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* HarsherInHindsight: Danielle finally getting her instability cured turns into a HappyEndingOverride when the events of the graphic novel ''ComicBook/DannyPhantomAGlitchInTime'' causes the entire events of third season to get a CosmicRetcon, meaning Danielle is unstable again. The only small upside is that Danny may remember what he needs to cure her and will be ready to do so should he meet her again.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Danielle finally getting her instability cured turns into a HappyEndingOverride when the events of the graphic novel ''ComicBook/DannyPhantomAGlitchInTime'' causes the entire events of third season to get a CosmicRetcon, meaning Danielle is unstable again.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Danielle finally getting her instability cured turns into a HappyEndingOverride when the events of the graphic novel ''ComicBook/DannyPhantomAGlitchInTime'' causes the entire events of third season to get a CosmicRetcon, meaning Danielle is unstable again. The only small upside is that Danny may remember what he needs to cure her and will be ready to do so should he meet her again.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Danielle finally getting her instability cured turns into a HappyEndingOverride when the events of the graphic novel ''ComicBook/DannyPhantomAGlitchInTime'' causes the entire events of third season to get a CosmicRetcon, meaning Danielle is unstable again.
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* HilariousInHindsight: A character named Gray has a dungeon where they torture their love interest. [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGray What was the name of her debut episode, again...?]]
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** After spending several episodes with VillainDecay, Vlad returns to being the ManipulativeBastard he was known for by using Valerie to further his plans.
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** After spending several episodes with suffering from VillainDecay, Vlad returns to being the ManipulativeBastard he was known for in the first two seasons by using Valerie to further his plans.
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** Valerie's arc could have taken place in any episode previously. For example, instead of the Fentons getting rich in "Livin' Large", it would be Valerie and her father getting their financial stability back. Valerie's own character would fit this better than Danny, as she'd realize the shallow person she used to be and decide to turn a new leaf.
** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay. [[AbortedArc Considering she was meant to be adopted by the Fentons had the series continued, this would have been the best time to make that a thing]].
** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay. [[AbortedArc Considering she was meant to be adopted by the Fentons had the series continued, this would have been the best time to make that a thing]].
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** Valerie's arc could have could've taken place in any episode previously. For example, instead of the Fentons getting rich in "Livin' Large", Large," it would be could've been Valerie and her father getting their financial stability back. Valerie's own character would fit this better than Danny, as she'd realize the shallow person she used to be and decide to turn over a new leaf.
** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Parkcould have remain could've remained the focus of the episode. She could have could've met Jazz, Jazz or even have had genuine interactions with the Fentons in general by pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay. [[AbortedArc Considering she was meant to be adopted by the Fentons had the series continued, this would have been the best time to make that a thing]].thing]].
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** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay.
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** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay. [[AbortedArc Considering she was meant to be adopted by the Fentons had the series continued, this would have been the best time to make that a thing]].
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* CharacterRerailment:
** After a handful of episodes that focused on his relationship with Sam to the point of taking over his every action, Danny is back to acting more independently and doesn't once think about her.
** After spending several episodes with VillainDecay, Vlad returns to being the ManipulativeBastard he was known for by using Valerie to further his plans.
** After a handful of episodes that focused on his relationship with Sam to the point of taking over his every action, Danny is back to acting more independently and doesn't once think about her.
** After spending several episodes with VillainDecay, Vlad returns to being the ManipulativeBastard he was known for by using Valerie to further his plans.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While not a bad episode in any way, combining Valerie's arc with Danielle's fate squandered the story ideas both had, especially with this being the penultimate episode.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While not a bad episode in any way, combining Valerie's arc with Danielle's fate squandered the story ideas both had, especially with this being the penultimate episode.episode.
** Valerie's arc could have taken place in any episode previously. For example, instead of the Fentons getting rich in "Livin' Large", it would be Valerie and her father getting their financial stability back. Valerie's own character would fit this better than Danny, as she'd realize the shallow person she used to be and decide to turn a new leaf.
** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay.
** Valerie's arc could have taken place in any episode previously. For example, instead of the Fentons getting rich in "Livin' Large", it would be Valerie and her father getting their financial stability back. Valerie's own character would fit this better than Danny, as she'd realize the shallow person she used to be and decide to turn a new leaf.
** Danielle's stabilization and leaving Amity Park could have remain the focus of the episode. She could have met Jazz, or even have genuine interactions with the Fentons pretending to be a homeless girl looking for a place to stay.
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* RetroactiveRecognition: Oh, so it was written by someone named Amy Keating Rog-- ''(DoubleTake)'' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AMY KEATING ROGERS?!]]
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* RetroactiveRecognition: Oh, so it was written by someone named Amy Keating Rog-- ''(DoubleTake)'' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AMY KEATING ROGERS?!]]ROGERS?!]]
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While not a bad episode in any way, combining Valerie's arc with Danielle's fate squandered the story ideas both had, especially with this being the penultimate episode.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: While not a bad episode in any way, combining Valerie's arc with Danielle's fate squandered the story ideas both had, especially with this being the penultimate episode.
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* RetroactiveRecognition: Oh, so it was written by someone named Amy Keating Rog-- ''(DoubleTake)'' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AMY KEATING ROGERS?!]]
