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* HarsherInHindsight: In Chapter 1, the sword of Crocea Mors gets broken in half by Cinder Fall. Then Season 8 finale of the main series happens.
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* HarsherInHindsight: In Chapter 1, the sword of Crocea Mors gets broken in half by Cinder Fall. Then the Season 8 finale of the main series happens.happens.
* OlderThanTheyThink: There have been other stories that preceeded this one that featured Jaune isekaied into other franchises, its just that most of them were not as developed or even close to finishing before they became dead fics.
* OlderThanTheyThink: There have been other stories that preceeded this one that featured Jaune isekaied into other franchises, its just that most of them were not as developed or even close to finishing before they became dead fics.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Not necessarily their favorite, but the author does consider Artoria to be the most developed character of the fic. Though if the author’s notes are to be believed it was entirely by accident as they didn’t know how to advance the main plot of the Camelot arc and instead padded out the chapters with fluff and character interactions to compensate, which eventually developed the Arc-Toria ship.
* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode: The author considers the Fallout arcs as the best in the fic.
* CreatorsFavoriteEpisode: The author considers the Fallout arcs as the best in the fic.
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* SelfRemake: As mentioned on the main page, it is one to the author’s earlier short story with plenty of AdaptationExpansion. The first chapter of both stories are practically the same.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending), and technically shares another ending with Blake d’Arc, Fate!Velvet and Dovahkiin!Yang in the Chaldea epilogue.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending), and technically shares another ending with Blake d’Arc, Shiro Emiya, Fate!Velvet and Dovahkiin!Yang in the Chaldea epilogue.
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* HarsherInHindsight: In Chapter 1, the sword of Crocea Mors gets broken in half by Cinder Fall. Then Season 8 finale of the main series happens.
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* AntiClimaxBoss: Salem gets hit with this hard in this fic. After beating her up soundly a while before figuring out that she was immortal, one Dragonrend Shout from Dovahkiin!Yang was enough to render her immortality to be void and then crushing her head in a vice grip after said shout.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending), and technically shares another ending with Blake d’Arc and Dovahkiin!Yang in the Chaldea epilogue.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending), and technically shares another ending with Blake d’Arc d’Arc, Fate!Velvet and Dovahkiin!Yang in the Chaldea epilogue.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending).
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioning it was the original planned ending).ending), and technically shares another ending with Blake d’Arc and Dovahkiin!Yang in the Chaldea epilogue.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Remnant!Team CFVY was featured briefly when Jaune accidentally transported himself and Alduin to Remnant, South of Argus, they even got to fight against Alduin before Jaune led him away (they didn’t actually meet with Jaune since he was miles away from their position). They later discovered that Jaune was still alive from footage they managed to capture. This plot line never went anywhere as they never appeared in the story again, though the author notes mentioned they became conspiracy theorists digging into the Fall of Beacon to discover what happened to Jaune.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Remnant!Team CFVY was featured briefly when Jaune accidentally transported himself and Alduin to Remnant, South of Argus, they even got to fight against Alduin before Jaune led him away (they didn’t actually meet with Jaune since he was miles away from their position). They later discovered that Jaune was still alive from footage they managed to capture. This plot line never went anywhere as they never appeared in the story again, though the author notes mentioned they became conspiracy theorists digging into the Fall of Beacon to discover what happened to Jaune.Jaune.
** There was also the fact that the world of Manga/{{Bleach}} was only seen in one chapter, though the author made a "what if scenario" in Chapter 100 detailing a possible idea of where it could have gone.
** There was also the fact that the world of Manga/{{Bleach}} was only seen in one chapter, though the author made a "what if scenario" in Chapter 100 detailing a possible idea of where it could have gone.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioned it was the original planned ending).
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario (with the author mentioned mentioning it was the original planned ending).
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario.
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* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario.scenario (with the author mentioned it was the original planned ending).
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* CrackPairing: Penny Polendina x Liberty Prime, in a what if scenario, where they meet in a “Multiversal Robot Heaven” (which functions like a chat group).
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* CrackPairing: Penny Polendina x Liberty Prime, which was mentioned as a joke in the author's notes of Chapter 36, before receiving a what if scenario, scenario in the final chapter, where they meet in a “Multiversal Robot Heaven” (which functions like a chat group).group).
* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario.
* FanPreferredCouple: It seems that readers were mostly rooting for [[FirstGirlWins Dovahkiin!Yang]] to end up with Jaune, before being evenly divided when [[LastGirlWins Artoria Pendragon]] ended up falling for Jaune. In the end, rather than give a definitive ending, the author simply wrote MultipleEndings and gave each girl an ending with Jaune, though Artoria notably has a second ending in the form of a "What If Jaune Stayed In Camelot" scenario.
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* CrackPairing: Penny Polendina x Liberty Prime, in a what if scenario, where they meet in a “Multiversal Robot Heaven” (which functions like a chat group).
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Remnant!Team CFVY was featured briefly when Jaune accidentally transported himself and Alduin to Remnant, South of Argus, they even got to fight against Alduin before Jaune led him away (they didn’t actually meet with Jaune since he was miles away from their position). They later discovered that Jaune was still alive from footage they managed to capture. This plot line never went anywhere as they never appeared again.in the story again, though the author notes mentioned they became conspiracy theorists digging into the Fall of Beacon to discover what happened to Jaune.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Remnant!Team CFVY was featured briefly when Jaune accidentally transported himself and Alduin to Remnant, South of Argus, they even got to fight against Alduin before Jaune led him away (they didn’t actually meet with Jaune since he was miles away from their position). They later discovered that Jaune was still alive from footage they managed to capture. This plot line never went anywhere as they never appeared again.
