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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Did the bisons and settlers hate Pinkie's sharing song because it was awful, or because both sides felt like Pinkie was an outsider butting in and preaching to them without actually giving any useful solutions to their problems besides "just learn to share"?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Did the bisons and settlers hate hated Pinkie's sharing song because it was awful, or because both sides felt like Pinkie was an outsider butting in and preaching to them without actually giving any useful solutions to their problems besides "just learn to share"?
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Needs to explain why they were supposed to be sympathetic.
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** On the other hand, some fans view the Settlers as unsympathetic as they are new arrivals while the Buffalo lived for generations on the land, meaning they have more of a claim to it.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Does bisons and settlers hated Pinkie's sharing song because it was awful, or both sides felt like Pinkie was an outsider butting in and preaching to them without actually giving any useful solutions to their problems besides "just learn to share"?
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Does Did the bisons and settlers hated hate Pinkie's sharing song because it was awful, or because both sides felt like Pinkie was an outsider butting in and preaching to them without actually giving any useful solutions to their problems besides "just learn to share"?
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Btw, this interpretation is not mine, it belongs to Rainbow, who allowed me to place it in her name.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Does bisons and settlers hated Pinkie's sharing song because it was awful, or both sides felt like Pinkie was an outsider butting in and preaching to them without actually giving any useful solutions to their problems besides "just learn to share"?
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** On the other hand, some fans view the Settlers as unsympathetic as they are new arrivals while the Buffalo lived for generations on the land, meaning they have more have a claim to it.
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** On the other hand, some fans view the Settlers as unsympathetic as they are new arrivals while the Buffalo lived for generations on the land, meaning they have more have of a claim to it.
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** On the other hand, some fans view the Settlers as unsympathetic as they are new arrivals while the Buffalo lived for generations on the land, meaning they have more have a claim to it.
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Per TRS.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: Several viewers joke that Dave Polsky was high while writing this episode due to some bizarre moments, such as Applejack reading a bedtime story to an apple tree.
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Now Flame Bait
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* UnfortunateImplications: This episode came [[https://ladygeekgirl.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/my-little-pony-and-racism under]] [[http://racism-in-a-kids-show.blogspot.com fire]] for its {{Disneyfication}} of the American westward movement and its purges on Native American homeland by settlers.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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%%* UncannyValley: [[https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/3/3d/Braeburn_grinning_S01E21.png/revision/latest?cb=20120630033916 This]] animation error with Braeburn's face.
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* BrokenBase: This is the second most controversial episode of the season after "Feeling Pinkie Keen,"[[note]]Which shares the same writer.[[/note]] with many fans saying it presents an [[ValuesDissonance insultingly offensive]] [[{{Disneyfication}} simplification]] of the conflict between Native Americans and white settlers. Other fans believe that the story is not meant to be a direct parallel to the real-life conflict, and that the haters are taking things too seriously, and think the episode's just a good, humorous experience.
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* BrokenBase: This is the second most controversial episode of the season after "Feeling Pinkie Keen,"[[note]]Which shares the same writer.[[/note]] with many fans saying it presents an [[ValuesDissonance insultingly offensive]] [[{{Disneyfication}} insultingly offensive simplification]] of the conflict between Native Americans and white settlers. Other fans believe that the story is not meant to be a direct parallel to the real-life conflict, and that the haters are taking things too seriously, and think the episode's just a good, humorous experience.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Fluttershy's memetic statement "I'd like to be a tree" took on a decidedly dark edge in Season 7, where she's among the victims of a serious disease that ends with turning into a tree.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: HarsherInHindsight: Fluttershy's memetic statement "I'd like to be a tree" took on a decidedly dark edge in Season 7, where she's among the victims of a serious disease that ends with turning into a tree.
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* UnintentionallyUnsymoathetic: While the episode tries to frame both the settlers and Buffalo as wrong for trying to fight, the fact that the Buffalo brutally demand the Settlers to get rid of their orchard rather than properly explaining about how their blocking their stampeding grounds makes them come across as entitled bullies. It’s no wonder the Settlers weren’t willing to compromise with them.
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* UnintentionallyUnsymoathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: While the episode tries to frame both the settlers and Buffalo as wrong for trying to fight, the fact that the Buffalo brutally demand the Settlers to get rid of their orchard rather than properly explaining about how their blocking their stampeding grounds makes them come across as entitled bullies. It’s no wonder the Settlers weren’t willing to compromise with them. The fact that Little Strongheart and some other Buffalo committed a theft of an apple tree doesn’t really help their case.
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* UnintentionallyUnsymoathetic: While the episode tries to frame both the settlers and Buffalo as wrong for trying to fight, the fact that the Buffalo brutally demand the Settlers to get rid of their orchard rather than properly explaining about how their blocking their stampeding grounds makes them come across as entitled bullies. It’s no wonder the Settlers weren’t willing to compromise with them.
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%5** "Welcome to AAAAAAPPLELOOSA!"
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Cleanup - commenting out ZC Es and rewording another to be clearer. (I'm bringing up the Unfortunate Implications example elsewhere.)
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Rainbow Dash [[SomethingElseAlsoRises spreading her wings]] after [[LesYay Pinkie Pie comes out dressed as a showgirl.]]
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* AccidentalInnuendo: One scene has a continuity error where Rainbow Dash [[SomethingElseAlsoRises spreading her wings]] after [[LesYay Dash's wings abruptly spread out between shots. Given that the shot in between shows Pinkie Pie comes coming out dressed in a showgirl outfit, fans quickly began interpreting it as a showgirl.]]"[[SomethingElseAlsoRises wingboner]]".
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* FoeYayShipping: This episode gave quite a popular fan ship between Braeburn and Little Strongheart.
** It certainly helps that unlike most cases, they're not hostile to each other, and both were more than willing to see eye to eye.
** It certainly helps that unlike most cases, they're not hostile to each other, and both were more than willing to see eye to eye.
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* FoeYayShipping: This episode gave quite a popular fan ship between Braeburn and Little Strongheart.
**Strongheart. It certainly helps that unlike most cases, they're not hostile to each other, and both were more than willing to see eye to eye.
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* MemeticMutation: Fluttershy is a tree.
** "Welcome to AAAAAAPPLELOOSA!"
** Wingboner!
** "Everypony's gay for Braeburn" got this for a while after Braeburn became one of the few semi-developed male characters after Spike.
** "Welcome to AAAAAAPPLELOOSA!"
** Wingboner!
** "Everypony's gay for Braeburn" got this for a while after Braeburn became one of the few semi-developed male characters after Spike.
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* UncannyValley: [[https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/3/3d/Braeburn_grinning_S01E21.png/revision/latest?cb=20120630033916 This]] animation error with Braeburn's face.
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