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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Emerald and Demantoid discuss whether Steven has PTSD or borderline personality disorder. Demantoid suggests the possibility that [[TakeAThirdOption Steven has both.]]

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* {{Adorkable}}: [[spoiler:White Topaz, Black Rutile's PerkyFemaleMinion who loves making shadow puppets. It helps that one of her main inspirations is [[WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower Scorpia]], and even shares [[Creator/LaurenAsh her voice actor]] too.]]
** There's also NaiveNewcomer Teal Zircon, who is just oodles of high energy and naivety.

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[[spoiler:White Topaz, Black Rutile's PerkyFemaleMinion who loves making shadow puppets. It helps that one of her main inspirations is [[WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower Scorpia]], and even shares [[Creator/LaurenAsh her voice actor]] too.]]
** There's also NaiveNewcomer Teal Zircon, who is just oodles of high energy and naivety.



* CatharsisFactor: "Love Like You" takes the climax of "I Am My Monster" and makes it even more cathartic. [[spoiler:In addition to Jasper & White Topaz teaming up to finally defeat Black Rutile once and for all, Steven at last gets some closure with both Rose Quartz and Pink Diamond by teaming up with them to defeat Negative Steven and help return him to normal. The addition of the titular end credits song from the original series makes it all the more emotional.]]

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"Love Like You" takes the climax of "I Am My Monster" and makes it even more cathartic. [[spoiler:In addition to Jasper & White Topaz teaming up to finally defeat Black Rutile once and for all, Steven at last gets some closure with both Rose Quartz and Pink Diamond by teaming up with them to defeat Negative Steven and help return him to normal. The addition of the titular end credits song from the original series makes it all the more emotional.]]



* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Black Rutile crosses it twice in the final chapters of Part 2. First, she shatters one of Demantoid's Bismuths to scare the rest of them into working for her, then she tosses Steven off a cliff while sending a boulder down with him to crush him.]]

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* LoveToHate: Black Rutile is a [[SmugSnake smug]], [[ManipulativeBastard smooth-talking]] EvilGenius with a grudge who's proud to be a CardCarryingVillain and doesn't take kindly to things not going her way, but she has so many funny lines and is a {{Determinator}} to boot.
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* PanderingToTheBase: Lightyearpig admits that ''Alternate Future'' came into fruition because of complaints he heard from fellow fans about how TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot due to ExecutiveMeddling, and sought to satisfy those desires. Regardless, much praise has still been given to him and his writing.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: While it isn't an outright FixFic, ''Alternate Future'' does address many criticisms Steven Universe fans had about the series.
** There are frequent breaks from Steven's perspective and showing events that normally would've taken place off-screen, such as additional interactions between Peridot and Lapis.
** Black Rutile is a proud CardCarryingVillain who even [[AllLovingHero Steven]] proclaims might be BeyondRedemption, which may be a response to how many antagonists were EasilyForgiven. By contrast, White Topaz shows more reluctance to follow Black Rutile's orders starting from "Fragments",
** Jasper gets more screentime than in ''Future'', coming BackForTheFinale of the first three parts, and becoming a major character in Part 4.
** To many who consider Steven himself a BaseBreakingCharacter, his actions are called out multiple times, mostly by the villains. Chief among them, Black Rutile frequently objects to Steven's pacifism and how it creates a SuperheroParadox.
** The fate of Pumpkin is finally addressed in "Pumpkin Patch".
** Lapis and Jasper's relationship receives some closure in "A Fusion Too Far", where they recognize how mutually abusive they were before becoming VitriolicBestBuds with each other.
** [[spoiler:Pink Diamond and Rose Quartz are portrayed in "Be-All, Cure-All" as regretting the choices they made, but recognizing the good deeds they did too, which one reviewer points out to be a response to their demonization in ''Future''.]]
** [[spoiler:The treasure chest inside Lion's mane is finally opened during a flashback in "Love Like You" presumably taking place after "Change Your Mind." While it turns out [[SubvertedTrope there's nothing inside]], Steven believes the treasure to be more metaphorical.]]
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* WinTheCrowd: One reviewer has stated excitement for the story's concept.
-->'''jack8090''': "This story just keeps getting more interesting with each chapter published; if your fanfic promises to solve everything that the Future series left loose (missed character development ex. Jasper, characters who appeared only once in the show ex. Emerald), then I'm on this ride until it's over!"
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** [[spoiler:Is Black Rutile genuine when she claims to HatesBeingAlone?]]

