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* EvilIsSexy: Right is described as being "oddly handsome" under his mask. Subverted with Left, however; Viper states that while he's not ugly, even without the scars his features are more blunted.
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* OnceOriginalNowCommon: Some reviewers said that this story was yet another unoriginal Evil Shadowkhan Jade story. Unbeknownst to them, this fic was one of the very first stories that uses that plot, and due its success it spawned plenty of similar stories.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Some reviewers said that this story was yet another unoriginal Evil Shadowkhan Jade story. Unbeknownst to them, this fic was one of the very first stories that uses that plot, and due its success it spawned plenty of similar stories.
* SelfishEvil: Jade. As Wong explains, she's acting purely on her desires, and anyone who gets in her way is automatically her enemy.
* SelfishEvil: Jade. As Wong explains, she's acting purely on her desires, and anyone who gets in her way is automatically her enemy.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The first thing Lung does after getting more than a single scene per chapter is capture Jade and torture her until she agrees to serve him. And he ''keeps'' torturing her when she refuses, even when it becomes apparent that the process is killing her. It's met with a lot of satisfaction from the readers when [[spoiler: Right kills him.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: MoralEventHorizon:
** The first thing Lung does after getting more than a single scene per chapter is capture Jade and torture her until she agrees to serve him. And he ''keeps'' torturing her when she refuses, even when it becomes apparent that the process is killing her. It's met with a lot of satisfaction from the readers when [[spoiler: Right kills him.]]
** The first thing Lung does after getting more than a single scene per chapter is capture Jade and torture her until she agrees to serve him. And he ''keeps'' torturing her when she refuses, even when it becomes apparent that the process is killing her. It's met with a lot of satisfaction from the readers when [[spoiler: Right kills him.]]
