the behavior of a Shinto priestess.
** An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilibuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the UsefulNotes/UnitedNations or UsefulNotes/{{NATO}} with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].
* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.
* HarsherInHindsight:

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* CriticalResearchFailure:
HarsherInHindsight:
** The author makes numerous hilarious and obvious mistakes when attempting to document Japanese history and discuss its culture. This is particularly funny considering the author felt the need to dedicate a significant portion of his fanfic to presenting himself as an expert on it.
** The author also, despite claiming to have watched every episode of ''Anime/SailorMoon'' in Japanese, manages to prove repeatedly that he hadn't watched anything that wasn't dubbed into English circa 1997. In addition to Guerin repeatedly referring to "Chibi-Usa" as "Chib'''''a'''''-Usa", one hilarious scene involves the Sailor Senshi needing to heal a grievous wound inflicted upon Sailor Moon. Mamoru calls them on his cellphone and has Jupiter go and get Sailor Star Healer, who upon arriving demands to be taken to her leader. Keep in mind that A) the Sailor Starlights live on another planet that none of the characters ever visit B) "Their leader" is Princess Kakyuu of said planet C) Mamoru doesn't even know them, let alone possess a cell phone that can cross ''galaxies'' and D) ''Sailor Star Healer doesn't heal things.'' Now, rinse and repeat for the entire duration of the story.
** Even the cast of ''WesternAnimation/{{Daria}}'' gets mangled. Why the hell is Mr. "I may as well have the flag tattooed on my forehead" [=DeMartino=] using an AK-47? (For those who don't know: an AK-47 is a ''Russian'' gun.)
** Rei is a ''Shinto'' priestess. She invokes the wrong gods and sometimes seems to be replicating Buddhist rituals, as well as just doing things the author made up that are very out of place with the behavior of a Shinto priestess.
** An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilibuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the UsefulNotes/UnitedNations or UsefulNotes/{{NATO}} with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].
* FunnyAneurysmMoment:
The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.
* HarsherInHindsight:
gag.



* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Gen. Torymura is meant to be seen as a good man for taking in Makoto, [[spoiler: his niece]] following their reunion. However, no reason is provided as to why he didn’t adopt her sooner, making him come off as neglectful.

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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
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Gen. Torymura is meant to be seen as a good man for taking in Makoto, [[spoiler: his niece]] following their reunion. However, no reason is provided as to why he didn’t adopt her sooner, making him come off as neglectful.
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** An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilibuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the United Nations or NATO with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].

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** An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilibuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the United Nations UsefulNotes/UnitedNations or NATO UsefulNotes/{{NATO}} with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].
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* An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilbuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the United Nations or NATO with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].
* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpet's Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.

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* ** An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilbuster AuthorFilibuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the United Nations or NATO with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].
* FunnyAneurysmMoment: The MST has a joke wherein Ami interpet's interpets Daria's descriptions of Trent to mean he's like Creator/KevinSpacey and fails to see why Daria is still not willing to commit to a relationship because of that. Given Spacey's career was torpedoed by sexual transgressions, Ami ends up looking worse in that gag.
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* An [[ViewersAreGoldfish oft-repeated]] AuthorFilbuster is that Japan should form an organisation similar to the United Nations or NATO with other Asian countries. The thing is [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asia_Cooperation_Dialogue they already have]].

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