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** [[spoiler:Is Black Rutile genuine when she claims to HateBeingAlone?]]

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** "The Future" adds a scene of [[spoiler:the Crystal Gems being hailed as heroes to Earth following the Monster Steven crisis and Pink Diamond being celebrated as an example of PerfectionIsImpossible on Homeworld. Even Negative Steven declares that Steven has earned this before suddenly disappearing.]]
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* CatharsisFactor: "Love Like You" takes the climax of "I Am My Monster" and makes it even more cathartic. [[spoiler:In addition to Jasper & White Topaz teaming up to finally defeat Black Rutile once and for all, Steven at last gets some closure with both Rose Quartz and Pink Diamond by teaming up with them to defeat Negative Steven and help return him to normal. The addition of the titular end credits song from the original series makes it all the more emotional.]]

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** [[spoiler:Pink Diamond and Rose Quartz are portrayed in "Be-All, Cure-All" as regretting the choices they made, but recognizing the good deeds they did too, which one reviewer points out to be a response to their demonization.]]

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** [[spoiler:Pink Diamond and Rose Quartz are portrayed in "Be-All, Cure-All" as regretting the choices they made, but recognizing the good deeds they did too, which one reviewer points out to be a response to their demonization.demonization in ''Future''.]]
** [[spoiler:The treasure chest inside Lion's mane is finally opened during a flashback in "Love Like You" presumably taking place after "Change Your Mind." While it turns out [[SubvertedTrope there's nothing inside]], Steven believes the treasure to be more metaphorical.
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** [[spoiler:The inner voice's physical form, Negative Steven, crosses it by [[KillItWithFire burning the dream human versions of Garnet, Amethyst and Pearl alive]] while Steven is ForcedToWatch.]]
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** Jasper gets more screentime than in ''Future'', coming BackForTheFinale of the first three parts, and she's expected to become a major character in Part 4.

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** [[spoiler:Pink Diamond and Rose Quartz are portrayed in "Be-All, Cure-All" as regretting the choices they made, but recognizing the good deeds they did too, which one reviewer points out to be a response to their demonization.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Black Rutile suddenly turning into Michael Jackson to celebrate Pink Diamond's shattering comes out of nowhere and is never brought up again. Lampshaded by White Topaz, who says it was the result of her vivid imagination and [[AlienArtsAreAppreciated watching Earth music videos.]]
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-->'''jack8090''': "This story just keeps getting more interesting with each chapter published; if your fanfic promises to solve everything that the Future series left loose (missed character development ex. Jasper, characters who appeared only once in the show ex. Emerald), then I'm on this ride until it's over!"

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-->'''jack8090''': "This story just keeps getting more interesting with each chapter published; if your fanfic promises to solve everything that the Future series left loose (missed character development ex. Jasper, characters who appeared only once in the show ex. Emerald), then I'm on this ride until it's over!"over!"
* TheWoobie: You think Steven already had it bad in ''Future''? In addition to his already established issues, he now has a sociopath plotting to kill him and render everything he's done for Era 3 AllForNothing before gaslighting Steven into believing he was never loved.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Emerald and Demantoid discuss whether Steven has PTSD or borderline personality disorder. Demantoid suggests the possibility that [[TakeAThirdOption Steven has both.]]
* AuthorsSavingThrow: While it isn't an outright FixFic, ''Alternate Future'' does address many criticisms Steven Universe fans had about the series.
** There are frequent breaks from Steven's perspective and showing events that normally would've taken place off-screen, such as additional interactions between Peridot and Lapis.
** Black Rutile is a proud CardCarryingVillain who even [[AllLovingHero Steven]] proclaims might be BeyondRedemption, which may be a response to how many antagonists were EasilyForgiven. By contrast, White Topaz shows more reluctance to follow Black Rutile's orders starting from "Fragments",
** Jasper gets more screentime than in ''Future'', coming BackForTheFinale of the first three parts, and she's expected to become a major character in Part 4.
** To many who consider Steven himself a BaseBreakingCharacter, his actions are called out multiple times, mostly by the villains. Chief among them, Black Rutile frequently objects to Steven's pacifism and how it creates a SuperheroParadox.
** The fate of Pumpkin is finally addressed in "Pumpkin Patch".
** Lapis and Jasper's relationship receives some closure in "A Fusion Too Far", where they recognize how mutually abusive they were before becoming VitriolicBestBuds with each other.
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** [[spoiler:Steven's inner voice crosses this by attempting to shatter White Diamond himself when Steven refuses to do so, and then forcing Steven to punch Spinel for singing at him.]]
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** "Cracks and Buds" has been praised by one review on Tumblr who found the concept of merging two episodes focusing on those affected by Pink Diamond very interesting.
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* BetterThanCanon: A few elements of this story have been praised as improving on ''Future''.
** The characterization of [[AlphaBitch Mean Lapis]] and [[InnocentBetaBitch Nice Lapis]] have been warmly received for giving them more character than in their original debut episode.
** One review says "Eye in the Sky" should've been an actual episode for its focus on Nephrite and the corrupted Gems.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[DoomsdayDevice the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[EldritchAbomination the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.]]

