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** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his own acid to ''melt his face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].
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** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his their own acid to ''melt his their face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].
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** Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once they asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
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** Your During your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once they asks ask about why you hadn't come back after waking up, you can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for of being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
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** In the second game, [[spoiler you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.]]
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** In the second game, [[spoiler [[spoiler: you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.]]
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** In the second game, you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.
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** In the second game, [[spoiler you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.]]
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* {{Tearjerker}}: Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once they asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if they knew the truth, they would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that they are hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if they knew the truth, they would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that they are hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''
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* {{Tearjerker}}: {{Tearjerker}}:
** Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once they asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if they knew the truth, they would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that they are hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''''
** In the second game, you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.
** Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once they asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if they knew the truth, they would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that they are hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].
** In the second game, you can end up explaining to Ortega that their epilepsy-induced telepathic immunity "sounds" very similar to Farm personnel using telepathic blocker drugs. Your best friend/potential love interest sometimes sets off your PTSD simply by ''existing'', and there's literally nothing to be done about it.
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]] if they fought to a standstill in the first game, largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Dr. Mortum's enthusiasm about capes is rather charming.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once s/he asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if s/he knew the truth, s/he would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that s/he is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if s/he knew the truth, s/he would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that s/he is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''
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* {{Tearjerker}}: Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once s/he they asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; ifs/he they knew the truth, s/he they would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that s/he is they are hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this]].''
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if
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-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if s/he knew the truth, s/he would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that s/he is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. Because you needed this.''
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-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if s/he knew the truth, s/he would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that s/he is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Because you needed this.this]].''
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-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if she knew the truth, she would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that she is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. Because you needed this.''
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-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if she s/he knew the truth, she s/he would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that she s/he is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. Because you needed this.''
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* {{Tearjerker}}: The MC reuniting with Ortega in the first game, once s/he asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]].
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* {{Tearjerker}}: The MC reuniting Your chance reunion with Ortega in the first game, once s/he asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]].anymore]]]]. Getting a hug from them at the end of it can also cause you to get teary-eyed at the affection they still hold for you.
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if she knew the truth, she would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that she is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. Because you needed this.''
-->''You shouldn't be so affected by this; if she knew the truth, she would back away in disgust. Ortega has no idea that she is hugging a lie, but right now that's okay. Because you needed this.''
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** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his own acid to ''melt his face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].
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** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his own acid to ''melt his face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].gun]].
* {{Tearjerker}}: The MC reuniting with Ortega in the first game, once s/he asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]].
* {{Tearjerker}}: The MC reuniting with Ortega in the first game, once s/he asks about why you hadn't come back after waking up, can inform them that [[spoiler: you felt ashamed for being ''relieved'' [[HeroicFatigue at not having to be a hero anymore]]]].
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]], largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]], Argent]] if they fought to a standstill in the first game, largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.
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* NightmareFuel: There's a reason that the MC has nightmares of the Heartbreak Incident.
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* NightmareFuel: There's a reason that the MC has [[ShellShockedVeteran nightmares of the Heartbreak Incident.Incident]].
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]], largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]], largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.Opponent}}s.
* NightmareFuel: There's a reason that the MC has nightmares of the Heartbreak Incident.
** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his own acid to ''melt his face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].
* NightmareFuel: There's a reason that the MC has nightmares of the Heartbreak Incident.
** First, [[spoiler: there's the on-scene officer who attempts to blow his brains out]], followed by having to step over corpses on the way into the building, all of whom [[spoiler: jumped out windows after having first opened them]]. Once inside and on the way up, it gets ramped up as Anathema [[spoiler: uses his own acid to ''melt his face'' down to the bone]], before Sidestep goes into the room to confront the source... [[spoiler: only to take a leap of their own out the window, possibly after eliminating the threat and almost eating their gun]].
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* FoeYay: Between the PC and [[spoiler: Lady Argent]], largely due to seeing each other as {{Worthy Opponent}}s.