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* AuthorTract: The authors would really like to let you know they don’t like religion. The last couple pages are especially heavy-handed.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems. [[spoiler: He also ends up dying, along with the rest of the world.]]
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems. [[spoiler: He also ends up dying, along with the rest of the world.]]]]
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* ClicheStorm: There is very little about the story or the world building that is not painfully derivative of other works, both French and International. Even the religious allegory/critique comes off as a clumsy attempt at copying more clever media that critique religion.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems [[spoiler: also he dies.]]
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems [[spoiler: also he dies.]]
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* ClicheStorm: There is very little about the story or the world building that is not painfully derivative of other works, both French and International.international. Even the religious allegory/critique comes off as a clumsy attempt at copying more clever media that critique religion.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some seriousproblems problems. [[spoiler: He also he dies.ends up dying, along with the rest of the world.]]
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems [[spoiler: also he dies.]]
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: TooBleakStoppedCaring: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems [[spoiler: also he dies.]]
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* AuthorTract: The authors would really like to let you know they don’t like religion. The last couple pages are especially unsubtle.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable.
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almost inevitable.
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* AuthorTract: The authors would really like to let you know they don’t like religion. The last couple pages are especially unsubtle.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Given the story is a grim deconstruction of fantasy destiny tropes, this was almostinevitable.inevitable for some people. Not helping is that J’on is arguably the only likable character in the story and even he has some serious problems [[spoiler: also he dies.]]
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