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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler:[[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[EldritchAbomination [[DoomsdayDevice the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[EldritchAbomination the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.

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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad [[spoiler:[[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[EldritchAbomination the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Black Rutile]] is said by her creator to be inspired by fellow villains like [[WesternAnimation/PeterPan Captain Hook]], [[WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove Yzma]] & [[WesternAnimation/WanderOverYonder Lord Dominator]] and compared to the likes of [[Franchise/DragonBall Frieza]], ComicBook/LexLuthor, [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Megatron]] & [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack Aku]], and it really shows whenever she takes center stage as the main antagonist. Black Rutile's a former intelligence officer of [[TheCaligula White Diamond]] who holds a vendetta against [[SpoiledBrat Pink Diamond]] for getting everything she wants by whining while Black Rutile earned a shockingly high status for a Gem of her type [[HardWorkHardlyWorks through decades of hard work]] and as such, began plotting against Pink for the next thousands of years up until [[AllLovingHero Steven]] came into the picture and caused the Diamonds to perform their HeelFaceTurn. Disgusted at how one half-human child could change an entire way of life through words alone, Black Rutile accuses Steven of being NotSoDifferent from Pink and shifted her attention to him. She proudly proclaims to have gained a superiority complex as a result and believes she's more worthy to rule the Gems, but a BadFuture shows that [[EvilerThanThou she would become a worse tyrant than the Diamonds.]] Assembling a LegionOfDoom out of past foes of the Crystal Gems who were just as angered with Era 3, Black Rutile put her plan into action, warping the minds of fellow Gems into [[HeroWithBadPublicity thinking Steven is the real villain for ruining their way of life]] and gathering as much intel as possible on her foes in preparation for their demise. When forced to take matters into her own hands, Black Rutile shows that she is a fierce and violent warrior as well, shattering a Bismuth for trying to speak out against her, plotting to [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt destroy the Earth]] by awakening [[EldritchAbomination the Cluster]] and [[WouldHurtAChild trying to murder Steven by dropping him off a cliff]], also making sure to have him crushed with a boulder in case he tries to use his powers to escape. Hessonite describes Black Rutile as a [[ManipulativeBastard cunning]], [[TheChessmaster devious]], [[OpportunisticBastard opportunistic]] [[TheSociopath sociopathic]] [[YouMonster monster]], and so far, Black Rutile ticks many of those boxes.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[spoiler:Steven is an in-universe example courtesy of Black Rutile, who has made propaganda demonizing him as part of her conspiracy against Steven.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Black Rutile crosses it twice in the final chapters of Part 2. First, she shatters one of Demantoid's Bismuths to scare the rest of them into working for her, then she tosses Steven off a cliff while sending a boulder down with him to crush him.]]
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** There's also NaiveNewcomer Teal Zircon, who is just oodles of high energy and naivety.
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* {{Adorkable}}: [[spoiler:White Topaz, Black Rutile's PerkyFemaleMinion who loves making shadow puppets. It helps that one of her main inspirations is [[WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower Scorpia]], and even shares [[Creator/LaurenAsh her voice actor]] too.]]
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* WinTheCrowd: One reviewer has stated excitement for the story's concept.
-->'''jack8090''': "This story just keeps getting more interesting with each chapter published; if your fanfic promises to solve everything that the Future series left loose (missed character development ex. Jasper, characters who appeared only once in the show ex. Emerald), then I'm on this ride until it's over!"

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