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** SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Yet, at the same time, it brings to mind recent developments relating to internet security and privacy, and how privacy shouldn't be infringed on.
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Not YMMV.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: You could see the game as a rather obvious allegory of 9/11 and the WarOnTerror.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: You could see the game as a rather obvious allegory of 9/11 and the WarOnTerror.UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror.
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* {{Disposable Woman}}: This could apply to [[spoiler: Anna.]] It's somewhat troubling that [[spoiler: she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
** What makes it worse is that [[spoiler: besides Ed, Anna has the most drive to solve her uncle's murder so it feels like a {{Shoot the Shaggy Dog}} story when she is killed.]]
** What makes it worse is that [[spoiler: besides Ed, Anna has the most drive to solve her uncle's murder so it feels like a {{Shoot the Shaggy Dog}} story when she is killed.]]
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** What makes it worse is that [[spoiler: besides Ed, Anna has the most drive to solve her uncle's murder so it feels like a {{Shoot the Shaggy Dog}} story when she is killed.]]
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Changed my mind again...
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* {{The Lost Lenore}}: This could apply to [[spoiler: Anna.]] It's somewhat troubling that [[spoiler: she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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* {{The Lost Lenore}}: {{Disposable Woman}}: This could apply to [[spoiler: Anna.]] It's somewhat troubling that [[spoiler: she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Disposable Woman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
** [[spoiler: What makes it worse is besides Ed, Anna Has the most drive to solve her uncles murder so it feel like a shoot the shaggy dog story when she is killed. ]]
** [[spoiler: What makes it worse is besides Ed, Anna Has the most drive to solve her uncles murder so it feel like a shoot the shaggy dog story when she is killed. ]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Disposable Woman}}]]: {{The Lost Lenore}}: This could apply to Anna. [[spoiler: Anna.]] It's somewhat troubling that [[spoiler: she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
** [[spoiler: ** What makes it worse is that [[spoiler: besides Ed, Anna Has has the most drive to solve her uncles uncle's murder so it feel feels like a shoot {{Shoot the shaggy dog Shaggy Dog}} story when she is killed. killed.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Disposable Woman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Disposable Woman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
** [[spoiler: What makes it worse is besides Ed, Anna Has the most drive to solve her uncles murder so it feel like a shoot the shaggy dog story when she is killed. ]]
** [[spoiler: What makes it worse is besides Ed, Anna Has the most drive to solve her uncles murder so it feel like a shoot the shaggy dog story when she is killed. ]]
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* [[spoiler:{{DisposableWoman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{DisposableWoman}}]]: [[spoiler:{{Disposable Woman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also [[spoiler:the only character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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* DisposableWoman: This could apply to Anna. It's a little suspect that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only one who canonically ''has to'' die.
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* DisposableWoman: [[spoiler:{{DisposableWoman}}]]: This could apply to Anna. It's a little suspect somewhat troubling that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the [[spoiler:the only one character who canonically ''has to'' die.]]
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** SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Yet, at the same time, it brings to mind recent developments relating to internet security and privacy, and how privacy shouldn't be infringed on.
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** SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Yet, at the same time, it brings to mind recent developments relating to internet security and privacy, and how privacy shouldn't be infringed on.on.
* DisposableWoman: This could apply to Anna. It's a little suspect that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only one who canonically ''has to'' die.
* DisposableWoman: This could apply to Anna. It's a little suspect that she is the only relevant female character in the game and yet also the only one who canonically ''has to'' die.
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** {{SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped}}: SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: Yet, at the same time, it brings to mind recent developments relating to internet security and privacy, and how privacy shouldn't be infringed on.
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Sorry if I read too deeply into it... this would be a great game for a WMG Page
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{{Anvilicious}}: You could see the game as a rather obvious allegory of 9/11 and the WarOnTerror.