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* CompleteMonster: [[SerialRapist Arthur Haines]], from ''Lightning'', is a man who deeply resents his wife for [[GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion not using any contraceptives]]. With two children he considers "mistakes", and a third on the way, Haines begins targeting pro-life women, ambushing and raping them in hopes of getting them pregnant so that they will be forced to undergo abortions. Haines stalks them, learning their routines and then visits them again and again, raping them multiple times so they are never able to feel safe, with at least nine to ten different victims, his last being the police officer Eileen who he mistakes for a victim he was already targeting. With zero remorse, Haines stands as one of the single most vile criminals ever encountered by the 87th.
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* CompleteMonster: [[SerialRapist Arthur Haines]], from ''Lightning'', is a man who deeply resents his wife for [[GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion not using any contraceptives]]. With two children he considers "mistakes", and a third on the way, Haines begins targeting pro-life women, ambushing and raping them in hopes of getting them pregnant so that they will be forced to undergo abortions. Haines stalks them, learning their routines and then visits them again and again, raping them multiple times so they are never able to feel safe, with at least nine to ten different victims, his last being the police officer Eileen who Eileen, whom he mistakes for a victim he was already targeting. With zero remorse, Haines stands as one of the single most vile criminals ever encountered by the 87th.
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* CompleteMonster: [[SerialRapist Arthur Haines]], from ''Lightning'', is a man who deeply resents his wife for [[GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion not using any contraceptives.contraceptives]]. With two children he considers "mistakes", and a third on the way, Haines begins targeting pro-life women, ambushing and raping them in hopes of getting them pregnant so that they will be forced to undergo abortions. Haines stalks them, learning their routines and then visits them again and again, raping them multiple times so they are never able to feel safe, with at least nine to ten different victims, his last being the police officer Eileen who he mistakes for a victim he was already targeting. With zero remorse, Haines stands as one of the single most vile criminals ever encountered by the 87th.
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* CompleteMonster: [[SerialRapist Arthur Haines]], from ''Lightning'', is a man who deeply resents his wife for not using any contraceptives. With two children he considers "mistakes", and a third on the way, Haines begins targeting pro-life women, ambushing and raping them in hopes of getting them pregnant so that they will be forced to undergo abortions. Haines stalks them, learning their routines and then visits them again and again, raping them multiple times so they are never able to feel safe, with at least nine to ten different victims, his last being the police officer Eileen who he mistakes for a victim he was already targeting. With zero remorse, Haines stands as one of the single most vile criminals ever encountered by the 87th.
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* TheWoobie: Bert Kling. Hoo, boy. To say he has bad luck with women is an understatement. [[spoiler: One of his girlfriends, Claire, is shot dead in a book store. He has a HeroicBSOD after catching his wife Augusta in bed with another man, and his colleagues worry about him committing suicide. His relationships with Eileen and Sharyn don't work out either, the former due to Eileen's issues and the latter due to Kling not being able to trust her, which Sharyn thinks is due to her being black.]]
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* TheWoobie: Bert Kling. Hoo, boy. To say he has bad luck with women is an understatement. [[spoiler: One of his girlfriends, Claire, is shot dead in a book store. He His wife Augusta is kidnapped on their ''wedding day'', he later has a HeroicBSOD after catching his wife Augusta in bed with another man, and his colleagues worry about him committing suicide. His relationships with Eileen and Sharyn don't work out either, the former due to Eileen's issues and the latter due to Kling not being able to trust her, which Sharyn thinks is due to her being black.]]
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* TheWoobie: Bert Kling. Hoo, boy. To say he has bad luck with women is an understatement. [[spoiler: One of his girlfriends, Claire, is shot dead in a book store. He has a HeroicBSOD after catching his wife Augusta in bed with another man, and his colleagues worry about him committing suicide. His relationships with Eileen and Sharyn don't work out either, the former due to Eileen's issues and the latter due to Kling not being able to trust her, which Sharyn thinks is due to her being black.]]
** Eileen herself is one of the most sympathetic characters in the series. After suffering a horrific rape, she has a ''lot'' of psychological scars, which worsen after she poses as a prostitute in ''Tricks'' in order to catch a man who was killing prostitutes, [[spoiler:and she loses it and shoots him dead.]]
** Eileen herself is one of the most sympathetic characters in the series. After suffering a horrific rape, she has a ''lot'' of psychological scars, which worsen after she poses as a prostitute in ''Tricks'' in order to catch a man who was killing prostitutes, [[spoiler:and she loses it and shoots him dead.]]
