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** In ''Cheerilee's Class'', it's established that at some point after Twilight's coronation, she remodeled Golden Oaks Library into a palace. Flash forward to the Season 4 finale, where the library is destroyed and replaced with a new castle.
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** In ''Cheerilee's Class'', it's established that at some point after Twilight's coronation, she remodeled Golden Oaks Library into a palace. full-blown tree castle. Flash forward to the Season 4 finale, where the library is destroyed and replaced with a new castle. ''Righteous Beatdown'' covers this, too, but delivers a TakeThat calling the canon castle ugly and having the others finish the process to create the enormous tree castle.
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the climax of the story: a redeemed villain works together with a jerkass Unicorn from Canterlot who is no longer a jerk, several youths from Ponyville and the young relatives of visiting foreign emissaries (among their ranks include The Cutie Mark Crusaders, a Changeling, a Griffin, and a Seapony), to help undo the insidious machinations of one pony against Princess Twilight Sparkle: thereby exposing that ponys' treachery to the rulers of Equestria and the other nations. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E25SchoolRazePart1 What ended up happening in]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E26SchoolRazePart2 Season 8 of the show again?]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the climax of the story: a redeemed reformed villain of Twilight Sparkle (Nyx) works together with a jerkass Unicorn from Canterlot who is no longer a jerk, jerk (Prince Blueblood), several youths from Ponyville and the young relatives of visiting foreign emissaries (among emissaries: among their ranks include The Cutie Mark Crusaders, a Changeling, a Griffin, and a Seapony), Seapony, to all help undo the insidious machinations of one pony (Duke Blueblood) against Princess Twilight Sparkle: thereby exposing that ponys' treachery to the rulers of Equestria and the other nations. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E25SchoolRazePart1 What ended up happening in]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E26SchoolRazePart2 Season 8 of the show again?]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the climax of the story: a redeemed villain works together with a jerkass Unicorn from Canterlot who is no longer a jerk, several youths from Ponyville and the young relatives of visiting foreign emissaries (among their ranks include The Cutie Mark Crusaders, a Changeling, a Griffin, and a Seapony), to help undo the insidious machinations of one pony against Princess Twilight Sparkle, Sparkle: thereby exposing the that ponys' treachery to the rulers of Equestria and the other nations. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E25SchoolRazePart1 What ended up happening in]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E26SchoolRazePart2 Season 8 of the show again?]]
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* CrazyAwesome: Twilight's father Night Light is a bit odd, but more than earns his place in the [[BadassFamily Sparkle Clan]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Pretty much any mention of Tirek (intended as a ShoutOut to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTVSpecials special]] ''Rescue From Midnight Castle'') becomes this after the season 4 finale, where it's established that a version of Tirek really DOES exist in the Generation 4 continuity.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Pretty much any mention of Tirek (intended as a ShoutOut to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTVSpecials special]] ''Rescue From Midnight Castle'') becomes this after the season 4 finale, where it's established that a version of Tirek really DOES exist in the Generation 4 continuity. His rampage is covered here in ''Tirek Gets a Righteous Beatdown''.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Dubious relates his past trauma, illustrating the need for someone to call tall claims into question. Unfortunately, he has gone from too credulous to too ''in''credulous.
* JerkassWoobie: [[spoiler: The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble]].
* JerkassWoobie: [[spoiler: The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Dubious relates his past trauma, illustrating the need for someone to call tall claims into question. Unfortunately, he has gone from too credulous to too ''in''credulous.
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** [[spoiler:The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble]].
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** [[spoiler:The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble]].
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* VillainHasAPoint: Garble may count when he accuses ponies of squabbling among themselves for petty reasons of FantasticRacism. This has been the case, but it's not as bad today as his dated sources suggest; [[spoiler: he underestimates ThePowerOfFriendship among ponies]].
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** According to WordOfGod, the scene was related to the central theme of the story, which was something along the lines of "Be careful of what stories you tell your children". This central theme is present even in the main plot, as the legends about Nightmare Moon, nevermind the ones to do with Nightmare Night, are implied to be part of the reason why many have issues accepting Nyx in the first place, because of what accounts to slanderous libel made against Princess Luna in the first place.
