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** At first Kasumi not telling Ranma about the talking cat seems like PlotInducedStupidity. However, given that she knows about his fears, a talking cat is relatively minor given Nerima's reputation and Luna promised not to let Ranma see her, it wasn't something to be too worried about.
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** At first Kasumi not telling Ranma about the talking cat seems like PlotInducedStupidity.the IdiotBall being grabbed. However, given that she knows about his fears, a talking cat is relatively minor given Nerima's reputation and Luna promised not to let Ranma see her, it wasn't something to be too worried about.
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* SpiritualAdaptation:
** The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.
** The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.
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* SpiritualAdaptation:
**SpiritualAdaptation: The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.tactics.
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** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.
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* OneTrueThreesome: There is no WordOfGod given Claymade’s underlying policy against giving out specific spoilers. However, given Akane and Shampoo’s OddFriendship this seems to be the most likely pairing between the three. [[spoiler: Chapter nineteen of Ascendant sees Akane officially ask Shampoo to give this a try, which she [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming tearfully agrees to]].]]
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* OneTrueThreesome: There is no WordOfGod given Claymade’s underlying policy against giving out specific spoilers. However, given Akane and Shampoo’s OddFriendship this seems to be the most likely pairing between the three. [[spoiler: Chapter nineteen of Ascendant sees Akane officially ask Shampoo to give this a try, which she [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming tearfully agrees to]].]]
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** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
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** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.Akane.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.
* SpiritualAntithesis: Both this story and ''Fanfic/DarkTitans'' are three part stories, the first part of which involves Ryoga being [[ObliviouslyEvil tricked into villainy]] and bringing the other characters in with him, while the second part involves him having a HeelRealization over being TheResenter. However, while Ascendant went into the ramifications of just how this realization affected Ryoga, in ''FanFic/ReflectionsLostOnADarkRoad'' it was an IgnoredEpiphany.
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* SpiritualAdaptation: The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
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* SpiritualAdaptation: SpiritualAdaptation:
** The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
** The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
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** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
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** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to RanmaOneHalf Manga/RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
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* SpiritualAdaptation: The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.
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* SpiritualAdaptation: The Dark Lords Strike Back bring many comparisons to the UsefulNotes/GrecoPersianWars, given that it is a DavidVersusGoliath story where an [[TheAlliance army built from the various clans of the Qinghai Province--many of which hate each other]]--defeat the AwesomeButImpractical mass forces of the Dark Kingdom through superior tactics.tactics.
** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
** Many readers have compared this story to ''the Altered Destinies'' FanVerse. It is a very complex universe that we only get to see bits and pieces over due to RanmaOneHalf being the focus series. Not to mention the OlderAndWiser CharacterDevelopment as well as the OneTrueThreesome between Ranma, Shampoo, and Akane.
