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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force. Despite the attempt to change things up, the manga was ultimately cancelled after only five months.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force. Despite the attempt to change things up, the manga was ultimately cancelled after only five months.months due to low volume sales.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force. The manga was ultimately cancelled after only five months as a result.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force. The Despite the attempt to change things up, the manga was ultimately cancelled after only five months as a result.months.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force. The manga was ultimately cancelled after only five months as a result.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the batbat. Even then, the premise clearly only works as one joke that would get old fast without a proper MythArc to keep readers engaged, resulting in the manga having to shift gears a little to be more about a RagtagBunchOfMisfits that make up a newly formed division of the police force.
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This is just saying what the twist is. Not what makes it an Ass Pull
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* ShockingSwerve: Ataru Kagami turning out to [[spoiler:not only be another criminal, but Risa's kidnapper]]
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never done this again.
** Likewise, her creepy TheBlank look only appears in the first chapter and some marketing
** Likewise, her creepy TheBlank look only appears in the first chapter and some marketing
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** The first chapter has shows a few traits of Risa don that make her a disguise in order pretty cool and scary character, like her wearing disguises to get closer to her target. So far, target (specifically a disguise meant to emulate her target's type of woman) and, before her proper introduction, she's presented as TheBlank, with her full face never done this again.
** Likewise,showing beside her creepy TheBlank look only appears in eyes and even the way she stares at people is unnerving. These traits are dropped and never mentioned again after the first chapter and some marketingchapter.
** Likewise,
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used done this talent again.
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** Past the first chapter, the series hasn't made many serious attempts to build mystery. Most of the criminals are revealed without the detectives having to do anything, the worst example being mAR who just ''shows up'' and introduces herself. There also aren't usually any suspects shown before the big reveal.
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.again.
** Likewise, her creepy TheBlank look only appears in the first chapter and some marketing
** Likewise, her creepy TheBlank look only appears in the first chapter and some marketing
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Forgot I left that line unfinished... I'm on a deadline here
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** The arsonist who appeared briefly in the second chapter.
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.
** The arsonist who appeared briefly in the second chapter.again.
** The arsonist who appeared briefly in the second chapter.
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* ShockingSwerve: Ataru Kagami turning out to [[spoiler:not only be another criminal, but Risa's kidnapper]]
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: The series' main character being a {{yandere}} stalker rubbed some readers the wrong way right off the bat
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** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.
** The arsonist who appeared briefly in the second chapter.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot:
** The first chapter has Risa don a disguise in order to get closer to her target. So far, she's never used this talent again.
** The arsonist who appeared briefly in the second chapter.
