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Now Flame Bait and Darth.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Instead of telling anypony about the horrible nightmares she's been having and seeking help, Dash keeps it bottled up inside, resulting in [[spoiler: her snapping in immense paranoia and fear when she ''is'' invited to Pinkie's house to bake cupcakes, down to being offered a cupcake, and using a kitchen knife to violently kill Pinkie in hysteria, and then completely devolves into LaughingMad. And if you take the unofficial sequels into account, she ends up becoming a full-blown SerialKiller.]]
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* NightmareFuel: One of the most terrifying things of the fan fiction is that it's based on ''something that could happen to anybody''. The fact Dash has nightmares over and over causes heavy sleep deprivation that causes her to [[spoiler: lose it and murder Pinkie.]] Holy crap.
** [[spoiler: How does it end? With Rainbow Dash covered in Pinkie's blood, [[LaughingMad cackling like a hyena.]]]]
* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie. Even worse, it's extremely short-lived, as she goes right off the deep end moments later.]]
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what she did do to anger Rainbow.]]
** [[spoiler: How does it end? With Rainbow Dash covered in Pinkie's blood, [[LaughingMad cackling like a hyena.]]]]
* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie. Even worse, it's extremely short-lived, as she goes right off the deep end moments later.]]
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what she did do to anger Rainbow.]]
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I'm sorry, but this utterance of "sniff" is forced and just annoying.
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** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what she did do to anger Rainbow. Sniff.]]
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** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what she did do to anger Rainbow. Sniff.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: Instead of telling anypony about the horrible nightmares she's been having and seeking help, Dash keeps it bottled up inside, resulting in [[spoiler: Pinkies death and the likely ruination of her own life.]]
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* WhatAnIdiot: Instead of telling anypony about the horrible nightmares she's been having and seeking help, Dash keeps it bottled up inside, resulting in [[spoiler: Pinkies death her snapping in immense paranoia and fear when she ''is'' invited to Pinkie's house to bake cupcakes, down to being offered a cupcake, and using a kitchen knife to violently kill Pinkie in hysteria, and then completely devolves into LaughingMad. And if you take the likely ruination of her own life.unofficial sequels into account, she ends up becoming a full-blown SerialKiller.]]
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** [[spoiler: How does it end? With Rainbow Dash covered in Pinkie's blood, [[LaughingMad cackling like a hyena.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: How does it end? With Rainbow Dash covered in Pinkie's blood, [[LaughingMad cackling like a a hyena.]]]]
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal cupcake''. She thought this would cheer Dash up.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer give her friend a cupcake. A ''normal cupcake''. She sincerely thought this it would cheer Dash up.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal cupcake''. She thought this would cheer Dash up. And instead it drives to Dash murdering her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal cupcake''. She thought this would cheer Dash up. And instead it drives to Dash murdering her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. And not for the reasons of Dashie's nightmare. A ''normal, undrugged, cupcake''. She thought this would cheer Dash up. And instead it drives to Dash murdering her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. And not for the reasons of Dashie's nightmare. A ''normal, undrugged, ''normal cupcake''. She thought this would cheer Dash up. And instead it drives to Dash murdering her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. And not for the reasons of Dashie's nightmare. She generinely just thought it would cheer her friend up.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. And not for the reasons of Dashie's nightmare. A ''normal, undrugged, cupcake''. She generinely just thought it this would cheer her friend up.Dash up. And instead it drives to Dash murdering her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal'' cupcake, she thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal'' cupcake, she And not for the reasons of Dashie's nightmare. She generinely just thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.up.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal Cupcake'', she thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal Cupcake'', ''normal'' cupcake, she thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal undrugged Cupcake'', she thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her friend a cupcake. A ''normal undrugged Cupcake'', she thought it would cheer her friend up. And Dash murders her for this. All while poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff.]]
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** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what she did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff.]]
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her an innocent cupcake, not the drugged one of her nightmare, an innocent one. And she's murdered for it. All while wondering ''"why?"''. Poor thing.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. She just wanted to offer her an innocent cupcake, not the drugged one of friend a cupcake. A ''normal undrugged Cupcake'', she thought it would cheer her nightmare, an innocent one. friend up. And she's murdered Dash murders her for it. this. All while wondering ''"why?"''. Poor thing.poor Pinkie asks herself what she did to upset her.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. The real one at least.
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** And poor Pinkie as well. The real She just wanted to offer her an innocent cupcake, not the drugged one at least.of her nightmare, an innocent one. And she's murdered for it. All while wondering ''"why?"''. Poor thing.
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** Poor ''real Pinkie'', she didn't do anything wrong.
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** Poor ''real Pinkie'', she didn't do anything wrong.And poor Pinkie as well. The real one at least.
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.Dash.
** Poor ''real Pinkie'', she didn't do anything wrong.
** Poor ''real Pinkie'', she didn't do anything wrong.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Instead of telling anypony about the horrible nightmares she's been having and seeking help, Dash keeps it bottled up inside, resulting in [[spoiler: Pinkies death and the likely ruination of her own life.]]
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* NightmareFuel: One of the most terrifying things of the fan fiction is that it's based on ''something that could happen to anybody''. The fact Dash has nightmares over and over causes heavy sleep deprivation that causes her to [[spoiler: lose it and murder Pinkie]]. Holy crap.
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* NightmareFuel: One of the most terrifying things of the fan fiction is that it's based on ''something that could happen to anybody''. The fact Dash has nightmares over and over causes heavy sleep deprivation that causes her to [[spoiler: lose it and murder Pinkie]]. Pinkie.]] Holy crap.
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* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]]. Even worse, it's extremely short-lived, as she goes right off the deep end moments later.
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff]].
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff]].
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* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]]. Pie. Even worse, it's extremely short-lived, as she goes right off the deep end moments later.
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** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow.Sniff]].Sniff.]]
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow.
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** [[spoiler: How does it end? With Rainbow Dash covered in Pinkie's blood, [[LaughingMad cackling like a hyena.]]]]
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.Dash.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.
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* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]].
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* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]]. Even worse, it's extremely short-lived, as she goes right off the deep end moments later.
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.
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* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.Dash.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.
** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: And how.
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* NightmareFuel
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* NightmareFuelNightmareFuel: One of the most terrifying things of the fan fiction is that it's based on ''something that could happen to anybody''. The fact Dash has nightmares over and over causes heavy sleep deprivation that causes her to [[spoiler: lose it and murder Pinkie]]. Holy crap.
* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]].
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff]].
* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.
* TearJerker: Rainbow's MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment upon realizing [[spoiler: she killed Pinkie Pie]].
** [[spoiler: Pinkie as well. Mainly because at the moment she was being killed, all she could think of what did she do to anger Rainbow. Sniff]].
* TheWoobie: Oh Rainbow Dash.