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* CatharsisFactor: After all the shit he's pulled, such as [[spoiler:being a FakeDefector from the rats and stabbing Australia in the back, fatally shooting Bray and several other sympathetic characters in cold blood, and conspiring with Clover to [[TheStarscream usurp Schorl's rulership]] of the Rat Empire]], it is ''beyond'' satisfying to see [[spoiler:Queen Bushfire personally defeat the bastard, have him right in her hands and crush his skull under her fists as if she were squashing a bug, all while wearing a look of pure contempt.]]
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* CatharsisFactor: After all the shit he's [[spoiler:Quartz]] pulled, such as [[spoiler:being a FakeDefector from the rats and stabbing Australia in the back, fatally shooting Bray and several other sympathetic characters in cold blood, and conspiring with Clover to [[TheStarscream usurp Schorl's rulership]] of the Rat Empire]], it is ''beyond'' satisfying to see [[spoiler:Queen Bushfire personally defeat the bastard, have him right in her hands and crush his skull under her fists as if she were squashing a bug, all while wearing a look of pure contempt.]]
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* CatharsisFactor: After all the shit he's pulled, such as [[spoiler:being a FakeDefector from the rats and stabbing Australia in the back, fatally shooting Bray and several other sympathetic characters in cold blood, and conspiring with Clover to [[TheStarscream usurp Schorl's rulership]] of the Rat Empire]], it is ''beyond'' satisfying to see [[spoiler:Queen Bushfire personally defeat the bastard, have him right in her hands and crush his skull under her fists as if she were squashing a bug, all while wearing a look of pure contempt.]]
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-->'''Scoria''': "You two! Surrender! You're outmatched! Our power suits multiply our strength threefold!"
-->'''Bray''' ''(ready to kick their asses)'': "Do you think that will be enough?"
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Scoria''' ''(surrendering)'': "Uh... [[BlatantLies I think maybe our ribs are broken, so]]... You got lucky this time kangaroo..."
-->'''Bray''' ''(ready to kick their asses)'': "Do you think that will be enough?"
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Scoria''' ''(surrendering)'': "Uh... [[BlatantLies I think maybe our ribs are broken, so]]... You got lucky this time kangaroo..."
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'''Scoria''' ''(surrendering)'':
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* ArchiveBinge: At the end of Book 2, the story is 382 pages long, with the ongoing as of 2022 Book 3 already pushing it above 400 pages in total.
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* ArchiveBinge: At the end of Book 2, Part 1, the story is 382 pages long, with the ongoing as of 2022 Book 3 sequel already pushing it above 400 pages in total.
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* InferredHolocaust: At its peak, the Rat Empire had a population of over 90 billion, all entirely dependent on the energy produced by the pylons and the ArtificialGravity technology enabled by this immense power budget. At the climax of Part 1, all pylons are destroyed [[spoiler:by the actions of Brianna and Amethyst.]] Aside from the immediate casualties (which would have been immense, as dozens of major population centers were effectively nuked), the rest of the population was then left to fend for itself in a world without the natural resources to sustain them, debris raining down from orbit and most of their technology no longer working due to lack of power. Post-timeskip, the rats are reduced to just one of several factions struggling for control of Europe, which implies a rather horrifying drop in population.
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* ArchiveBinge: At the end of Book 2, the story is 382 pages long.
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* ArchiveBinge: At the end of Book 2, the story is 382 pages long.long, with the ongoing as of 2022 Book 3 already pushing it above 400 pages in total.
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** After they managed to escape the Rat Empire, Mrs Granite's students look at a list of the victims to see if their parents managed to escape the panicked Rats' death squads. No words are spoken, but their heartbroken reactions don't leave doubts about [[KilledOffscreen the fates of their parents]].
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* HeartwarmingMoments:SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
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* AwesomeArt: SugarWiki/AwesomeArt: The pages are beautifully drawn.
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* ArchiveBinge: At the time of this writing, the story is over 300 pages and still going strong.
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* ArchiveBinge: At the time end of this writing, Book 2, the story is over 300 382 pages and still going strong.long.
* AwesomeArt: The pages are beautifully drawn.
* AwesomeArt: The pages are beautifully drawn.
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** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''[[HeroiBSOD hard]]''.
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** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''[[HeroiBSOD ''[[HeroicBSOD hard]]''.
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** [[spoiler:Amethyst]] giving Pipa a pep talk after their mission [[spoiler:on the Moon]] and helping her overcoming her HeroicBSOD [[spoiler:after the deaths of Hookturn and most of the Lemurs]].
** Pipa and Briana reconciling a few pages after.
** [[spoiler:Amethyst]] giving Pipa a pep talk after their mission [[spoiler:on the Moon]] and helping her overcoming her HeroicBSOD [[spoiler:after the deaths of Hookturn and most of the Lemurs]].
** Pipa and Briana reconciling a few pages after.
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** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''hard''.
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** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''hard''.''[[HeroiBSOD hard]]''.
