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** Seth saves Beatrice twice from said oppressors. And when she fell off a horse and lost her conscience, Seth went looking for her, during a thunderstorm!
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* IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only about forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his feet. So what does she do? She tells nobody about the true reason why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... and unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry a disgusting old aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them lead to much misery for them both (including that [[spoiler: Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who derives pleasure from harming women. Having already gone through two wives, the first of which he murdered and the second he [[DrivenToSuicide drove to suicide]], Rosenschiöld sets his sights on marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than him, solely because he wants a virgin to be his wife. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuse he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity prior to their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining days in a brothel, overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who derives pleasure from harming women. Having already gone through two wives, the first of which he murdered and the second he [[DrivenToSuicide drove to suicide]], Rosenschiöld sets his sights on marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than him, solely because he wants a virgin to be his wife. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuse he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity prior to their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining days in a brothel, overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who derives pleasure from harming women. Having already gone through two wives, the first of which he murdered and the second he [[DrivenToSuicide drove to suicide]], Rosenschiöld sets his sights on marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than him, solely because he wants a virgin to be his wife. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuser he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity prior to their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining days in a brothel, overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who derives pleasure from harming women. Having already gone through two wives, the first of which he murdered and the second he [[DrivenToSuicide drove to suicide]], Rosenschiöld sets his sights on marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than him, solely because he wants a virgin to be his wife. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity prior to their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining days in a brothel, overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* MomentsOfAwesome: Beatrice competes with men in ice-skating and horse-riding, assists in a surgery and speaks against her oppressors.
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* MomentsOfAwesome: SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Beatrice competes with men in ice-skating and horse-riding, assists in a surgery and speaks against her oppressors.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuser he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who loves to hurt women for pleasure. derives pleasure from harming women. Having already gone through two wives, the first of which he murdered and the second he [[DrivenToSuicide drove to suicide]], Rosenschiöld turns sets his attention to sights on marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, him, solely because he wants a virgin. virgin to be his wife. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuser he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity before prior to their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel brothel, overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Car-Jan Rosenschiöld]] is a {{sadist}} who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, [[DomesticAbuser he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice]] after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage, even though Beatrice had never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld is a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever, as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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** Rosenschiöld crosses it when he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice on her wedding night.
** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after shewas [[spoiler:was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.night]].
** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. Just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! She was also brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. Just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! She was also brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...And that is only the first half of the book...
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* IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? She tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... and unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for them both (including that Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).
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* IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like about forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. feet. So what does she do? She tells nobody the truth about the true reason why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... and unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old a disgusting old aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads lead to much misery for them both (including that [[spoiler: Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night). night).]]
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. Just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! She was also brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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** Carl Jan crosses it when he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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** Carl Jan Rosenschiöld crosses it when he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage withCarl Jan in exchange for money Rosenschiöld, despite knowing she would suffer. They definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with
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*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food or water, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They deafinately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice NoSympathy after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food or water, food, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They deafinately definately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice NoSympathy [[NoSympathy no sympathy]] after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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** Carl Jan crosses it when he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food or water, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They deafinately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice NoSympathy after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
** Carl Jan crosses it when he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice on her wedding night.
*** It's hard to tell when Wilhelm and Edvard crossed it because they have so many potential moments: beating Beatrice nearly to death, locking her in a room for a week with no food or water, impregnating a minor, abandoning her, and showing no remorse when she dies after an abortion, and forcing Beatrice into marriage with Carl Jan in exchange for money despite knowing she would suffer. They deafinately crossed it though when they showed Beatrice NoSympathy after she was raped and nearly killed on her wedding night.
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm and Edvard are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. They too are played seriously in every scene, and as far as we know, they don't regret their crimes either.
* IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? Of course, she tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... And unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for them both (including that Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).
* IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? Of course, she tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... And unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for them both (including that Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. And just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! Not to mention that she was brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. And just Just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! Not to mention that she She was also brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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* IdiotBall: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? Of course, she tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... And unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for them both (including that Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).
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* IdiotBall: IdiotPlot: Beatrice is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only like forty years older than her, but he also treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? Of course, she tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to marry Rosenschiöld (he would get her beautiful but weak cousin instead, if she didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... And unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for them both (including that Beatrice gets brutally raped and battered on her wedding night).
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm and Edvard are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. Wilhelm has a history of abusing his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm and Edvard are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. Wilhelm has a history of abusing his own children They too are played seriously in every scene, and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of as far as we know, they don't regret their crimes either.
* IdiotBall: Beatrice(whom he actually hates for no good reason at all) includes is bullied and pressured by her abusive and tyrannical uncle into an engagement with Rosenschiöld, who's not only threats and direct physyical violence, like forty years older than her, but he also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve treats women like they're dirt under his shoes. So what does she do? Of course, she tells nobody the truth about why she agreed to death! Edvard joins marry Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, (he would get her beautiful but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when weak cousin instead, if she dies after didn't sacrifice herself). To be fair, she really is in a crappy situation, but still, yikes... And unfortunately, Seth is no better. Since he thinks that she willingly rejected him to marry an abortion. He also can't feel love even old disgusting aristocrat, stupid pride keeps him from admitting that he loves her. Several misunderstandings between them (sigh...) leads to much misery for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure them both (including that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was gets brutally raped and almost killed battered on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame! night).
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. Wilhelm has a history of abusing his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. Wilhelm has a history of abusing his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) all) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld, who's like forty years older than her and treats women like dirt under his shoes. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. And just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! Not to mention that she was brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for five long years, forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld, who's like forty years older than her and treats women like dirt under his shoes.Rosenschiöld. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the least. And just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! Not to mention that she was brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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* SpoiledByTheFormat: Just when you think that things will get better for Beatrice and Seth, you realise that you still have half the book left to go...
