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* FoeYay: Dyke has quite a bit of this going on for his former sidekicks. He even [[spoiler:makes one, Ryan, who is quite the beefcake, strip nude before killing him]].
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* FoeYay: Dyke has quite a bit of this going on for his former sidekicks. He even [[spoiler:makes one, Ryan, who is quite the beefcake, strip nude before killing him.]]him]].
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* {{Squick}}: The whole book, but especially the aforementioned boob-ripping and baby-eating... and one scene wherein a woman is literally, uh "eaten out" by a mantis.
* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* {{Squick}}: The whole book, but especially the aforementioned boob-ripping and baby-eating... and one scene wherein a woman is literally, uh "eaten out" by a mantis.
* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.mantis.
* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Dyke crosses this very early in the book...
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* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke at first. Then he just goes too far and stops being even remotely pitiable.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke at first. Then he just goes too far and stops being even remotely pitiable.
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* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke at first. Then he just goes too far and stops being even remotely pitiable.VillainProtagonist.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke at first. Then he just goes too far and stops being even remotely pitiable.
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* FoeYay: Dyke has quite a bit of this going on for his former sidekicks. He even [[spoiler:makes one, Ryan, who is quite the beefcake, strip nude before killing him.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Dyke is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He lets his mantises eat the entire population of several villages, including the babies and children. Later, Dyke forces his former partners to watch their wives and kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are entirely uninvolved.
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\"for whose lives they beg profusely\" implies they not qualify to requisite 3.
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** The guys he's getting revenge on [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]]. Despite having cooled down and started normal lives with families by the time Dyke comes calling, they were still a bunch of murdering thieves who cut up an old man ForTheEvulz.
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* FetishFuel: Mantises eating people is this for Dyke. Odd, given he has lost the ability to become aroused.
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* {{Squick}}: The whole book, but especially the aforementioned boob-ripping and baby-eating... and one scene wherein a woman is literally, uh "eaten out" by a mantis. IfYouKnowWhatIMean.
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* FetishFuel: Mantises eating people is this for Dyke. Odd, given he has lost the ability to become aroused.
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* {{Narm}}: The mantises' victims screaming things such as "Don't eat me anymore!" ''while being eaten''. Also the thief Dyke finds in his house (and later feeds to Slayer), upon being caught, begs Dyke, "Don't break my bones!"
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* EthnicScrappy: The Colombian natives, especially Keko. The Mexican vaquero might count, too.
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* EthnicScrappy: The Colombian natives, especially Keko. The There's also a startlingly racist depiction in the Mexican vaquero might count, too.farmhand that rescues Dyke after his beating.
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* EthnicScrappy: The Colombian natives, especially Keko. The Mexican vaquero might count, too.
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* NarmCharm: Dyke's relationship with Slayer, where he says things like, "Good boy, Slayer. You're the biggest of them all and the only one with a red head." His outright refusal to keep anything to himself and constantly talking aloud to no one is pretty amusing, too.
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** The guys he's getting revenge one, Pete in particular, [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]].
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** The guys he's getting revenge one, Pete in particular, on [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]].better]]. Despite having cooled down and started normal lives with families by the time Dyke comes calling, they were still a bunch of murdering thieves who cut up an old man ForTheEvulz.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, he quits making up excuses and then it's just all ForTheEvulz.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, Then he quits making up excuses and then it's just all ForTheEvulz.goes too far and stops being even remotely pitiable.
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** The other gang members, Pete in particular, [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]].
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** The other gang members, guys he's getting revenge one, Pete in particular, [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, it's just all about [[FetishFuel watching people getting eaten]] [[ForTheEvulz for the fun of it]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, he quits making up excuses and then it's just all about [[FetishFuel watching people getting eaten]] [[ForTheEvulz for the fun of it]].ForTheEvulz.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He lets his mantises eat the entire population of a native village, including the babies and children. Later, not content to just kill his former partners, Dyke also forces them to watch their wives and kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are entirely uninvolved.
* {{Narm}}: The mantises' victims screaming things such as "Don't eat me!" or "Stop eating me!" ''while being eaten''.
* {{Narm}}: The mantises' victims screaming things such as "Don't eat me!" or "Stop eating me!" ''while being eaten''.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He lets his mantises eat the entire population of a native village, several villages, including the babies and children. Later, not content to just kill Dyke forces his former partners, Dyke also forces them partners to watch their wives and kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are entirely uninvolved.
** The other gang members, Pete in particular, [[AssholeVictim aren't much better]].
* {{Narm}}: The mantises' victims screaming things such as "Don't eatme!" or "Stop eating me!" me anymore!" ''while being eaten''.eaten''. Also the thief Dyke finds in his house (and later feeds to Slayer), upon being caught, begs Dyke, "Don't break my bones!"
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* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.VillainProtagonist.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, it's just all about [[FetishFuel watching people getting eaten]] [[ForTheEvulz for the fun of it]].
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dyke sees himself this way at first. After a while, though, it's just all about [[FetishFuel watching people getting eaten]] [[ForTheEvulz for the fun of it]].
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* VillianSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* VillianSue: VillainSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* VillanSue: VillianSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He lets his mantises eat the entire population of a native village, including the babies and children. Later, not content to just kill his former partners, Dyke also forces them to watch their wives and kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are entirely uninvolved.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He lets his mantises eat the entire population of a native village, including the babies and children. Later, not content to just kill his former partners, Dyke also forces them to watch their wives and kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are entirely uninvolved.uninvolved.
* VillanSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
* VillanSue: A given, considering the entire novel is told from the [[UnreliableNarrator point of view]] of the VillainProtagonist.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He (somehow) tricks an entire native village's population into coming to Malpelo Island just to feed his mantises. Later, not satisfied with just having his former partners get eaten, he also forces them to watch their wives and children get eaten first. Yes not even innocent kids are spared Dyke's wrath. He has virtually no redeeming qualities or likable attributes at all.
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* CompleteMonster: While his entire gang may qualify considering what they do to their robbery victims, Dyke especially is a loathsome excuse for a human being. He (somehow) tricks an lets his mantises eat the entire native village's population into coming to Malpelo Island just to feed his mantises. of a native village, including the babies and children. Later, not satisfied with content to just having kill his former partners get eaten, he partners, Dyke also forces them to watch their wives and children kids (for whose lives they beg profusely) get eaten first. Yes not gobbled up before they themselves get eaten. Just for kicks he even innocent kids has the mantises eat their neighbors, who are spared Dyke's wrath. He has virtually no redeeming qualities or likable attributes at all.entirely uninvolved.