* TheWoobie: Nyx feels bad whenever she dwells on her unique origin. She also spends a lot of Nightmare Night in abject terror.
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**According to WordOfGod, the scene was related to the central theme of the story, which was something along the lines of "Be careful of what stories you tell your children". This central theme is present even in the main plot, as the legends about Nightmare Moon, nevermind the ones to do with Nightmare Night, are implied to be part of the reason why many have issues accepting Nyx in the first place, because of what accounts to slanderous libel made against Princess Luna in the first place.
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* CompleteMonster: Based on what Twilight learns from the Crystal Ponies, King Sombra was even worse than in canon. [[spoiler:In short, in addition to being a tyrannical slavelord, he was perfectly willing to commit genocide on his own species to prevent any other unicorns from potentially trying to claim the throne. And that's just scratching the surface of his crimes.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Lord Blueblood isn't even trying to hide the fact that he hates Nyx, and is willing to do anything to get his family on the throne.
** Subverted with Prince Blueblood, despite his usual fandom interpretation.
---> '''Celestia''': You're a ponce and a git, Blueblood, but not a monster.\\
'''Blueblood''': [[DamnedByFaintPraise Um, thanks?]]
* MoralEventHorizon: See CompleteMonster.
** Subverted with Prince Blueblood, despite his usual fandom interpretation.
---> '''Celestia''': You're a ponce and a git, Blueblood, but not a monster.\\
'''Blueblood''': [[DamnedByFaintPraise Um, thanks?]]
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* BrokenBase: The scene where Bruce Mane confronts Applejack over the events of "The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well". Some consider it as warranted as any other DeconstructionFic on the subject. Others (even those who don't like the episode) argue that [[InformedWrongness Applejack wasn't given enough of an opportunity to defend herself]] and criticise it for relying on non-canon events from fan-art to make her look worse, as well as for [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment the scene coming out of nowhere and having nothing do with the surrounding plotlines]].
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* CompleteMonster: Based on what Twilight learns from the Crystal Ponies, King Sombra was even worse than in canon. [[spoiler:In short, in addition to being a tyrannical slavelord, he was perfectly willing to commit genocide on his own species to prevent any other unicorns from potentially trying to claim the throne. And that's just scratching the surface of his crimes.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Pretty much any mention of Tirek (intended as a ShoutOut to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTVSpecials special]] ''Rescue From Midnight Castle'' becomes this after the season 4 finale, where it's established that a version of Tirek really DOES exist in the Generation 4 continuity.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Pretty much any mention of Tirek (intended as a ShoutOut to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTVSpecials special]] ''Rescue From Midnight Castle'' Castle'') becomes this after the season 4 finale, where it's established that a version of Tirek really DOES exist in the Generation 4 continuity.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Pretty much any mention of Tirek (intended as a ShoutOut to the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTVSpecials special]] ''Rescue From Midnight Castle'' becomes this after the season 4 finale, where it's established that a version of Tirek really DOES exist in the Generation 4 continuity.
** In ''Nightmare Night and Nyx'', Bruce Mane mentions that he's on the lookout for heroes, and it seems the Mane Six have caught his eye. [[spoiler: Season 4 has an episode featuring the Mane Six becoming comic book superheroes briefly.]]
** In ''Cheerilee's Class'', it's established that at some point after Twilight's coronation, she remodeled Golden Oaks Library into a palace. Flash forward to the Season 4 finale, where the library is destroyed and replaced with a new castle.
** In ''Nightmare Night and Nyx'', Bruce Mane mentions that he's on the lookout for heroes, and it seems the Mane Six have caught his eye. [[spoiler: Season 4 has an episode featuring the Mane Six becoming comic book superheroes briefly.]]
** In ''Cheerilee's Class'', it's established that at some point after Twilight's coronation, she remodeled Golden Oaks Library into a palace. Flash forward to the Season 4 finale, where the library is destroyed and replaced with a new castle.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Its established that at some point after Twilight's coronation, she remodeled Golden Oaks Library into a palace. Flashforward to the Season 4 finale, where the library is destroyed and replaced with a new castle.
