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** The reveal that [[spoiler:Team Phoenix is made up of humans in people jars, with a plug installed into their right eye]].
** After they leave the game world, Team Phoenix becomes very ill.
** After they leave the game world, Team Phoenix becomes very ill.
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** The reveal that [[spoiler:Team Phoenix is made up of humans in people jars, with a plug installed into their right eye]].
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** After they leave the game world, Team Phoenix becomesvery ill.deathly ill due to [[spoiler:clone degeneration]].
** After they leave the game world, Team Phoenix becomes
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* TheUntwist: It's pretty easy to guess what's goign on with Team Phoenix, especially if you're aware of other media that uses the twist. This is even lampshaded in the story, with everyone else guessing at it and Phoenix being in deep denial.
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* TheUntwist: It's pretty easy to guess what's goign going on with Team Phoenix, especially if you're aware of other media that uses the twist. This is even lampshaded in the story, with everyone else guessing at it and Phoenix being in deep denial.
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* TheUntwist: It's pretty easy to guess what's goign on with Team Phoenix, especially if you're aware of other media that uses the twist. This is even lampshaded in the story, with everyone else guessing at it and Phoenix being in deep denial.
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** Dakota panicking on her first day and not understanding why being shot and and killed is a regular part of the team's existence.
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** Dakota panicking on her first day and not understanding why being shot and and killed is a regular part of the team's existence.
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** After they leave the game world, Team Phoenix becomes very ill.
** The ending of the book. [[spoiler:It's like the "Zion is part of the Matrix" theory]].
** The ending of the book. [[spoiler:It's like the "Zion is part of the Matrix" theory]].
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* NightmareFuel: The descriptions of some of the deaths.
** Dakota panicking on her first day and not understanding why being shot and and killed is a regular part of the team's existence.
** The reveal that [[spoiler:Team Phoenix is made up of humans in people jars, with a plug installed into their right eye]].
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** Dakota panicking on her first day and not understanding why being shot and and killed is a regular part of the team's existence.
** The reveal that [[spoiler:Team Phoenix is made up of humans in people jars, with a plug installed into their right eye]].
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