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** Dumbledore initially objects to using the students as meatshields (ot that anyone else actually suggested it...), because the majority of them are too short to provide him with proper cover. He then reconsiders it when he realises that he could pick them up and use them like an actual shield, congratulating a rather confused and appalled [=McGonagall=] for "coming up with the idea"(read: saying that he can't use Ministry employees as meatshields, and nothing else).
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** Dumbledore initially objects to using the students as meatshields (ot (not that anyone else actually suggested it...), because the majority of them are too short to provide him with proper cover. He then reconsiders it when he realises that he could pick them up and use them like an actual shield, congratulating a rather confused and appalled [=McGonagall=] for "coming up with the idea"(read: saying that he can't use Ministry employees as meatshields, and nothing else).
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-->''"Well, what if I were to violate you sexually?"''
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-->Voldemort growled. "Right here is fine. I can't smell anything, anyway."\\
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** Dumbledore initially objects to using the students as meatshields[[note]]Not that anyone else actually suggested it...[[/note]], because the majority of them are too short to provide him with proper cover. He then reconsiders it when he realises that he could pick them up and use them like an actual shield, congratulating a rather confused and appalled [=McGonagall=] for "coming up with the idea"(read: saying that he can't use Ministry employees as meatshields, and nothing else).
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** Dumbledore initially objects to using the students as meatshields[[note]]Not meatshields (ot that anyone else actually suggested it...[[/note]], ), because the majority of them are too short to provide him with proper cover. He then reconsiders it when he realises that he could pick them up and use them like an actual shield, congratulating a rather confused and appalled [=McGonagall=] for "coming up with the idea"(read: saying that he can't use Ministry employees as meatshields, and nothing else).
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: The whole of the Dursley's abuse (not to mention Harry's [[AngstWhatAngst blasé]] recounting of it all), especially Vernon's line:
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: CrossesTheLineTwice:
** The whole of the Dursley's abuse (not to mention Harry's [[AngstWhatAngst blasé]] recounting of it all), especially Vernon's line:
** The whole of the Dursley's abuse (not to mention Harry's [[AngstWhatAngst blasé]] recounting of it all), especially Vernon's line:
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: The whole of the Dursley's abuse, abuse (not to mention Harry's [[AngstWhatAngst blasé]] recounting of it all), especially Vernon's line:
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** Dumbledore initially objects to using the students as meatshields[[note]]Not that anyone else actually suggested it...[[/note]], because the majority of them are too short to provide him with proper cover. He then reconsiders it when he realises that he could pick them up and use them like an actual shield, congratulating a rather confused and appalled [=McGonagall=] for "coming up with the idea"(read: saying that he can't use Ministry employees as meatshields, and nothing else).
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** Nott making the common fandom point of Voldemort not having a nose. [[TooDumbToLive To his face.]]
-->Voldemort growled. "Right here is fine. I can't smell anything, anyway."\\
"But sir, you don't have a nose," Nott pointed out.\\
A quick Cutting Curse later and Nott didn't have a nose, either.\\
"Anyone else not want to smell anything?" Voldemort asked calmly.\\
Aside from Nott's screams of pain, no one made a sound.
-->Voldemort growled. "Right here is fine. I can't smell anything, anyway."\\
"But sir, you don't have a nose," Nott pointed out.\\
A quick Cutting Curse later and Nott didn't have a nose, either.\\
"Anyone else not want to smell anything?" Voldemort asked calmly.\\
Aside from Nott's screams of pain, no one made a sound.
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-->''"Well, what if I were to violate you sexually?"''
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-->''"Well, what if I were to violate you sexually?"''sexually?"''
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