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* CompleteMonster: At least some members of Garble's gang, including Garble himself, would annihilate the entire Crystal Empire for kicks. Granted, [[BlueAndOrangeMorality we can't expect dragon culture to conform to our code of ethics]], but still.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Bruce Mane mentions that he's on the lookout for heroes, and it seems the Mane Six have caught his eye. [[spoiler: Season 4 will have a superhero episode involving either characters based on the Mane Six, or the Mane Six themselves (it's unclear at this point).]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Bruce Mane mentions that he's on the lookout for heroes, and it seems the Mane Six have caught his eye. [[spoiler: Season 4 will have a superhero has an episode involving either characters based on the Mane Six, or featuring the Mane Six themselves (it's unclear at this point).becoming comic book superheroes briefly.]]
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* CrazyAwesome: Twilight's father Night Light is a bit odd, but more than earns his place in the [[BadassFamily Sparkle Clan]].
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* TheWoobie: Willow has a bit of this, with all the bullying he went through before he came to Ponyville.
** Silver Spoon falls into JerkassWoobie territory when the story about her is revealed.
** Silver Spoon falls into JerkassWoobie territory when the story about her is revealed.
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* CompleteMonster: Lord Blueblood isn't even trying to hide the fact that he hates Nyx, and is willing to do anything to get his family on the throne.
** Subverted with Prince Blueblood, despite his usual fandom interpretation.
--> 'Celestia: You're a ponce and a git, Blueblood, but not a monster.'
--> 'Blueblood: [[DamnedByFaintPraise Um, thanks?]]'
** Subverted with Prince Blueblood, despite his usual fandom interpretation.
--> 'Celestia: You're a ponce and a git, Blueblood, but not a monster.'
--> 'Blueblood: [[DamnedByFaintPraise Um, thanks?]]'
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** The Diamond Dogs were pressed into service out of fear for their lives. [[spoiler: Their punishment is relatively merciful.]]
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* TheWoobie: Nyx feels bad whenever she dwells on her unique origin. She also spends a lot of Nightmare Night in abject terror.
** Flitter and her family [[spoiler: have been starving. Flitter takes a big risk in attending the festivities for food, and her parents take a big risk in looking for her. Once their species is discovered, they beg for mercy]].
** Flitter and her family [[spoiler: have been starving. Flitter takes a big risk in attending the festivities for food, and her parents take a big risk in looking for her. Once their species is discovered, they beg for mercy]].
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** To a lesser extent, Garble may count when he accuses ponies of squabbling among themselves for petty reasons of FantasticRacism. This has been the case, but it's not as bad today as his dated sources suggest; [[spoiler: he underestimates ThePowerOfFriendship among ponies]].
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* JerkassWoobie: [[The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: [[The [[spoiler: The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble.]]Garble]].
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* CompleteMonster: At least some members of Garble's gang, including Garble himself, would annihilate the entire Crystal Empire for kicks. Granted, [[BlueAndOrangeMorality we can't expect dragon culture to conform to our code of ethics]], but still.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Dubious relates his past trauma, illustrating the need for someone to call tall claims into question. Unfortunately, he has gone from too credulous to too ''in''credulous.
** To a lesser extent, Garble may count when he accuses ponies of squabbling among themselves for petty reasons of FantasticRacism. This has been the case, but it's not as bad today as his dated sources suggest; [[spoiler: he underestimates ThePowerOfFriendship among ponies]].
* JerkassWoobie: [[The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble.]]
* JerkassHasAPoint: Dubious relates his past trauma, illustrating the need for someone to call tall claims into question. Unfortunately, he has gone from too credulous to too ''in''credulous.
** To a lesser extent, Garble may count when he accuses ponies of squabbling among themselves for petty reasons of FantasticRacism. This has been the case, but it's not as bad today as his dated sources suggest; [[spoiler: he underestimates ThePowerOfFriendship among ponies]].
* JerkassWoobie: [[The dragons who attack the Crystal Empire get beat up and go to jail, but the worst part is the after effects of their Fire Opals, perhaps especially for Garble.]]
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