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* FridgeHorror: Misty is constantly surprised at Ash doing nice things for other people and not expecting anything in return, at one point even suspecting that this might stem from being dropped on his head as a child. Just ''what the hell'' was her past like that such altruism is completely foreign to her?
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* AuthorFilibuster / AuthorTract: the writer outright states that the Gary oneshot has elements of this over fandom reactions to the Kalos League final. It also covers the Author's views on what Pokemon Master is.
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** The Gary Oneshot, which starts both it's summary and it's up front author note with a ''contains Author viewpoints'' warning, is notable in this for being well received by the readership at large.
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* HarsherInHindsight: =MissingNo= [=MissingNo=] notes in fic that in the old timeline no one could ever reach their dreams: not Ash, not May, not Brock, etc. Then came Lumiose, where Ash got soo close to the win.....
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* HarsherInHindsight: MissingNO =MissingNo= notes in fic that in the old timeline no one could ever reach their dreams: not Ash, not May, not Brock, etc. Then came Lumiose, where Ash got soo close to the win.....
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* HarsherInHindsight: MissingNO notes in fic that in the old timeline no one could ever reach their dreams: not Ash, not May, not Brock, etc. Then came Lumiose, where Ash got soo close to the win.....
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Many fans who disliked Iris' anime incarnation like the way the author handled her.
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* UnpopularPopularCharacter: Psyduck is a great source of annoyance to Misty and her Pokémon, but a great source of amusement to the readers.
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** Psyduck is a great source of annoyance to Misty and her Pokémon, but a great source of amusement to the readers.
** Psyduck is a great source of annoyance to Misty and her Pokémon, but a great source of amusement to the readers.
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** The Pokedexes: Ash's Pokedex annoys Ash, Misty, and Iris to no end, and Paul can't stand his, but the fans can't get enough of them.
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** Due to not being announced at the time, the in universe Trainer Nations did not include Alola. This potential plothole was solved by the announcement of Alola having a system very different from gyms.
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** Ash getting into a one-on-one fight with [[spoiler:a Kangaskhan]]... and winning.
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** A minor one: rather than nicknames, Lt. Surge is fond of giving his Pokemon army ranks based on their power, yet his most powerful Raichu is just Sergeant Major, which would make somebody wonder why didn't he choose cooler ranks like Captaan, Commander, Colonel or General. Well, given that Surge is a ''Lieutenant'', it wouldn't make much sense to give his Pokemon, which are technically his subordinates, bigger ranks than his.
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** A minor one: rather than nicknames, Lt. Surge is fond of giving his Pokemon army ranks based on their power, yet his most powerful Raichu is just Sergeant Major, which would make somebody wonder why didn't he choose cooler ranks like Captaan, Captain, Commander, Colonel or General. Well, given that Surge is a ''Lieutenant'', it wouldn't make much sense to give his Pokemon, which are technically his subordinates, bigger ranks than his.
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Bloodlines shown in fic correlate surprisingly well with the Devil Fruit Types of OnePiece fame: Species Bloodlines are Zoans, Type/Hearts are Logia, and Technique are Paramecia. Dominion is a bit trickier, but it has some similarities to a similarly regarded power that is (probably) not related: Haki.
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* FridgeBrilliance: FridgeBrilliance:
** The Bloodlines shown in fic correlate surprisingly well with the Devil Fruit Types of OnePiece fame: Species Bloodlines are Zoans, Type/Hearts are Logia, and Technique are Paramecia. Dominion is a bit trickier, but it has some similarities to a similarly regarded power that is (probably) not related: Haki.
** A minor one: rather than nicknames, Lt. Surge is fond of giving his Pokemon army ranks based on their power, yet his most powerful Raichu is just Sergeant Major, which would make somebody wonder why didn't he choose cooler ranks like Captaan, Commander, Colonel or General. Well, given that Surge is a ''Lieutenant'', it wouldn't make much sense to give his Pokemon, which are technically his subordinates, bigger ranks than his.
** The Bloodlines shown in fic correlate surprisingly well with the Devil Fruit Types of OnePiece fame: Species Bloodlines are Zoans, Type/Hearts are Logia, and Technique are Paramecia. Dominion is a bit trickier, but it has some similarities to a similarly regarded power that is (probably) not related: Haki.
** A minor one: rather than nicknames, Lt. Surge is fond of giving his Pokemon army ranks based on their power, yet his most powerful Raichu is just Sergeant Major, which would make somebody wonder why didn't he choose cooler ranks like Captaan, Commander, Colonel or General. Well, given that Surge is a ''Lieutenant'', it wouldn't make much sense to give his Pokemon, which are technically his subordinates, bigger ranks than his.
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** Which is nothing compared to Ash's reaction upon finding [[spoiler: that Dawn, Iris and Cilan might be dead in this timeline]]
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** Misty ponders Ash and why he seems familiar... only to be rudely interrupted by [[BigEater her stomach grumbling]].
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** Misty ponders Ash and why he seems familiar... only to be rudely interrupted by [[BigEater her stomach grumbling]].
** Team Rocket accidentally disturbing a Beedrill swarm by starting their motto.SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Now with [[Funny/PokemonResetBloodlines its own page]].
** Misty ponders Ash and why he seems familiar... only to be rudely interrupted by [[BigEater her stomach grumbling]].
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* CreatorsPet: Inverted with John Archer, who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. The Author outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not liking writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of Vegeta, except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'.
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** The fate of [[spoiler:John Archer]].
** Ash finding the graves of Brock's
** The fate of [[spoiler:John Archer]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: The Bloodlines shown in fic correlate surprisingly well with the Devil Fruit Types of OnePiece fame: Species Bloodlines are Zoans, Type/Hearts are Logia, and Technique are Paramecia. Dominion is a bit trickier, but it has some similarities to a similarly regarded power that is (probably) not related: Haki.
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** Ash vs Red. That is all.
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** Ash vs Red. That is all.The entire chapter was filled with good battles, but it was topped off with a fight between Ash and Red. The Author managed to write that fight, ''[[BrokenBase the fight that divides the fandom like no other]]'', well enough that it has received extremely positive reception.
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* TearJerker: Ash finding the graves of Brock's parents.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Red's Pikachu was shown using Thunderpunch as part of a way to make him stand out for Ash's Pikachu and other Pikachu in the series. In XY&Z, a Character of the Day named Jimmy used a Pikachu with Thunderpunch.
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* UnpopularPopularCharacter: Psyduck is a great source of annoyance to Misty and her Pokémon, but a great source of amusement to the readers.
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* TakeThatScrappy: Paul when Lt. Surge calls him out for his insistence on winning at all costs, especially when Surge forfeits rather than risk his Raichu losing it's limbs to a powered up razor leaf. Paul tries calling Lt. Surge's strategies "pathetic" only for Surge to respond that as Paul is neither a war veteran nor a gym leader, he has no room to talk.
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** Samurai earned a lot of ire for being central to one of the anime's first examples of a BrokenAesop. Here, he's a ButtMonkey who gets humiliated every time he appears.
** Paul when Lt. Surge calls him out for his insistence on winning at all costs, especially when Surge forfeits rather than risk his Raichu losing it's limbs to a powered up razor leaf. Paul tries calling Lt. Surge's strategies "pathetic" only for Surge to respond that as Paul is neither a war veteran nor a gym leader, he has no room to talk.
** Samurai earned a lot of ire for being central to one of the anime's first examples of a BrokenAesop. Here, he's a ButtMonkey who gets humiliated every time he appears.
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* BetterThanItSounds: A Peggy Sue Harem fic staring a Superpowered Ash redoing his journey better with awesome powers.
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