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** Chapter 20 caused a minor one - Nine had never been referred to by any gender-specific pronoun before then, but Ten calls her "she" for the first time in that chapter. Is it confirmation of her gender, or is it a sign that Ten doesn't quite respect her (since she also refers to herself as her ''big'' sister then, contradicting her earlier declaration that she was Nine's ''little'' sister)? Was is simply a slip of the tongue, so to speak?
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** Chapter 20 caused a minor one - Nine had never been referred to by any gender-specific pronoun before then, but Ten calls her Nine "she" for the first time in that chapter. chapter... and then the author edited it the next day to remove any references to Nine using gendered pronouns. Is it confirmation of her Nine's gender, or is it a sign that Ten doesn't quite respect her Nine (since she also refers to herself as her Nine's ''big'' sister then, contradicting her earlier declaration that she was Nine's ''little'' sister)? Was is simply a slip of the tongue, so to speak?speak, or a mistake by the author?
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** Chapter 20 caused a minor one - Nine had never been referred to by any gender-specific pronoun before then, but Ten calls her "she" for the first time in that chapter. Is it confirmation of her gender, or is it a sign that Ten doesn't quite respect her (since she also refers to herself as her ''big'' sister then, contradicting her earlier declaration that she was Nine's ''little'' sister)?sister)? Was is simply a slip of the tongue, so to speak?
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* ItsShortSoItSucks: Many fans feel like the story could've been explored much longer than ten days.
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* TearJerker:
** Nine's loneliness at the beginning of the story and desperation for anyone to respond.
** When BornUnlucky Lacrecia Evans finally catches a football after 10,000 years of trying, [[spoiler:the one she catches is the one that broke the Centennial Bulb]].
** Ten's eulogy to the lightbulb is very touching (in spite of it addressing an inanimate object).
** The end of Chapter 16:
--->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?
--->[[{{Beat}} (long pause)]]
--->'''Nine''': Children.
--->'''Juice''': children.
** Nine's loneliness at the beginning of the story and desperation for anyone to respond.
** When BornUnlucky Lacrecia Evans finally catches a football after 10,000 years of trying, [[spoiler:the one she catches is the one that broke the Centennial Bulb]].
** Ten's eulogy to the lightbulb is very touching (in spite of it addressing an inanimate object).
** The end of Chapter 16:
--->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?
--->[[{{Beat}} (long pause)]]
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--->'''Juice''': children.
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** The end of Chapter 16:
--->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?
--->[[{{Beat}} (long pause)]]
--->'''Nine''': Children.
--->'''Juice''': children.
--->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?
--->[[{{Beat}} (long pause)]]
--->'''Nine''': Children.
--->'''Juice''': children.
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* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler:humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there, despite the amount of time that flew by]], unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
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* BrokenBase: BrokenBase:
** A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler:humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there, despite the amount of time that flew by]], unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspectiveonly?only?
** Chapter 20 caused a minor one - Nine had never been referred to by any gender-specific pronoun before then, but Ten calls her "she" for the first time in that chapter. Is it confirmation of her gender, or is it a sign that Ten doesn't quite respect her (since she also refers to herself as her ''big'' sister then, contradicting her earlier declaration that she was Nine's ''little'' sister)?
** A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler:humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there, despite the amount of time that flew by]], unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective
** Chapter 20 caused a minor one - Nine had never been referred to by any gender-specific pronoun before then, but Ten calls her "she" for the first time in that chapter. Is it confirmation of her gender, or is it a sign that Ten doesn't quite respect her (since she also refers to herself as her ''big'' sister then, contradicting her earlier declaration that she was Nine's ''little'' sister)?
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* ItWasHisSled: It's ''very'' easy to have TheReveal that the main characters are space probes spoiled, since most fanart of them alludes to this in some fashion.
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* ItWasHisSled: It's ''very'' easy to have TheReveal that the main characters are space probes spoiled, since most fanart spoiled - the main page outright shows tiny shots of them alludes to this in some fashion.all three of them, as well as a close-up of Nine.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped:
** Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back. Human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football is a serious and life-threatening problem.
** Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back. Human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football is a serious and life-threatening problem.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped:
**SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back. Human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football is a serious and life-threatening problem.
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** Ten's eulogy to the lightbulb is very touching.
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* CrazyAwesome: One football player runs into a tornado ''on purpose.'' Justified in that nobody can die. Also, she seems pretty calm and relaxed in person.
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* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler: humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there despite the amount of time that flew by]] unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
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* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler: humanity [[spoiler:humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there there, despite the amount of time that flew by]] by]], unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
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* TearJerker:
** Nine's loneliness at the beginning of the story and desperation for anyone to respond.
** When BornUnlucky Lacrecia Evans finally catches a football after 10,000 years of trying, [[spoiler:the one she catches is the one that broke the Centennial Bulb]].
** Nine's loneliness at the beginning of the story and desperation for anyone to respond.
** When BornUnlucky Lacrecia Evans finally catches a football after 10,000 years of trying, [[spoiler:the one she catches is the one that broke the Centennial Bulb]].
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* SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: The relaxing smooth jazz accompanying chapters 3 and 5.
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* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler: humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel despite the amount of time that flew by]] unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
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* SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: The relaxing smooth jazz accompanying chapters 3 and 5.
most videos.
* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler: humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there despite the amount of time that flew by]] unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
* BrokenBase: A crack in the fandom formed after the Intermission. Is the fact that [[spoiler: humanity simply refuses to enter space or develop space travel due to nothing being out there despite the amount of time that flew by]] unrealistic and frankly unsettling? Or is it a good way of keeping human interaction with the satellites to a minimum and keep it from their perspective only?
