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** Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and the salesman he stole from probably won't agree.
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** Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and interrupted, the salesman he stole from from, and a certain axolotl whose house he broke into probably won't agree.
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** Just the fact that TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Wario in Chapter 19 is ''that'' long, followed by a retaliation by him [[{{Fartillery}} doing what he does best]]
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** Just the fact that TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Wario to Bob in Chapter 19 is ''that'' long, followed by a retaliation by him [[{{Fartillery}} doing what he does best]]
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and the salesman he stole from probably won't agree.
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** Just the fact that TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Wario in Chapter 19 is ''that'' long, followed by a retaliation by him [[{{Fartillery}} doing what he does best]]
** Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and the salesman he stole from probably won't agree.
** Just the fact that TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Wario in Chapter 19 is ''that'' long, followed by a retaliation by him [[{{Fartillery}} doing what he does best]]
** Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and the salesman he stole from probably won't agree.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Some of the antics Wario gets into in his search for Waluigi are pretty funny... though the owl he rudely interrupted and the salesman he stole from probably won't agree.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. One new moment includes Chapter 34 opening with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]], and after it's over, we get this line from Mario in his thoughts, also not in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus focuses on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. One new moment includes Chapter 34 opening with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]], and after it's over, we get this line from Mario in his thoughts, also not in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
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* ParanoiaFuel: As if the implications of Waluigi lurking in the shadows watching the antics of the [=SMG4=] Gang from ''anywhere'' wasn't bad enough in the original, thanks to AdaptationExpansion, more scenes have been added with this possibility in mind.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. One new moment includes Chapter 34 opening with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. One new moment includes Chapter 34 opening with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].Artist"]], and after it's over, we get this line from Mario in his thoughts, also not in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
-->'''Mario:''' (''thinking'') Everything I do, giving Luigi so much stress, Mario’s got to take it easy with the pranks if I want to be with my bro more often... Not to mention, he takes care of me too.
-->'''Mario:''' (''thinking'') Everything I do, giving Luigi so much stress, Mario’s got to take it easy with the pranks if I want to be with my bro more often... Not to mention, he takes care of me too.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. Chapter 34 in particular opens with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Fans who liked the original arc for bringing out the best in Mario in regards to his interactions with Luigi will be pleased to know that this fic's adaptation of it focus on his BigBrotherInstinct just as much. One new moment includes Chapter 34 in particular opens opening with some nice dialogue between the two brothers that wasn't present in [[Recap/SMG4MarioTheScamArtist "Mario The Scam Artist"]].
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Some of the characters Waluigi "recruits", such as Francis and the [=YouTube=] CEO[[note]]the author refuses to use her real name to coordinate with [=FanFiction's=] policy against real people being included in stories[[/note]], were quite a surprise treat with no hint of appearances.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Some of the characters Waluigi "recruits", such as Francis and the [=YouTube=] CEO[[note]]the author refuses to use her real name to coordinate with [=FanFiction's=] policy against real people being included in stories[[/note]], were quite a surprise treat with no hint treat. The author seems to realize this, as he says "you never saw that coming" in the [=DeviantArt=] description for the chapter depicting the appearance of appearances.the latter appearance.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: Some of the characters Waluigi "recruits", such as Francis and the [=YouTube=] CEO[[note]]the author refuses to use her real name to coordinate with [=FanFiction's=] policy against real people being included in stories[[/note]], were quite a surprise treat with no hint of appearances.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection. Chapter 9 is even ''[[VillainEpisode dedicated]]'' to showing how far his spying goes.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection. Chapter 9 is even ''[[VillainEpisode dedicated]]'' to showing how far his spying goes. That's not even getting into the people he kidnaps and/or manipulates to expand his army of T-Pose Zombies.
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* {{Woolseyism}}: [=SMG3's=] mocking of Waluigi in his AdaptationalEarlyAppearance, while cruel, gives him more of a role than he had in the original arc; a contributor to the conflict of Waluigi snapping. [[spoiler:It also pre-emptively lets readers who watched the arc know that helping Wario and Waluigi make up will be, in a way, an act of contrition.]]
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* {{Woolseyism}}: [=SMG3's=] mocking of Waluigi in his AdaptationalEarlyAppearance, while cruel, gives him more of a role than he had in the original arc; a contributor to the conflict of Waluigi snapping. [[spoiler:It also pre-emptively lets readers who watched the arc know that helping Wario and Waluigi make up will be, in a way, an his act of contrition.]]
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** Chapter 3 adapts the scene from [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus "Mario And The T-Pose Virus"]] where Meggy is turned into a T-Pose Zombie. But unlike the original, where the event is offscreen, the turning is described in full detail, and it’s ''not'' pretty.
