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Not YMMV
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* FixFic: From the DarkerAndEdgier tone, to the GenreShift from wacky action oriented Shounen to scifi/dystopian future Seinen, to the AdaptationExpansion with regards to the character development and setting... yup, the author isn't even being subtle about it. She even says in her profile that while writing the story she wanted to "sidestep certain plotholes that were there in the series."
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* TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]
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* TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]this.
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]
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* TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.
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* TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.this.
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]
* WorldOfWoobie: So far literally ''every major character'' has some form of angst either in the past or present.
** [[MemeticMutation You get a tragic backstory! You get a tragic backstory! Everyone gets a tragic backstory!]]
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* BadassDecay: Satsuki's characterization can be considered grating thanks to AdaptationalAngstUpgrade and other tweaks to make her act more like her age.
* FixFic: From the DarkerAndEdgier tone, to the GenreShift from wacky action oriented Shounen to scifi/dystopian future Seinen, to the AdaptationExpansion with regards to the character development and setting... yup, the author isn't even being subtle about it. She even says in her profile that while writing the story she wanted to "sidestep certain plotholes that were there in the series."
* FixFic: From the DarkerAndEdgier tone, to the GenreShift from wacky action oriented Shounen to scifi/dystopian future Seinen, to the AdaptationExpansion with regards to the character development and setting... yup, the author isn't even being subtle about it. She even says in her profile that while writing the story she wanted to "sidestep certain plotholes that were there in the series."
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Helping with the tropes
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* StoicWoobie: Satsuki comes off as this when the story is in Ryuko's POV. However her internal monologue shows that she is affected by everything that happens to her and tries very hard to hide it.
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* StoicWoobie: Satsuki comes off as this when the story is in Ryuko's POV. However her internal monologue shows that she is affected by everything that happens to her and tries very hard to hide it. Underneath her facade, she very desperately wants to please her abusive mother and said mother's abuse has ''terrible'' effects on her psyche.
*TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.
*TearJerker: Satsuki's situation in general is this.
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* IronWoobie: Ryuko's backstory is far from pleasant, but she carries on with her objectives anyway. Unlike Satsuki however, she doesn't see her DarkAndTroubledPast as something she needs to keep secret.
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* StoicWoobie: Satsuki comes off as this when the story is in Ryuko's POV. However her internal monologue shows that she is affected by everything that happens to her and tries very hard to hide it.
