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* BaseBreakingCharacter:
** Kaede. Part of the fandom despises her for how she treated Rin in the past and her {{Yandere}} tendencies in the present[[note]]In the anime, at least. The VN doesn't give her this trait.[[/note]] and believes she doesn't deserve to get together with Rin, seeing her serving him as being done for selfish reasons. Others sympathize with her and believe she is merely trying her best to make up for what she has done and make him happy.
** Kaede. Part of the fandom despises her for how she treated Rin in the past and her {{Yandere}} tendencies in the present[[note]]In the anime, at least. The VN doesn't give her this trait.[[/note]] and believes she doesn't deserve to get together with Rin, seeing her serving him as being done for selfish reasons. Others sympathize with her and believe she is merely trying her best to make up for what she has done and make him happy.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter:
**BaseBreakingCharacter: Kaede. Part of the fandom despises her for how she treated Rin in the past and her {{Yandere}} tendencies in the present[[note]]In the anime, at least. The VN doesn't give her this trait.[[/note]] and believes she doesn't deserve to get together with Rin, seeing her serving him as being done for selfish reasons. Others sympathize with her and believe she is merely trying her best to make up for what she has done and make him happy.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Itsuki calling Rin a "cradle robber" for being close to Primula in the anime's English dub becomes more horrific when another Todd Haberkorn character, Nobuyuki Sugou, tries to rape Asuna Yuuki, also a Creator/CheramiLeigh character, in ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline''.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Itsuki calling Rin a "cradle robber" for being close to Primula in the anime's English dub becomes more horrific when another Todd Haberkorn character, Nobuyuki Sugou, tries to rape Asuna Yuuki, also a Creator/CheramiLeigh character, in ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline''.''Literature/SwordArtOnline''.
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* WhatAnIdiot:
** While we understand that [[spoiler: Asa is reluctant to accept her Half Human Hybrid-induced magical powers since she doesn't want to let her mother Ama know]], it's ''less'' comprehensible to [[spoiler: hold these powers back to the point that they cause her a massive Power Incontinence ''that will kill her''.]] [[spoiler: Asa]], honey, what do you think it'd happen if [[spoiler: you died as a consequence, thus leaving your beloved mother ''alone in the world'']]?
** Rin, despite knowing about Kaede's past with him and her personal issues, spends more time away from home once he starts getting closer to Asa, causing Kaede to snap and attack Asa out of jealousy. The behavior continues as Asa is hospitalized, and he does not do a good job of communicating his reasons for moving out of Kaede's house. While Kaede would have been at least somewhat upset either way, it's mainly a case of [[PoorCommunicationKills his poor communication]] exacerbating the situation.
** While we understand that [[spoiler: Asa is reluctant to accept her Half Human Hybrid-induced magical powers since she doesn't want to let her mother Ama know]], it's ''less'' comprehensible to [[spoiler: hold these powers back to the point that they cause her a massive Power Incontinence ''that will kill her''.]] [[spoiler: Asa]], honey, what do you think it'd happen if [[spoiler: you died as a consequence, thus leaving your beloved mother ''alone in the world'']]?
** Rin, despite knowing about Kaede's past with him and her personal issues, spends more time away from home once he starts getting closer to Asa, causing Kaede to snap and attack Asa out of jealousy. The behavior continues as Asa is hospitalized, and he does not do a good job of communicating his reasons for moving out of Kaede's house. While Kaede would have been at least somewhat upset either way, it's mainly a case of [[PoorCommunicationKills his poor communication]] exacerbating the situation.
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* {{Woolseyism}}: The dub is quite highly regarded. Many Woolseyisms are present, such as enacting the OneSteveLimit by replacing Nerine's nickname of "Rin-chan" with "Rina", keeping the alliteration in the fanclub names but making them ridiculously pompous instead of cutesy [eg. "Suki Suki Sia" becoming "Sexy Sia Soldiers"], giving Asa a voice that suits her spunky, tomboyish character instead of a generic high voice, and rewriting a lot of the jokes to make them funny to the western ear, just to name a few. The scene in which Asa gets Rin to call her "Asa-san" instead of "Asa-senpai" gets written entirely, since he and Kaede have always just called her "Asa" in the dub.
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* {{Woolseyism}}: The dub is quite highly regarded. Many Woolseyisms are present, such as enacting the OneSteveLimit by replacing Nerine's nickname of "Rin-chan" with "Rina", keeping the alliteration in the fanclub names but making them ridiculously pompous instead of cutesy [eg. "Suki Suki Sia" becoming "Sexy Sia Soldiers"], giving Asa a voice that suits her spunky, tomboyish character instead of a generic high voice, Soldiers"] and rewriting a lot of the jokes to make them funny to the western ear, just to name a few. The scene in which Asa gets Rin to call her "Asa-san" instead of "Asa-senpai" gets written entirely, since he and Kaede have always just called her "Asa" in the dub.