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** [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-26-440942632 That unnamed rat lady with the grey and white fur]]. Enough for her to become an AscendedExtra, as shown [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-Page-99-546941435 here]] or (warning, big spoilers) [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-206-643904844 here]]. [[NominalImportance She even gets a name]] in that last panel: Scoria.
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** [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-26-440942632 That unnamed rat lady with the grey and white fur]]. Enough for her to become an AscendedExtra, as shown [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-Page-99-546941435 here]] or (warning, big spoilers) [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-206-643904844 here]]. [[NominalImportance She even gets a name]] in that last panel: name]]: Scoria.
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** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], Bray, Ms Granite and most of the kangaroo leadership]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]]]
* TearJerker:
** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''hard''.
** For those who CryForTheDevil, the flashback showing Lehna's death. Schorl can't stay with her, because he is unable to bear the sight of her withering away, and starts deluding himself with [[ReplacementGoldfish Replacement Goldfishes]] of her.
** The aftermath of [[spoiler:Quartz's betrayal and slaughter of the leaders of the kangaroos]]. Ms Granite's students are seen [[spoiler:weeping over her dead body]]. [[spoiler:Bray]] is dead and [[SoleSurvivor Lady Brushfire]] doesn't even have the time [[spoiler:to grieve for him]], as the rat fleet is approaching and she has to protect her people.
* TearJerker:
** The aftermath of the destruction of [[spoiler:Madagascar]] and the death of [[spoiler:Hookturn]]. [[BreakTheCutie Pipa]] is hit ''hard''.
** For those who CryForTheDevil, the flashback showing Lehna's death. Schorl can't stay with her, because he is unable to bear the sight of her withering away, and starts deluding himself with [[ReplacementGoldfish Replacement Goldfishes]] of her.
** The aftermath of [[spoiler:Quartz's betrayal and slaughter of the leaders of the kangaroos]]. Ms Granite's students are seen [[spoiler:weeping over her dead body]]. [[spoiler:Bray]] is dead and [[SoleSurvivor Lady Brushfire]] doesn't even have the time [[spoiler:to grieve for him]], as the rat fleet is approaching and she has to protect her people.
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat after Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon. This was instantly revoked when he turned out to be a FakeDefector.]]
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat after Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon. ]] This was instantly revoked when [[spoiler:when he turned out to be a FakeDefector.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: MoralEventHorizon:
** Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].
** Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat after Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat after Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].MoralEventHorizon. This was instantly revoked when he turned out to be a FakeDefector.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].HeelFaceTurn]].
** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]
** [[spoiler: [[FakeDefector Quartz]] [[HeroKiller murdering Bray]], trying to kill Lady Brushfire and Amethyst, and sentencing the kangaroos to the same fate as the Lemurs. It largely doesn't go to plan, but still.]]
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* LesYay: Strong hints that Amethyst cares for Brianna as more than a student. [[spoiler: Then Bri goes and [[https://tapas.io/episode/720719 kisses her,]] human movies making her think it was a way to snap one out of hysteria.]]
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat with Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].
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** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat with after Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].
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* EnsembleDarkhorse:
** [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-26-440942632 That unnamed rat lady with the grey and white fur]]. Enough for her to become an AscendedExtra, as shown [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-Page-99-546941435 here]] or (warning, big spoilers) [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-206-643904844 here]]. [[NominalImportance She even gets a name]] in that last panel: Scoria.
-->'''Scoria''': "You two! Surrender! You're outmatched! Our power suits multiply our strength threefold!"
-->'''Bray''' ''(ready to kick their asses)'': "Do you think that will be enough?"
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Scoria''' ''(surrendering)'': "Uh... [[BlatantLies I think maybe our ribs are broken, so]]... You got lucky this time kangaroo..."
** Ms Granite the bear teacher and her students, [[spoiler:who escape to Australia with Quartz's help]].
** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat with Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].
* MoralEventHorizon: Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].
** [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-26-440942632 That unnamed rat lady with the grey and white fur]]. Enough for her to become an AscendedExtra, as shown [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-Page-99-546941435 here]] or (warning, big spoilers) [[http://kitfox-crimson.deviantart.com/art/In-Our-Shadow-page-206-643904844 here]]. [[NominalImportance She even gets a name]] in that last panel: Scoria.
-->'''Scoria''': "You two! Surrender! You're outmatched! Our power suits multiply our strength threefold!"
-->'''Bray''' ''(ready to kick their asses)'': "Do you think that will be enough?"
-->''(beat)''
-->'''Scoria''' ''(surrendering)'': "Uh... [[BlatantLies I think maybe our ribs are broken, so]]... You got lucky this time kangaroo..."
** Ms Granite the bear teacher and her students, [[spoiler:who escape to Australia with Quartz's help]].
** Quartz (mistakenly called Halite by Schorl), for being the first rat with Amethyst shown to have a sympathetic side and who ultimately [[spoiler:defects from the rat empire after Schorl crossed the MoralEventHorizon]].
* MoralEventHorizon: Schorl's decision to [[spoiler:totally exterminate the lemur race, including the civilians and children, by wiping out Madagascar]]. It is even considered one InUniverse and directly or indirectly causes [[spoiler:several rats to do a HeelFaceTurn]].
