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** Normal Milo is lazy, selfish, and has cheated on his gorgeous, kind, driven girlfriend Stephie multiple times before. He gets one PetTheDog moment when he risks his life to save a stranger, but overall begs the question WhatDoesSheSeeInHim (even Milo himself wonders)
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** Normal Milo is lazy, selfish, and has cheated on his gorgeous, kind, driven girlfriend Stephie multiple times before. He gets one PetTheDog moment when he risks his life to save a stranger, but overall begs the question WhatDoesSheSeeInHim
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** Normal Milo is lazy, selfish, and has cheated on his gorgeous, kind, driven girlfriend Stephie multiple times before. He gets one PetTheDog moment when he risks his life to save a stranger, but overall begs the question WhatDoesSheSeeInHimWhatDoesSheSeeInHim (even Milo himself wonders)
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** [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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** [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Caliginous. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he [[spoiler:he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, else]], and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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** Normal Milo is lazy, selfish, and has cheated on his gorgeous, kind, driven girlfriend Stephie multiple times before. He gets one PetTheDog moment when he risks his life to save a stranger, but overall begs the question WhatDoesSheSeeInHim
** [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
** Normal Milo is lazy, selfish, and has cheated on his gorgeous, kind, driven girlfriend Stephie multiple times before. He gets one PetTheDog moment when he risks his life to save a stranger, but overall begs the question WhatDoesSheSeeInHim
** [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, making this seem like a case of EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. Her ranting about Valor betraying her falls flat when we learn that he broke up with her before sleeping with someone else, making this seem like a case of and that she invoked EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the button.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. While what what Captain Valor did to her was unquestionably wrong, the fact that she deemed ''destroying an entire universe'' an appropriate response raises questions about just how stable she was before becoming a villain, yet the story acts like Captain Valor is the only one in the wrong.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. While what what Captain Her ranting about Valor did to betraying her was unquestionably wrong, the fact falls flat when we learn that she deemed ''destroying an entire universe'' an appropriate response raises questions about just how stable she was he broke up with her before becoming a villain, yet the story acts sleeping with someone else, making this seem like Captain Valor is a case of EntitledToHaveYou. She also created the only one in superweapon that destroyed her universe, regardless of who pressed the wrong.button.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. While what what Captain Valor did to her was unquestionably wrong, the fact that she deemed ''destroying an entire universe'' was an appropriate response raises questions about just how stable she was before becoming a villain, yet the story acts like Captain Valor is the only one in the wrong.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: [[spoiler:Caliginous]]. While what what Captain Valor did to her was unquestionably wrong, the fact that she deemed ''destroying an entire universe'' was an appropriate response raises questions about just how stable she was before becoming a villain, yet the story acts like Captain Valor is the only one in the wrong.
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