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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Jackson Storm, inevitably. [[HateSink He was supposed to be a jerk]], just like his canon counterpart, but so far, some readers feel like he's being ''too much'' of a jerk and it instead just makes him plain unlikable.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Jackson Storm, inevitably. [[HateSink He was supposed to be a jerk]], just like his canon counterpart, but so far, some readers feel like he's being ''too much'' of a jerk and it instead just makes him plain unlikable.
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* TheWoobie: It really isn't hard to feel bad for Cruz once we she that she's full of self-doubt, is constantly berated by Jackson, and lost both her parents at a young age.
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* TheWoobie: It really isn't hard to feel bad for Cruz once we she see that she's full of self-doubt, is constantly berated by Jackson, and lost both her parents at a young age.
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* SlowPacedBeginning: An opinion that's also shared by the author herself is that the story doesn't really start going anywhere until chapter 6, when the conflict of Cruz and Jackson's personal issues start becoming more and more apparent.
* TheWoobie: It really isn't hard to feel bad for Cruz once we she that she's full of self-doubt, is constantly berated by Jackson, and lost both her parents at a young age.
* TheWoobie: It really isn't hard to feel bad for Cruz once we she that she's full of self-doubt, is constantly berated by Jackson, and lost both her parents at a young age.