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** Chapter 3 adapts the scene from [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus "Mario And The T-Pose Virus"]] where Meggy is turned into a T-Pose Zombie. But unlike the original, where the event is offscreen, the turning is described in full detail, and it’s it's ''not'' pretty.
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** One new scene adapted from [[Recap/SMG4WaluigisTime "Waluigi's Time"]] is [=SMG3=] basically rubbing Waluigi's rejection in his face. Even if he was the main BigBad of the series back then, that was just uncalled for.
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** One new scene adapted from [[Recap/SMG4WaluigisTime "Waluigi's Time"]] is [=SMG3=] basically rubbing Waluigi's rejection in his face. Even if he was the main BigBad of the series back then, that was just uncalled for.for.
* {{Woolseyism}}: [=SMG3's=] mocking of Waluigi in his AdaptationalEarlyAppearance, while cruel, gives him more of a role than he had in the original arc; a contributor to the conflict of Waluigi snapping. [[spoiler:It also pre-emptively lets readers who watched the arc know that helping Wario and Waluigi make up will be, in a way, an act of contrition.]]
* {{Woolseyism}}: [=SMG3's=] mocking of Waluigi in his AdaptationalEarlyAppearance, while cruel, gives him more of a role than he had in the original arc; a contributor to the conflict of Waluigi snapping. [[spoiler:It also pre-emptively lets readers who watched the arc know that helping Wario and Waluigi make up will be, in a way, an act of contrition.]]
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* TearJerker: If you thought Luigi's HeroicSacrifice[[note]]except not really[[/note]] in [[Recap/SMG4MarioSAW "Mario SAW"]] was sad, Chapter 14 adds an extra detail in the narration of Mario regretting all the times he mistreated his brother throughout the [=SMG4=] series prior to this moment.
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* TearJerker: TearJerker:
** If you thought Luigi's HeroicSacrifice[[note]]except not really[[/note]] in [[Recap/SMG4MarioSAW "Mario SAW"]] was sad, Chapter 14 adds an extra detail in the narration of Mario regretting all the times he mistreated his brother throughout the [=SMG4=] series prior to thismoment.moment.
** One new scene adapted from [[Recap/SMG4WaluigisTime "Waluigi's Time"]] is [=SMG3=] basically rubbing Waluigi's rejection in his face. Even if he was the main BigBad of the series back then, that was just uncalled for.
** If you thought Luigi's HeroicSacrifice[[note]]except not really[[/note]] in [[Recap/SMG4MarioSAW "Mario SAW"]] was sad, Chapter 14 adds an extra detail in the narration of Mario regretting all the times he mistreated his brother throughout the [=SMG4=] series prior to this
** One new scene adapted from [[Recap/SMG4WaluigisTime "Waluigi's Time"]] is [=SMG3=] basically rubbing Waluigi's rejection in his face. Even if he was the main BigBad of the series back then, that was just uncalled for.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection. Chapter 9 is even ''[[VillainEpisode dedicated]]'' to showing how far his spying goes.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection. Chapter 9 is even ''[[VillainEpisode dedicated]]'' to showing how far his spying goes.goes.
* TearJerker: If you thought Luigi's HeroicSacrifice[[note]]except not really[[/note]] in [[Recap/SMG4MarioSAW "Mario SAW"]] was sad, Chapter 14 adds an extra detail in the narration of Mario regretting all the times he mistreated his brother throughout the [=SMG4=] series prior to this moment.
* TearJerker: If you thought Luigi's HeroicSacrifice[[note]]except not really[[/note]] in [[Recap/SMG4MarioSAW "Mario SAW"]] was sad, Chapter 14 adds an extra detail in the narration of Mario regretting all the times he mistreated his brother throughout the [=SMG4=] series prior to this moment.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection.
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** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection. Chapter 9 is even ''[[VillainEpisode dedicated]]'' to showing how far his spying goes.
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* NightmareFuel: Chapter 3 adapts the scene from [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus "Mario And The T-Pose Virus"]] where Meggy is turned into a T-Pose Zombie. But unlike the original, where the event is offscreen, the turning is described in full detail, and it’s ''not'' pretty.
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** Chapter 3 adapts the scene from [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus "Mario And The T-Pose Virus"]] where Meggy is turned into a T-Pose Zombie. But unlike the original, where the event is offscreen, the turning is described in full detail, and it’s ''not''pretty.pretty.
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** Chapter 3 adapts the scene from [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus "Mario And The T-Pose Virus"]] where Meggy is turned into a T-Pose Zombie. But unlike the original, where the event is offscreen, the turning is described in full detail, and it’s ''not''
** Waluigi spying on the [=SMG4=] Gang [[AdaptationExpansion in scenes that didn't originally feature him]] can come across as creepy even before he unleashes the Power of Rejection.
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