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* TheWoobie: Nine, who starts the story depressed and without identity, and still holds on to that lack of self-security even after they're rescued from seclusion.
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Hubble is referred to as a "he".
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: While Hubble only appeared for one chapter and a few lines, they got themselves a decent share of fanart for it.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: While Hubble only appeared for one chapter and a few lines, they he got themselves himself a decent share of fanart for it.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a satire on sports culture, the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it, and on mankind's pursuit of play once work becomes unnecessary. However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to read for the satellites and their antics and not the satire.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a satire on sports culture, the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it, and on mankind's pursuit of play once work becomes unnecessary.unnecessary [[spoiler: or undesired]]. However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to read for the satellites and their antics and not the satire.
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* TheWoobie: Nine, who starts the story depressed and without identity, and still holds onto that lack of self-security even after they're rescued from seclusion.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a satire on sports culture, the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it, and on mankind's pursuit of play in lieu of any essential survival behavior. However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to read for the satellites and their antics and not the satire.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a satire on sports culture, the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it, and on mankind's pursuit of play in lieu of any essential survival behavior.once work becomes unnecessary. However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to read for the satellites and their antics and not the satire.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a veiled satire on the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it. (The initial article outright mentions this before [[MadnessMantra going to hell]].) However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to just see the story as a simple utopia plot discussed by satellites rather than a social commentary.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back; human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football, a serious and life-threatening problem.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back; human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football, a serious and life-threatening problem.
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* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a veiled satire on sports culture, the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it. (The initial article outright mentions this before [[MadnessMantra going to hell]].) it, and on mankind's pursuit of play in lieu of any essential survival behavior. However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to just see read for the story as a simple utopia plot discussed by satellites rather than a social commentary.
and their antics and not the satire.
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** Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding itback; human back. Human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football, football is a serious and life-threatening problem.
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** Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it
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** Juice's love for Lunchables.[[labelnote:Explanation]]THe goes on a lengthy rant about how sad it is that they've disappeared in the story's present-day, continuing throughout an entire chapter. It quickly caught on in the fandom.[[/labelnote]]
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** Juice's love for Lunchables.[[labelnote:Explanation]]THe [[labelnote:Explanation]]He goes on a lengthy rant about how sad it is that they've disappeared in the story's present-day, continuing throughout an entire chapter. It quickly caught on in the fandom.[[/labelnote]]
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* MemeticMutation:
** "Is this the new ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''?"[[labelnote:Explanation]]The numerous similarities between the two stories, as mentioned above, have led to many comments calling attention to this.[[/labelnote]]
** Juice's love for Lunchables.[[labelnote:Explanation]]THe goes on a lengthy rant about how sad it is that they've disappeared in the story's present-day, continuing throughout an entire chapter. It quickly caught on in the fandom.[[/labelnote]]
* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a veiled satire on the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it. (The initial article outright mentions this before [[MadnessMantra going to hell]].) However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to just see the story as a simple utopia plot discussed by satellites rather than a social commentary.
** "Is this the new ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''?"[[labelnote:Explanation]]The numerous similarities between the two stories, as mentioned above, have led to many comments calling attention to this.[[/labelnote]]
** Juice's love for Lunchables.[[labelnote:Explanation]]THe goes on a lengthy rant about how sad it is that they've disappeared in the story's present-day, continuing throughout an entire chapter. It quickly caught on in the fandom.[[/labelnote]]
* MisaimedFandom: Beneath the surface, the story is a veiled satire on the lack of safety in real world football and how players have gotten hurt due to it. (The initial article outright mentions this before [[MadnessMantra going to hell]].) However, due to many people being drawn in for the narrative and not the football aspect, many tend to just see the story as a simple utopia plot discussed by satellites rather than a social commentary.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back; human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Football has only gotten so far because nanobots and immortality fixed what was holding it back; human durability and the lack of safety in modern-day football. football, a serious and life-threatening problem.
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* MemeticMutation: Comparisons to ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' (another multi-media piece of Internet fiction known for its mind-bending plot) are very commonplace.
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* SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: All the video chapters are accompanied by relaxing smooth jazz.
* CounterpartComparison: Juice gets a lot of comparisons to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Dave Strider]], since they're both [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], nostalgic, street-smart types who type in [[AllLowercaseLetters all lowercase]].
* CounterpartComparison: Juice gets a lot of comparisons to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Dave Strider]], since they're both [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], nostalgic, street-smart types who type in [[AllLowercaseLetters all lowercase]].
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* CounterpartComparison: Juice gets a lot of comparisons to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Dave Strider]], since they're both [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], nostalgic, street-smart types who type in [[AllLowercaseLetters alllowercase]].lowercase]] and have a love for SurrealHumor.
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* ItWasHisSled: It's ''very'' easy to have TheReveal that the main characters are space probes spoiled, since most fanart of them alludes to this in some fashion.
* MemeticMutation: Comparisons to ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' (another multi-media piece of Internet fiction known for its mind-bending plot) are verycommonplace.commonplace.
* TheWoobie: Nine, who starts the story depressed and without identity, and still holds onto that lack of self-security even after they're rescued from seclusion.
* MemeticMutation: Comparisons to ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' (another multi-media piece of Internet fiction known for its mind-bending plot) are very
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* FriendlyFandoms: Near ''instantaneously'' after its first few days of release, it formed a close bond with the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' fandom due to being a strange web story revolving around ColorCodedCharacters. As seen below, Juice is also a dead ringer for Dave Strider.
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* MemeticMutation: Comparisons to ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' (another multi-media piece of Internet fiction known for its mind-bending plot) are very commonplace.