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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] offering to make love to Blueblood while disguised as Rarity, something he actually considers.
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] offering to make love to Blueblood while disguised as Rarity, something he actually considers.considers.
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Must explain what you'd expect them to do instead.
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] offering to make love to Blueblood while disguised as Rarity, something he actually considers.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] offering to make love to Blueblood while disguised as Rarity, something he actually considers.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.considers.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.
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Goes under the work made so, not the work causing it.
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* HarsherInHindsight:
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
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* HarsherInHindsight:
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
**HarsherInHindsight: Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: The fic first started being written in 2012, and shows a Kirin. Fast forward to Season 8 of the actual show in 2018 and ''canonical'' Kirins actually appear in the episode "Sounds of Silence."
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* HarsherInHindsight: HarsherInHindsight:
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
** Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
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* CryForTheDevil: The Flim-Flam brothers are jerks, yes, but it's hard not to feel sorry for Flam when they get separated during the sandstorm in the San Palomino and he thinks Flim might be dead.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Diamond Tiara has been hit with this hard. Apparently her father's efforts to straighten her out were for nothing.
** Nicely averted with Trixie. Oh, she's still... herself, and there's definite animosity between her and Twilight, but over the years she's found her niche--entertainment, natch--and has been just as groundbreaking in that niche as Twilight is in hers. Also, it's Trixie that brings the two to a truce.
** Nicely averted with Trixie. Oh, she's still... herself, and there's definite animosity between her and Twilight, but over the years she's found her niche--entertainment, natch--and has been just as groundbreaking in that niche as Twilight is in hers. Also, it's Trixie that brings the two to a truce.
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** Nicely averted with Trixie. Oh, she's still... herself, and there's definite animosity between her and Twilight, but she has, in a HeroOfAnotherStory kind of way, gone through significant character development since the old days. She's found the niche where she can truly be the best at what she does, and has developed color film--a discovery that's almost as groundbreaking as the flight harness.
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** Nicely averted with Trixie. Oh, she's still... herself, and there's definite animosity between her and Twilight, but she has, in a HeroOfAnotherStory kind of way, gone through significant character development since over the old days. She's years she's found the niche where she can truly be the best at what she does, and her niche--entertainment, natch--and has developed color film--a discovery that's almost been just as groundbreaking in that niche as Twilight is in hers. Also, it's Trixie that brings the flight harness.two to a truce.
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** Nicely averted with Trixie. Oh, she's still... herself, and there's definite animosity between her and Twilight, but she has, in a HeroOfAnotherStory kind of way, gone through significant character development since the old days. She's found the niche where she can truly be the best at what she does, and has developed color film--a discovery that's almost as groundbreaking as the flight harness.
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Chrysalis]] offering to make love to Blueblood while disguised as Rarity, something he actually considers.
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* PlotArmor: The Flim-Flam brothers. Despite having been arested several times, including being captured by an entire platoon of guards, being disqualified, losing all their equipment, and even losing each other nothing seems to so much as inconvenience them much less put them out of the race.
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* PlotArmor: The Flim-Flam brothers. Despite having been arested several times, including being captured by an entire platoon of guards, being disqualified, losing all their equipment, and even losing each other nothing seems to so much as inconvenience them much less put them out of the race.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Diamond Tiara has been hit with this hard. Apparently her father's efforts to straighten her out were for nothing.
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** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
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** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.apologies.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.
* WhatAnIdiot: Flam/Professor Destiny's first attempt at "sabotaging" the flight harness is to [[ComplexityAddiction fire a magic-seeking rocket at it]]. Then he, while still standing next to it mind you, uses magic to lift a spyglass to watch the results. Naturally he goes boom.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: Soarin's eating habits making him fat was a funny and subtle gag in ''Windfall''. Then chapter 4 of this story comes along, [[spoiler: and Soarin is now so out of shape he gets kicked off the Wonderbolts.]]]]
** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
** Applejack's comment to Soarin' about his mother not teaching him any manners become this when you take his [[ParentalAbandonment family situation]] into consideration. She realizes this in chapter 10 and immediately apologies.
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as distinct from other works with the same title
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!!Fanfic/EarthAndSky (MLP fanfic)
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* Just how terrified Pinkie is of losing little Tootsie and how distraught she is over how she can't handling raising a Pegasus. It's heartbreaking to see [[GenkiGirl Pinkie]] so down and worn out.
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