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* SpoiledByTheFormat: Just when you think that things will get better for Beatrice and Seth, you realise that you Seth have what can only be described as a really hot date. Surely they will sort things out now, after eight months of misunderstandings? Surely now Beatrice won't have to marry Rosenschiöld? But wait! Don't we still have almost half the book left to go...go? Oh damn...
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. And yeah, he makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard Edvard's only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice might be a tough girl, but for many years, it seems like the universe itself is out to get her.
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* TheWoobie: Beatrice might be a tough girl, is smart, competent and tough, but life has been really hard on her. Not only did she lose her mother when she was only six years old and her father when she was only fourteen years old. But she also has to live with her tyrannical uncle, who abuses her for many five long years, it seems forcing her into a marriage with Rosenschiöld, who's like forty years older than her and treats women like dirt under his shoes. Beatrice's relationship with Seth is also complicated to say the universe itself is least. And just when she thought that things would turn out good between them, cue her sadistic cousin ruining everything! Not to get her.mention that she was brutally raped and almost killed on her wedding night...
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* MomentsOfAwesome: Beatrice competes with men in ice-skating and horse-riding, assists in a surgery and speaks against her oppressors. Seth saves Beatrice twice from said oppressors and once after she had fallen off a horse amd lost her conscience.
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* MomentsOfAwesome: Beatrice competes with men in ice-skating and horse-riding, assists in a surgery and speaks against her oppressors.
** Seth saves Beatrice twice from saidoppressors and once after oppressors. And when she had fallen fell off a horse amd and lost her conscience. conscience, Seth went looking for her, during a thunderstorm!
** Seth saves Beatrice twice from said
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even after she died from an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. Gratitude is yet another concept, that he could never grasp. And yeah, he made sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld..
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** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even when she dies after she died from an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. Gratitude is yet another concept, that he could never grasp. And yeah, he made makes sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld.. Rosenschiöld. And after she was raped and almost killed on her wedding night, Edvard only response was that she had only herself to blame!
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld. While this Swedish historical romance novel has more than its fair share of [[TheSociopath sociopaths]] and domestic abusers, Rosenschiöld distinguishes himself from the rest as a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld. While this Swedish historical romance novel has more than its fair share of [[TheSociopath sociopaths]] and domestic abusers, Rosenschiöld distinguishes himself from the rest as is a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever whatsoever, as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women.women.
** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even after she died from an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. Gratitude is yet another concept, that he could never grasp. And yeah, he made sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld..
** It should be noted though that in-universe, Wilhelm (Beatrice's tyrannical uncle) and Edvard (her sociopath cousin) are considered just as evil as Rosenschiöld. And most readers will agree with this. Wilhelm has a history of abusing both his own children and made his wife ill from unhappiness. His treatment of Beatrice (whom he actually hates for no good reason at all, as much as she's his niece) includes not only threats and direct physyical violence, but also giving her no food for a whole week, almost letting her starve to death! Edvard joins Rosenschiöld in his abuse of different women, and he once started beating a maid while having sex with her, just because he suddenly got bored. He makes a fourteen-year-old girl pregnant, but abandons her anyway, not feeling any remorse even after she died from an abortion. He also can't feel love even for his own family, only feeling boredom when his sister is seriously ill. Gratitude is yet another concept, that he could never grasp. And yeah, he made sure that Beatrice was separated from her love interest Seth, giving her no other choice but to marry Rosenschiöld..
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld. While this Swedish historical romance novel has more than its fair share of [[TheSociopath sociopaths]] and domestic abusers, Rosenschiöld distinguishes himself from the rest as a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women. Seth, Beatrice’s LoveInterest and the novel’s male protagonist, [[KarmaHoudini thinks that Rosenschiöld got off too easily]] and the reader is left hoping that his death was a painful one.
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld. While this Swedish historical romance novel has more than its fair share of [[TheSociopath sociopaths]] and domestic abusers, Rosenschiöld distinguishes himself from the rest as a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women. Seth, Beatrice’s LoveInterest and the novel’s male protagonist, [[KarmaHoudini thinks that Rosenschiöld got off too easily]] and the reader is left hoping that his death was a painful one.
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* CompleteMonster: Carl-Jan Rosenschiöld. While this Swedish historical romance novel has more than its fair share of [[TheSociopath sociopaths]] and domestic abusers, Rosenschiöld has an entry on distinguishes himself from the rest as a sadist who loves to hurt women for pleasure. Having already gone through two wives, Rosenschiöld turns his attention to marrying Beatrice, a girl who is over forty years younger than Rosenschiöld, solely because he wants a virgin. On their wedding night, he rapes and nearly kills Beatrice after he discovers that she lost her virginity before their marriage. What makes [[MoralEventHorizon this page.vile act]] cement his status as a monster is that Beatrice never made a promise to stay a virgin until they got married. Moreover, she never even ''heard'' about the promise her cousin made to Rosenschiöld that she would remain a virgin until their marriage. He expresses no remorse for his crimes whatsoever as he spends his remaining couple of days in a brothel overindulging in aphrodisiac drugs and sexually abusing their women. Seth, Beatrice’s LoveInterest and the novel’s male protagonist, [[KarmaHoudini thinks that Rosenschiöld got off too easily]] and the reader is left hoping that his death was a painful one.
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* SpoiledByTheFormat: Just when you think that things will get better for Beatrice and Seth, you realise that you still have half the book left to go...
* TheWoobie: Beatrice might be a tough girl, but for many years, it seems like the universe itself is out to get her.
* SpoiledByTheFormat: Just when you think that things will get better for Beatrice and Seth, you realise that you still have half the book left to go...
* TheWoobie: Beatrice might be a tough girl, but for many years, it seems like the universe itself is out to get her.
