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Not YMMV tropes, so moved it to the main page
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* AuthorAvatar: Tsugumu. And he loves writing--[[spoiler: but goes on a hiatus during his participation in the Conflict.]]
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misuse, and also in the wrong spot
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* AuthorExistenceFailure: [[spoiler:Tsugumu ends up committing suicide after finding 2 of his 3 siblings dead. The other Org members (save for Dylan, who disappeared) end up continuing the story from their perspectives.]]
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* MagnificentBastard: Shouhei and his friend have superior planning skills! But they're not [[LargeHam hammy.]]
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* PeripheryDemographic: Hopefully, besides the adult unisex audience, boys and girls should be able to read this because of how short the chapters are, as well as the various realities characters face.
* TrueNeutral: The Sleepy Hollows, and Kogawa of the Crystal Dogs.
* TrueNeutral: The Sleepy Hollows, and Kogawa of the Crystal Dogs.
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* PeripheryDemographic: Hopefully, besides the adult unisex audience, boys and girls should be able to read this because of how short the chapters are, as well as the various realities characters face.
* TrueNeutral: The Sleepy Hollows, and Kogawa of the Crystal Dogs.face.
* TrueNeutral: The Sleepy Hollows, and Kogawa of the Crystal Dogs.
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* [[spoiler:AuthorExistenceFailure: Tsugumu ends up committing suicide after finding 2 of his 3 siblings dead. The other Org members (save for Dylan, who disappeared) end up continuing the story from their perspectives.]]
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* [[spoiler:AuthorExistenceFailure: Tsugumu AuthorExistenceFailure: [[spoiler:Tsugumu ends up committing suicide after finding 2 of his 3 siblings dead. The other Org members (save for Dylan, who disappeared) end up continuing the story from their perspectives.]]
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** CrossesTheLineTwice: [[spoiler:And then she broke up with him '''''over text.''''']]
* [[spoiler:After bringing Tsukiyo, Yuuichi and other Hubspace players to a coma because of a stress-induced massacre, Dylan is then killed in Hubspace along with many others by Tsugumu.]] The siblings get pissed.
* [[spoiler:After bringing Tsukiyo, Yuuichi and other Hubspace players to a coma because of a stress-induced massacre, Dylan is then killed in Hubspace along with many others by Tsugumu.]] The siblings get pissed.
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* AuthorAvatar: Tsugumu. And he loves writing--[[spoiler: but goes on a hiatus during his participation in the Conflict.]]
* [[spoiler:AuthorExistenceFailure: Tsugumu ends up committing suicide after finding 2 of his 3 siblings dead. The other Org members (save for Dylan, who disappeared) end up continuing the story from their perspectives.]]
* [[spoiler:AuthorExistenceFailure: Tsugumu ends up committing suicide after finding 2 of his 3 siblings dead. The other Org members (save for Dylan, who disappeared) end up continuing the story from their perspectives.]]
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* LesYay: Juuri and Emiri ''came out'' off-novel, making them prone to such.
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* PeripheryDemographic: Hopefully, besides the adult unisex audience, boys and girls should be able to read this because of how short the chapters are, as well as the various realities characters face.
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transplanted YMMV items
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* HoYay: Derani and Kakeru will be expected to lapse into this due to above trope.
* MagnificentBastard: Shouhei and his friend have superior planning skills! But they're not [[LargeHam hammy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Using [[spoiler:a faked abortion to blow off your boyfriend!? Fujiko, what the hell're you thinking?]]
** CrossesTheLineTwice: [[spoiler:And then she broke up with him '''''over text.''''']]
* [[spoiler:After bringing Tsukiyo, Yuuichi and other Hubspace players to a coma because of a stress-induced massacre, Dylan is then killed in Hubspace along with many others by Tsugumu.]] The siblings get pissed.
* MagnificentBastard: Shouhei and his friend have superior planning skills! But they're not [[LargeHam hammy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Using [[spoiler:a faked abortion to blow off your boyfriend!? Fujiko, what the hell're you thinking?]]
** CrossesTheLineTwice: [[spoiler:And then she broke up with him '''''over text.''''']]
* [[spoiler:After bringing Tsukiyo, Yuuichi and other Hubspace players to a coma because of a stress-induced massacre, Dylan is then killed in Hubspace along with many others by Tsugumu.]] The siblings get pissed.
