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* TheWoobie: The girl [[spoiler:(a.k.a Gloria)]]. Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; but she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents start treating her terribly when she tried to convince them to stop believing that the boy is still alive.
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* TheWoobie: The girl [[spoiler:(a.k.a Gloria)]]. Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; but she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents start treating her terribly when she tried to convince them to stop believing that the boy is still alive.alive.
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* TheWoobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; but she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents start treating her terribly when she tried to convince them to stop believing that the boy is still alive.
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* TheWoobie: The girl (a.[[spoiler:(a.k.a Gloria).Gloria)]]. Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; but she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents start treating her terribly when she tried to convince them to stop believing that the boy is still alive.
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Mother forcing her family to pretend their dead son is still alive and abusing her daughter are morally questionable in itself, but she truely crosses the line when she [[spoiler:kills a ranfom boy to replace her son's decayed corpse]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Mother forcing her family to pretend their dead son is still alive and abusing her daughter are morally questionable in itself, but she truely crosses the line when she [[spoiler:kills a ranfom random boy to replace her son's decayed corpse]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: The Mother forcing her family to pretend their dead son is still alive and abusing her daughter are morally questionable in itself, but she truely crosses the line when she [[spoiler:kills a ranfom boy to replace her son's decayed corpse]].
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* JerkassWoobie: The parents. Even though the mother went insane after the boy's death and even committed murder towards the end of the story and the father was following the mother's orders, you can't help but feel sorry for the both of them as they lost their son due to an accident that they caused.
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* JerkassWoobie: The parents. Even though the mother went insane after the boy's death and even committed murder towards the end of the story and the father was following the mother's orders, you can't help but feel sorry for the both of them as they lost their son due to an accident that they caused.
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* NightmareFuel: The entire story is full of nightmarish moments.
** The story starts off with the boy's father accidentally running over the boy with a car and the boy's head ends up being crushed because of it. This then leads to the mother replacing the boy's head with a pumpkin.
** The boy's body decaying over the course of the story. There are horrific descriptions in the story about the boy's decaying body such as the boy's skin turning green and maggots crawling over his body.
** The mother's descent into madness after the death of her son. She takes the boy's dead body and pretends that the boy is still alive. She gets even worse in the story when she starts threatening both the father and the daughter into playing along. Then, towards the end of the story, the mother murders an innocent young boy to take his body to replace her dead son's decaying body with and then tries to murder her daughter after she starts hallucinating that her dead son told her to kill her daughter.
** The story starts off with the boy's father accidentally running over the boy with a car and the boy's head ends up being crushed because of it. This then leads to the mother replacing the boy's head with a pumpkin.
** The boy's body decaying over the course of the story. There are horrific descriptions in the story about the boy's decaying body such as the boy's skin turning green and maggots crawling over his body.
** The mother's descent into madness after the death of her son. She takes the boy's dead body and pretends that the boy is still alive. She gets even worse in the story when she starts threatening both the father and the daughter into playing along. Then, towards the end of the story, the mother murders an innocent young boy to take his body to replace her dead son's decaying body with and then tries to murder her daughter after she starts hallucinating that her dead son told her to kill her daughter.
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* TheWoobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat her very well due to the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.
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* TheWoobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; but she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat start treating her very well due terribly when she tried to convince them to stop believing that the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.boy is still alive.
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* The Woobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat her very well due to the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.
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* The Woobie: TheWoobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat her very well due to the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.
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* {{Squick}}: The boy's body starts decaying throughout the story and there are vivid details describing the decomposition of the boy's body such as the boy's body started forming green and brown colors on the skin and maggots started crawling all over the body.
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* {{Squick}}: The boy's body starts decaying throughout the story and there are vivid details describing the decomposition of the boy's body such as the boy's body started forming green and brown colors on the skin and maggots started crawling all over the body.body.
* JerkassWoobie: The parents. Even though the mother went insane after the boy's death and even committed murder towards the end of the story and the father was following the mother's orders, you can't help but feel sorry for the both of them as they lost their son due to an accident that they caused.
* The Woobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat her very well due to the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.
* JerkassWoobie: The parents. Even though the mother went insane after the boy's death and even committed murder towards the end of the story and the father was following the mother's orders, you can't help but feel sorry for the both of them as they lost their son due to an accident that they caused.
* The Woobie: The girl (a.k.a Gloria). Not only does she witness her mother going insane and forcing her and her father into thinking that the boy is still alive; she's forced to stay with the dead corpse of her brother in her room and her parents don't treat her very well due to the mother going insane and the father being too afraid of the mother to stand up for his daughter.
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* NightmareFuel: The entire story is full of nightmarish moments.
** The story starts off with the boy's father accidentally running over the boy with a car and the boy's head ends up being crushed because of it. This then leads to the mother replacing the boy's head with a pumpkin.
** The boy's body decaying over the course of the story. There are horrific descriptions in the story about the boy's decaying body such as the boy's skin turning green and maggots crawling over his body.
** The mother's descent into madness after the death of her son. She takes the boy's dead body and pretends that the boy is still alive. She gets even worse in the story when she starts threatening both the father and the daughter into playing along. Then, towards the end of the story, the mother murders an innocent young boy to take his body to replace her dead son's decaying body with and then tries to murder her daughter after she starts hallucinating that her dead son told her to kill her daughter.
** The story starts off with the boy's father accidentally running over the boy with a car and the boy's head ends up being crushed because of it. This then leads to the mother replacing the boy's head with a pumpkin.
** The boy's body decaying over the course of the story. There are horrific descriptions in the story about the boy's decaying body such as the boy's skin turning green and maggots crawling over his body.
** The mother's descent into madness after the death of her son. She takes the boy's dead body and pretends that the boy is still alive. She gets even worse in the story when she starts threatening both the father and the daughter into playing along. Then, towards the end of the story, the mother murders an innocent young boy to take his body to replace her dead son's decaying body with and then tries to murder her daughter after she starts hallucinating that her dead son told her to kill her daughter.
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* {{Squick}}: The boy's body starts decaying throughout the story and there are vivid details describing the decomposition of the boy's body such as the boy's body started forming green and brown colors on the skin and maggots started crawling all over the body.
